Charon of Vilna by Rimgaudas Pranas Kiliulis - Drama - He did not save Holocaust victims but their gold. 92 pages - pdf format

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After reading through this, i can tell english is not your native language which makes it very hard to understand for english-only people. While i appreciated the historical tidbits and different perspectives of eastern europeans on what happened during WW2 it was all very confusing to an American that is not as well versed in this history. The jumping around in time between scenes only muddied the waters more for me. Furthermore, the use of hyperlinks to passages of books is probably a big, what never to do in a script: internet links are not permanent, they can easily disappear over time; you have to write out what you want the actor to say, not "link" to it. While story twist near the end was surprising the finale fell flat for me. You need to work a lot more on this script.