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Posted by: Don, April 15th, 2018, 3:42pm
Till Cake Do Us Part by Cameron Dueker  - Short, Comedy - A jealous baker plots the ultimate revenge against his long lost love on her wedding day. 8 pages - pdf, format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Posted by: DanielW, April 19th, 2018, 6:40am; Reply: 1
Hi Cameron-Buddy,


......ROY
(murmuring)
Fuck you. Thank you. Fuck you.

I thought Roy's comments were quite funny and the highlight of the script.

SUPER: "5 Years Later" -- That appears to be in the wrong place.
Posted by: CameronD, April 23rd, 2018, 1:35pm; Reply: 2
Thanks! Glad you liked it. Roy was fun to write.

I did get a lot of people who didn't like the late SUPER and I should probably go back and change that. I was just thinking on screen of having it appear a little late as a simple stylistic choice. That did not go over well with the readers though, lol.
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