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Posted by: Don, January 14th, 2024, 2:27pm
The End Of Heartache by Marty Chartrand - Short, Drama - A widowed father turns to bare-knuckle fighting in hopes to ease the pain of losing his wife. 20 pages - pdf format
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Posted by: LC, January 14th, 2024, 10:50pm; Reply: 1
Very nice, very heartfelt. Has a slightly familiar ring to it - Rust & Bone came instantly to mind, and another feature length script on SS about a bare knuckle fighter.
You write very well despite quite a few minor typos.
I thought the seven year gap a bit much before Tommy decides to see the light.
One thing you must do if you want someone to film this is to add your contact details - your email to the title page, and the date and copyright symbol.
I'm happy to say more if you're around. I hope you are. :)
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