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Posted by: Don, September 28th, 2020, 11:37am
Exorcised by Divyansh - Short, Comedy - A priest tries to successfully exorcise a young woman, who doesn't want to let her demon go. 8 pages - pdf format
Writer interested in feedback on this work
Posted by: Fais85, September 28th, 2020, 11:54am; Reply: 1
Divyansh,
Welcome to SS.
Your logline should be...
A novice priest tries to successfully exorcise a young woman who doesn't want to let her demon go.
Your title page should have your name and your contact email.
Type FADE IN before starting the script.
Example;
FADE IN
INT. BEDROOM - DAY
Now,
You have a very good story here. This is a new take on a demon. I liked it.
There are plenty of repetitive things that you can trim and cut down this script to 6 pages. It will be a much better script then.
Good luck with this.
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