Trust Fall by Dominic Cerasi - Short, Drama - Seeking adventure and excitement, two young men go skydiving. Desperate for a break in the ordinary, they find that living in the most extreme way requires the most dangerous act of all, trust. 14 pages - pdf format

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Well written - very visual. Minor typos. The story got me going from the beginning... A real page turner building up to what I visioned would be a WOW climax! Then, on the last page, an anticlimax.   ??)