The Last Joke by Jed Power - Short, Drama - After the death of their prankster bartender, a close-knit group of friends discover his final joke at his funeral, turning sorrow into laughter and a celebration of camaraderie. 2 pages - pdf format

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This is a cute, touching story. I like it. It ends with a warm, feel-good moment.

I didn't see any typos. The only formatting issues were that you didn't all-caps your characters when they were first introduced. Also, FADE OUT should be on the right. I made that mistake in my first couple of submissions.

You are using Final Draft so I know you are committed and probably experienced.