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Posted by: Don, November 1st, 2018, 6:31pm
Lucas by Divij Kak - Short, Sci Fi, Fantasy - Lucas,a half wolf half man alien comes to Earth and mutates into an adult very quickly and kills humans when he feels threatened.Will he be stopped or destroyed by Robert Morton and his team of scientists from Alien Life Force(A.L.F.)? 11 pages

contests: Semi-Finalist HCF Screenplay Competition 2018 - pdf format

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Posted by: Matthew Taylor, November 2nd, 2018, 11:31am; Reply: 1
this can't be serious - Apologies if it is, but I can't take it seriously at all

EDIT:

Turns out this is serious, so now I feel bad. It is so on the nose and nonsensical i assumed it was intentional
Posted by: Logan McDonald, November 9th, 2018, 11:20am; Reply: 2
Hey Divij,
Read some of the scripts on the website. You'll see there's a lot you need to work on. But keep working on it. Practice makes perfect.
Posted by: DivijKak, November 10th, 2018, 7:18am; Reply: 3

  Hi Logan, thanks for reading my script. I will keep working on it.
  - Divij
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