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Posted by: Don, December 22nd, 2023, 11:32am
Humanity on Display by Nadine - Short, Drama - As a group of diverse strangers are trapped in a museum exhibit. Their shared isolation sparks a series of profound conversations that reveal the complexities of the human condition. 39 pages - pdf format

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Posted by: zi94sm65, December 25th, 2023, 6:45am; Reply: 1
Thought provoking short script. Found one typo: on page 23 word "than" meant to be "that":
PAT
(To Norchelle)
Not to minimise yours and your
friend's bad experiences, but it could
be possible than men may get harassed
in the workplace also.

After the discussion about artificial intelligence in the script I was sort of expecting PAT to be an AI robot trying to learn about humans, but maybe that was just my mind making a jump not intended.
Posted by: frank j, December 26th, 2023, 11:29am; Reply: 2

These types of tough situations usually bring out the truth in us, for good or not. Good story.

I didn't see the lawsuit coming at the end.

Keep on writing.

Frank Dellipoala
Posted by: LC, December 26th, 2023, 7:41pm; Reply: 3
Nadine, I would like to offer you feedback if you're around to discuss.

NB: You need to put your contact details on your script - your email so people can contact you, add the copyright symbol as well (C) and in addition this:

All rights reserved. This screenplay may not be used or reproduced for any purpose including educational purposes without the expressed written permission of the author
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