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Posted by: PedroS, May 12th, 2020, 4:42am
Title: A Magical Night

Plot: A little talk between two naughty magicians.

Just to get your day started with a smile.

Three page long comedy script a lá Dead Pool humour:

Link:https://www.dropbox.com/s/g8zvg9uepswrg9v/A%20Magical%20Night.pdf?dl=0

All the best,

your friend ThE StOryTelleR
Posted by: eldave1, May 12th, 2020, 5:19pm; Reply: 1
I didn't get it - at all I'm afraid
Posted by: VicBurns, May 13th, 2020, 7:54pm; Reply: 2
I�m sorry, I usually try to be nice - but this was poorly written, juvenile, and in places, offensive.

Pass.
Posted by: PedroS, May 14th, 2020, 4:58am; Reply: 3

Quoted from eldave1
I didn't get it - at all I'm afraid


Hey eldave1 amigo, it's been a while.
Hope you are fine, my friend.
Difficult times :(
Posted by: Arundel, May 14th, 2020, 4:42pm; Reply: 4
Thought some of the dialog was funny. There were dashes of bad grammar throughout, though. Didn't get the description "face like twelve years a slave" (sic). Didn't know what I was meant to be looking at.

What difference does it make that they're magicians? Could be just two guys at a bar. I was picturing Night at the Roxbury types.

Dirty joke material but I for one got a laugh or two.
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