Bon Appétit by Barry Katz - Short, Comedy, Family - A jubilant gourmet stops at nothing to please.  1 page - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Barry,

Very cool short film. Kudos to you for being able to pull that off with one page(That makes me want to try writing a one or two page short). I liked the way you described the action when it came to cooking scenes. I could visualize what's going on. I think it's cool that you were really able to convey the story(without dialogue), within that one-page limit.  I  enjoyed reading it.

Matthew Lincoln

P.S. I wrote a short on the site. It's called INESCAPABLE. It's a Sci-fi short, influenced by The Terminator. Could you check it out, and give me some feedback?

Many thanks for the kind words, Matthew... much appreciated! I'm more than happy to take a look at "Inescapable" and will provide feedback as soon as possible. Best of luck with your writing!

;D Very nice. And well written. I wondered where this was going. Was thinking it might turn sour but it was a relief to see it finish in good taste.

Great for a one-pager. Effective commentary too.

A lot jammed in one page - I enjoyed this.

If you named the character after your self, you could title it Katz and Dog.

Nice job.

;D Good one, Dave!

Quoted from LC ;D Good one, Dave!

Gracias