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Don
Posted: April 17th, 2021, 11:43am Report to Moderator
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I Can't Get No Satisfaction by Casey Kasem - Short, Comedy - A radio DJ tries his best to give away a cash prize over the air, but the listeners aren't having any part of it. - pdf format

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All I could think about while reading this was WKRP in Cincinnati. Man, I loved that show - especially the episode when they made a contest similar to this when they mixed the first couple notes of like ten songs. Funny stuff.

Anywho, some funny bits here. Very relevant and contemporary. Hard to believe so many younger generations don't know who the Beatles were. Yup, funny bits.

Nailed the parameters too. Not easy to do. Good work, writer.
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Enjoyable fun, and I've certainly heard later night shows like that.

Good effort.


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jayrex
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Cut to three weeks earlier

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I like this one.  I can see this one play out well on radio.  Hits all the right notes and tones.

I'm satisfied.


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I liked this one. I love AT40 and Classic Rock so this hit home for me. Good job.
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Nails the parameters - nicely written and several chuckles.  One of my favs so far.  You squeezed a lot in 4 pages.


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Well written. Funny. My hatred of local radio DJs is secured by this story.
Very well done.


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Funny stuff. Worked for me. Nothing to add.

Except... can I get a FADE OUT? I feel incomplete without it. Thanks!


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Ha! Funny stuff. Pretty much all dialog, and it works great. Only hang up I've got it... Ozzy or Ozzie. Pick one. Good work, writer.
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That was an enjoyable enough little short. Don't really have anything to add. Fun idea, good execution.


That rug really tied the room together.
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This was SUPER up my alley. I love this type of humor.

Great execution, I like how you kept innovating with ways that the callers could annoy. The ramping anger was gold.

This was my favorite, awesome stuff~


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Writer,

Good job. Loved the DJ banter and the clueless callers. Rock aficionados are a bit arrogant in their knowledge of music, but these callers were stupid. Beginning, middle and end -- check. Entertaining -- yes. Nice work, but now totally wow'd.

Steve


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Hi writer,

Very well written and top-notch dialogue.

I enjoyed this one, not much else to add.

All the best.


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That was entertaining and yes, I've heard shows like that.

The only downside to it is how expensive it would be to get permission to use those songs. You'd probably pay more money than all of the other audio scripts in the OWC would cost to produce combined.

Meets the parameters and thanks for the ride!



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Fun piece and really funny dialog.

And don't we all know who wrote it)
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