The Lost and the Damned by Kerim Ljumanovski - Short, Drama - Haunted detective Jace "Jazz" Anderson navigates the murky underbelly of a 1920s city, unraveling a web of secrets that intertwine with his own tormented past. As he delves deeper into the darkness, the line between truth and self-destruction blurs, forcing Jace to confront his inner demons in a relentless pursuit of redemption and justice. In this neo-noir mystery, the lost and the damned collide, revealing the haunting truth that lies beneath the surface. 6 pages - pdf format

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Hello writer

Well you can certainly write with a great use of language to set a very vivid scene and illicit emotion. However for a screenplay you use way too many words to do it.

This is far too prose for a screenplay. Do you write novels or short stories by any chance?