Murder at Mardi Gras by Nadine - Drama, Thriller - An acquaintance of four friends is murdered during a Mardi Gras night. 73 pages - pdf format

New writer interested in feedback on this work, please be nice :)

Nice story. Looks like these three guys are pinned to each other till the rest of their lives, and hardly they'll be happy with "friendship" like that, especially Dante. As some says "the blood is the best glue ever". But the ending...

Well the author could make another one twist, like Cisco and Space decided to kill Dante, for him becoming too dangerous for them with his i'm-so-sorry-about-all-this-story mode. They would've invite him at some party somewhere outside of the city, just to hang out like a real bros, but Dante would've know somehow what they're planning and of course would've tried to escape. After their failed silent assassination, Cisco and Space hunt poor Dante in the woods, something like "Home Alone" manner but in a serious way! lol Dante survives of course but after his salvation he goes to police and tells the whole truth. He survived for redemption.

However it was fun read. Good luck with writing! ^_^