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Kill Your Demon - OWC - Filmed! (currently 5537 views) |
Grandma Bear |
Posted: January 30th, 2016, 4:45pm |
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LocationThe Swamp... Posts7961 Posts Per Day 1.36 |
Aha... me thinks me knows who wrote this |
I blabber, don't I? |
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irish eyes |
Posted: January 30th, 2016, 5:05pm |
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January Project Group There`s too much blood in my alcohol
LocationUpstate New York Posts1865 Posts Per Day 0.37 |
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Pale Yellow |
Posted: February 4th, 2016, 9:58pm |
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A special THANKS to Kevin Lenihan, even though he isn't here on the site anymore, he helps me with every piece of writing that I write. He is responsible for a lot of my dialogue too, because he is so kind to not only read for me, but to make really really helpful suggestions. I could not do it without him. Just want to give him credit. He is my go to for everything writing related. |
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PrussianMosby |
Posted: February 4th, 2016, 10:13pm |
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Be so kind and send him some greetings. When I came here, he was always helpful and one of the first people I got into conversation with.
The two personal losses here for me were he and Nick Sedario.
I like Kevin. He's a great person. Diverse and stays his ground. Thanks for the info, Dena. |
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Grandma Bear |
Posted: February 4th, 2016, 10:25pm |
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LocationThe Swamp... Posts7961 Posts Per Day 1.36 |
Loved this one Dena! One of my two RECOMMENDS! |
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Pale Yellow |
Posted: February 4th, 2016, 10:47pm |
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Thank you, Pia. It still needs some work, but was a fun script to write. I just wanted to experiment with a deeper character. And I tried to parallel deeper meanings throughout this script...some were picked up by readers, some not...
Really appreciate all the reads from you guys too...really helps us grow as writers. |
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DanC |
Posted: February 6th, 2016, 8:08pm |
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Old Timer Killing villains since 1980!
LocationBuffalo NY Posts1131 Posts Per Day 0.34 |
Hey Dena, I enjoyed this. Like others have said, I would have liked it more if it was ambiguous as to whether or not he was insane.
I would have enjoyed that more. Just my 2 cents.
As always Dena, if you want an extra set of eyes to read anything, feel free to ask.
I found it compelling and wondered if insane people reason like this.
Best of luck with it!! Dan |
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Pale Yellow |
Posted: February 6th, 2016, 11:49pm |
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Hi Dan.. Thank you so much... you aren't the only one that wanted more info to whether Jon was insane or not but when I wrote this...I wanted that part to sort of be a mind fuck to the reader. There were some deeper veins running through this one that I hoped would make the reader think a little while still being entertained. I may've failed though because it obviously didn't get voted on very much but that's ok...but just to point out some of the things I thought of while writing: This piece is about a guy that's on meds...so WE assume he's mental, right? Well, maybe WE shouldn't be so quick to judge. Also, a preacher is the last person you would think could harbor a demon or even be one...a wolf in sheep's clothing so to speak...so I wanted to toy with that a little. I also told it in a strange tense ...like not many people pointed it out but his VO is like he's telling it after it happened and if that was the case, then he'd be telling it from beyond. Nobody really picked that out, except Kevin, but I chose to leave it this way just a choice I guess. Anyway a little bit how my crazy mind worked while writing this. There was even a quote from Shakespeare in there about the rose....which we all know a rose is beautiful but it has thorns...just my crazy thoughts while writing. Guess it was too deep for most ...reason it didn't get any votes. |
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Pale Yellow |
Posted: January 8th, 2017, 10:40pm |
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KILL YOUR DEMON was filmed over the weekend! In post now and will show on the big screen at the Short Film Showcase at the Sun-Ray Cinema on the 26th of January! I'll post the film link as soon as we are done with edits. I did rewrite the script so it will feel a bit different from this original...as this has become a feature project thanks to SS and all the great feedback. |
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AnthonyCawood |
Posted: January 9th, 2017, 8:16am |
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LocationUK Posts4319 Posts Per Day 1.14 |
Congrats Dena, look forward to seeing it |
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eldave1 |
Posted: January 9th, 2017, 10:47am |
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leitskev |
Posted: January 9th, 2017, 2:19pm |
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Can't wait to see it!
The Dean had over a dozen people come together on this project, which shows again her ability to build a team. Part of that is people want to work with her, but also she has great story sense, and her story really excited people about the project. |
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Grandma Bear |
Posted: January 9th, 2017, 2:58pm |
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LocationThe Swamp... Posts7961 Posts Per Day 1.36 |
I can't wait to see it either. I thought this one was great from the start and I'm sure Dena rewrote it into something even greater. Go Dena! You can do it, just believe in yourself! |
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Pale Yellow |
Posted: January 10th, 2017, 1:40am |
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Thanks you guys! Pia ...you are responsible for giving me guts to try to make this movie. I hope it comes out good... |
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MarkRenshaw |
Posted: January 10th, 2017, 5:37am |
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LocationUK Posts2335 Posts Per Day 0.59 |
Congratulations and well done getting this filmed, looking forward to seeing the finished version. |
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