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Posted by: Don, September 23rd, 2018, 6:36pm
Switch and Save by Thomas Butcher - Short, Comedy - A door-to-door salesman is caught up in a very awkward situation. 7 pages - pdf format

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Posted by: eldave1, September 24th, 2018, 3:46pm; Reply: 1
A rough start, Thomas.


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EXT. HOUSE – DAY

A door-to-door salesman speaks to a potential customer.

HOWARD
Good afternoon sir! I’m Howard
from Stone Glass Cable. I’ve been
out and about talking to your
neighbors and they all say the
same thing: cable is too
expensive. I know, it’s not
surprising, a lot of people are
cutting the cord these days, but
we have a promotional offer going
on right now and I think you’ll
find our prices to be
significantly lower than the
competition. That means more of
your money staying in your pocket.
Would you like to learn more?

TONY shrugs.


You must CAP your characters AND introduce, including age and some description, before they speak. The above needs

EXT. HOUSE – DAY

HOWARD (35), plump, dressed in business casual stands at the open front door. TONY (30), disheveled hair, sweat pants and a t-shirt, yawns as he listens to the pitch.

Or something like that.
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