Thanks Dave :)
I knew I could count on you for commenting.
Im glad you liked the idea and want me carry on, that motivates me more to make it better hearing it from you.
I will try to work on the dialogue. I did have another idea, maybe we see Graham leaving a cheque or getting a money inheritance at the start or something and that is the reason she kills him and lets him die, then she takes it and walks out.
thanks for mentioning that format error, no matter how many times you look through it, there is always something you miss.
anyway let me know what you think about that?
Cheers Liam
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