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Posted by: Don, July 27th, 2018, 7:29am

Rebecca's Blue Sky by Steven Clark - Short, Drama - A troubled young woman believes she's carrying the baby of the Devil. 13 pages - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Posted by: DanielW, August 7th, 2018, 6:18am; Reply: 1

Steve,

Well written. It flowed well. The story was okay and I didn't mind the little twist.

Worth reading.

Daniel

Posted by: SAC, August 7th, 2018, 7:05am; Reply: 2

Daniel,

Thanks for the comments. Much appreciated. Received a good amount of feedback on this in a previous posting, so this has been through the ringer so to speak.

Posted by: PabloM, October 25th, 2019, 1:52pm; Reply: 3

Rebecca is sharp and realistic; i bet for it. Reflex of a mind poisoned under the claustrophobic rules and atmosphere of religion. it devastate a mind to slay herself. at least this what haps with Rebecca.

Posted by: SAC, October 25th, 2019, 7:53pm; Reply: 4

Pablo,

Thanks for digging this one up. I appreciate your comments. I just re-read it — it’s been a while. There’s a better ending for this somewhere, some more justification as to why Steve falls in the water. Some deeper meaning that I’m not making clear because it hasn’t come to me yet.

Anyway, thanks for the comments!

Steve

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