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I openly admit that I suck at writing female characters. Hell, I'm not so great at writing male characters either. So if my female characters offend anyone, I'm truly sorry. That was not my intent.
That said, I tried my best and am very proud of what I wrote. I've also enjoyed the majority of what I've read. This has been a fun challenge and I'm really looking forward to seeing who wrote what.
Now if you'll excuse me, I've got some more reading to do.
I'll put it here so it's clear (as I said on the other thread) I'll post feedback on the female writer's entries after the fact, to preserve anonymity, otherwise it'll be too obvious.
I'll put it here so it's clear (as I said on the other thread) I'll post feedback on the female writer's entries after the fact, to preserve anonymity, otherwise it'll be too obvious.
OK...but what about all the dude's scripts? I think I've read 17 and whether or not I read the entire script, as always, I've given pretty detailed feedback. Let's get on it, peeps!!
Hey, I've been reading and commenting since this morning. Give people a chance. Some actually go out and enjoy their lives on the weekend. Not me. But some.
The way I figure, we should all have at least 20 comments at a minimum. If we build they will come.
Yeah, me too Jeffrey. I mean, agreeing with Ashlie that I've been on it. What are you on about? Cool it. This often happens at the start. People generally get to reading when they can. You're just wanting more excitement, I know.
Yeah, me too Jeffrey. I mean, agreeing with Ashlie that I've been on it. What are you on about? Cool it. This often happens at the start. People generally get to reading when they can. You're just wanting more excitement, I know.
Yes...I want alot more excitement. Just saying...weak turn out so far.
Ash, trust me...most scripts will not have nearly 20 comments. They all should, but it ain't gonna happen. Many peeps who enter will comment on 3, maybe 4...some zero or 1. It's usually quite pathetic how peeps don't give out what they get.
I'll be done by tomorrow or Monday, and will comment on every single script, as I always do. If I get 12 comments, I'll be surprised (guess that means I didn't write the Atoll script ).
Yes...I want alot more excitement. Just saying...weak turn out so far.
Ash, trust me...most scripts will not have nearly 20 comments. They all should, but it ain't gonna happen. Many peeps who enter will comment on 3, maybe 4...some zero or 1. It's usually quite pathetic how peeps don't give out what they get.
I'll be done by tomorrow or Monday, and will comment on every single script, as I always do. If I get 12 comments, I'll be surprised (guess that means I didn't write the Atoll script ).
Well, you had western right? Or......... you cheeky so and so!
Wow that was quick, thanks for getting them all up.
I'm out today so not much time to read but I will get through, read and review them all before time is up. And I'll take my time with them, make sure they get a proper read.
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As Mark said, I was also surprised how quick the scripts were online. Jeff, and others: don't forget that Europeans live in a different time zone. The first day is off for me by nature because it's the middle of the night.
Also, I, read OWC scripts differently. I need to work so much to get my ESL in shape, that I need 1 or 2 days off. Also, I firstly tend to read the titles, such an important feature for me, as well as the loglines. I really try to feel those scripts. Sometimes I read one and sleep over it one night and then post my opinion etc.
That's why I always speak up for 2 weeks reading time. Don knows I always beg him for an additional week to review, always. I appreciate guys who push it and read quick but I personal need some time to give a relaxed and clear expertise.