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Posted: January 4th, 2018, 2:17pm Report to Moderator
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How then does  "get her head blown away" a film-able action.




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How then does  "get her head blown away" a film-able action.


I described the exact picture of her orgasmic and post orgasmic expression


"She clutches the headboard behind. A blush of shame flushes her tender complexion as she ecstatically squeaks.

SAM: Oh, fuck. Yes. Yes.

"One last scream and her moans decrease to deep breaths."


(Then I go into an immediate, objective view on Rosie…)


"Beside the couple lies the lanky brunette ROSIE, 22, uncovered and naked as God made her. She stretches her tanned legs, strokes the nipples of her small breasts while watching Sam get her head blown away."


(Then I even repeated Sam's "post/decreasing" orgasm state nevertheless, "filmable", when going on with):


"Crawling out from under the blanket is Susanna. Her jaded face contrasts starkly with the two baby-faced princesses.

SAM
(breathes)
Oh God. So good. So...

Susanna gives Sam a kiss on the cheek, strokes her neck while Sam, with eyes closed, still breathes hard."


We're on a different page it seems. Sometimes I go with the placeholder in the middle of descriptions, especially if nothing has changed from what I described just before (here it's even exact up to directly following moment).

But you seem to see such things different and that's okay-

@ what I could have possibly done is write it like that ...strokes the nipples of her small breasts while watching THEM.
But that's marginal and superflous to debate about such nonsense




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