In That Place for Us by Juan Manuel Rojas  - Short, Drama - In a fusion of past memories and futuristic technology, Maxwell, a tormented elder, must confront his deepest fears as he reunites with Alex, a young man battling an incurable illness. Together, they navigate a realm where love transcends time, and forgiveness becomes an unspoken echo. Their extraordinary connection will change the course of both their lives. 8 pages - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Hi Juan,

I can see that something was happening in this script, but to be completely honest I'm not sure what. It was definitely written with confidence and assuredness, and I can see you tried to give us visual clues with the b&w vs color sequences, etc. The dialogue was good.

I'm going to read it again later. Right now, I kinda like it without understanding it. If you're around, and care to explain what you were going for, I'd be interested to hear it.