What Am I? by Dave - Short, Drama - An old friend returns and Jason is forced to play a game that he started five years ago. 6 pages - pdf format

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You didn't introduce your characters, how old are they, are they male or female? I didn't know if you had made a mistake when you called Val a him, I thought Val was a woman.

How do prison films make it easy to break out?

There are quite a few spelling mistakes and you use "are" where it should be "our"

The idea was pretty good but not very well executed. There was no tension, no fear, drama. All we had were some riddles that were easily solved.

Didn't do anything for me.