The Time It Takes by Steven Fauquier - Drama - In a small town where children are mysteriously vanishing, a private investigator on the case slowly uncovers a disturbing connection between the missing and his own abduction thirty years prior. 129 pages - pdf format

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Went through the first ten. Writing looks solid.
Kill the two widows on the very first page. Stay consistent with the characters' ages.
If I were you I would work on the characters' descriptions a bit. Introducing Theo -the protagonist- as an African-American (i dislike this btw) kid (and just that), feels lazy. Perhaps it's just me.