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Posted by: Don, December 13th, 2020, 11:23am
as First Glance

Original logline - A jogger in Central Park starts a conversation with a woman that draws his attention.





Posted by: LC, December 13th, 2020, 5:29pm; Reply: 1
Very nice, Steven. You'd be proud of this one.

Playing devil's advocate, the only quibble I had was that I don't think she'd give up her cane to him, but I suppose that's the romantic element.
Posted by: eldave1, December 16th, 2020, 9:17pm; Reply: 2
CONGRATS!

Nice job
Posted by: MarkRenshaw, December 17th, 2020, 8:20am; Reply: 3
Nice!
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