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Kill Your Demon - OWC - Filmed! (currently 5621 views)
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Posted: January 10th, 2017, 7:19am
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Congrats Dena! Job well done.
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Posted: January 10th, 2017, 7:34pm
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Congrats Dena... Great job
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Posted: January 27th, 2017, 11:31pm
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Warren
Posted: January 28th, 2017, 7:46am
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Congrats in getting it made.
Seems like there are a lot of plot holes, stuff just happens to pull the story along.
And I agree with the last line, how did he know, and why did he kill the other priest?
Just left me confused.
Also the constant looking up at the gunman seemed like an odd thing to do, not very stealthy.
And how did a trained killer who had the shot and advantage let this guy kill the priest?
Edit, just read an earlier post that said this is about a guy on meds so we assume he is mental right. I would assume if he is on meds he would be controlling or at least trying to control his mental illness. Seems like an odd thing to say. It's comments like that that stigmatize mental illness.
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Also, a preacher is the last person you would think could harbor a demon or even be one...a wolf in sheep's clothing so to speak
Had a bit of a chuckle at this, yeah who would ever suspect a preacher to be a wolf is sheeps clothes? Really, we are talking about the church here.
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Posted: January 29th, 2017, 1:19am
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Hi Dena, I love how you used scrabble like the ouija board to confront the demon, and I wonder why the actual film changed so much from the script and completely left the game out. Like many have pointed out the scipt ended leaving the readers wanting, and the film seems to be even lacking in the finale. I still enjoy reading it tho.
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