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ReneC
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Maybe he doesn't expect more than 10 scripts, so he threw in the caveat of reading and critiquing up to 10...


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Well - got a draft done


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Well - got a draft done


Yeah me too... I think you can call it a draft, or a turd, either will do.

Actually ended up writing my first idea as well (the one before I understood it was all heard and no visuals), will post it after the OWC.



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Yeah me too... I think you can call it a draft, or a turd, either will do.

Actually ended up writing my first idea as well (the one before I understood it was all heard and no visuals), will post it after the OWC.



Cool. A two-fer


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Maybe he doesn't expect more than 10 scripts, so he threw in the caveat of reading and critiquing up to 10...


I initially read it as you had to read all or at least up to 10 scripts. Looking at it again, I'm not sure what he meant.


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Cool. A two-fer


If only the script I have to submit was as good as the one I don't, this is going to be a bloodbath, the OWC comments section that is.

I'm thinking we all need to be pretty understanding with this batch of scripts.


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Quoted from ReneC
Maybe he doesn't expect more than 10 scripts, so he threw in the caveat of reading and critiquing up to 10...



That is correct.  The moment I say, "Read all scripts," there will be 100 entries.  I wanted to make sure that all the scripts get read, but not impose an undue burden on the writers.

Don


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I'm in, let's do this!


That rug really tied the room together.
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I'm in, let's do this!


Really??? Awesome, haven't read anything from you in forever!



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Sweet! Looks like we've got a pretty good turnout so far.
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I'm in, let's do this!


Welcome@


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Just so I understand correctly, can there be a static background, i.e. we keep the same view through the entire thing? If so I can do that.
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Just think Radio Play/audio only, Mark.
Dialogue heavy + sound effects.
All sound, no visuals.

What do mean by static view?
First I though you meant hearing static.

PK gave an example of the Apple TV audio series, Calls. Check it out, below.
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Calls_(TV_series)

Hope that helps.
Edit: Saw this days later. Don't know why it didn't link correctly. Anyway, everyone gets it now. Thanks, Don.



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What do mean by static view?


I meant that we establish a scene and then stay with that same view there for the rest of the script.

Also, it has to be over black? This really is a challenge...

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Mark, do you mean view or view-point?

The view point could change if the call is transferred for example, or if call-waiting is picked up. Or even if the first caller hangs up, maybe?

As long as it's a conversation between two people only at any given time it's good. Least that was my interpretation.

Of course I could be wrong.
I'll let others weigh in if that doesn't answer your question sufficiently.

From Don:
A conversation between two (or more) people - There can be multiple conversations, but each conversation has to be between two people at a time...


P.S. You could use OVER BLACK, and then perhaps write a sound we hear.
Don's not worried about formatting for this. Do the best you can.

Here's one template I found. There are lots.

http://www.thewritersguide.co.uk/radio.html
Actually that one's not perfect as this challenge is all about the Call.

Just wing it. No-one should pull you up on formatting for this. The dialogue is key imho.



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