Small Detail by Simon Parker - Short, Drama, Thriller - In a race against time, strangers trapped in an elevator must uncover the bomber among them before it's too late, as tensions rise and secrets unravel in this claustrophobic thriller. 6 pages - pdf format

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Oh wow, Simon.  I did not see that coming!  Nicely written script with just the right amount of suspenseful build up to the shocker at the end.  Nice work with this one.  

Saw it coming myself, and wanted more of an ending.
Logline's a bit deceptive too. None of them are aware there's a bomb at all.