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I don't think it quite delivered its punch but I did love some aspects. Just the notion of a dispute being solved with Rock Paper Scissors made me chuckle, as did the front page.
Rocky was a very creative creature but also disappointing in terms of what he does etc. to a degree it was style over function, with the story being rather light.
Not my thing in the end, but nice effort and I applaud the difference.
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Inventive, entertaining take on the OWC. While I thought the gore could have been substituted for more of a "Wile e Coyote" approach (where he would have comical accidents while after the Road Runner) so there might be something more kid-friendly. Not suggesting that all animation should be so, but talking animals usually belong in that department.
Wow, super creative. While I'm definitely not your target audience can I have some of whatever it is you're on?
Okay, now I'm going to admit I did start scanning at a certain point. Just not up my alley this type of thing, but well done and full credit for your most splendiferous concoction.
Well - that was different. Well done for what it was - no my particular genre but it did demonstrate the difficulty in writing in this genre.
I got lost a bit here:
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Rocky Sizza is so outraged, he cuts his own head off. Then he bashes his scissor-hand with the stone-hand, which prints out a fresh piece of paper displaying a SMILEY EMOJI.
Ricky has dialogue immediately after this and not sure how he was talking with no head.
How you established those "when-Kitty-is-thinking-images" is awesome. And all those events are also beautifully merging and moving in other happenings right on the damn display as in a high quality cartoon. Soooo funny with a sweet tone and spontanoues, playful plot kids love.
What's going on with you?
One of the best shorts I have ever read, even if it's not my genre. It's brilliant work imo.