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Don
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To help in the guessing: There was one team of two and one writer wrote two scripts.

Rene Claveau (ReneC)
David C. Lambertson (eldave1)
R5e (Gum)
Anthony Cawood (AnthonyCawood)
John Staats (JEStaats)
Mark Moore (irish eyes)
Javier Torregrosa (jayrex)
Zack Akers (Zack)
Warren Duncan (Warren)
Steven Clark (SteveClark)
Khamanna Iskandarova (Khamanna)
Claudio Saez (Claudio)
Joe Garza (SPQR)
Rob Herzog (Rob)
Matthew Taylor (Matthew Taylor)
James Barron (MarkItZero)
Mark Renshaw (markrenshaw)
Paul Knauer (PKCardinal)
L. Chambers (LC)
Javier Torregrosa (jayrex)
Dominic Turnbull (Dominic)
Gary Howell (GaryHowell)
Mark Dykshoorn (MarkD)
Owen Herity (Geezis)
Craig Macken (Craig Macken)


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Sweet...

I really have no clue this time, but here goes:

Rene Claveau (ReneC) - Discovery  
David C. Lambertson (eldave1) - Fatal Distraction
John Staats (JEStaats) - I Can't Get No Satisfaction
Zack Akers (Zack) - Off The Record
Steven Clark (SteveClark) - Last Call
Khamanna Iskandarova (Khamanna) - Telling Someone "I Love You"
L. Chambers (LC) - Poor Bastard


Matthew generally nails these.



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I didn’t finish, but what the hell. So far, the only guess I have is Dave for Rigatoni Rigamarole.


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I didn’t finish, but what the hell. So far, the only guess I have is Dave for Rigatoni Rigamarole.


That's a lol

I'm not against that script or anything - just a disclaimer.

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I don't want to state the obvious but Last Call - well I think we all know who wrote that one.

And hey, Stevie didn't write anything? Someone. stepped on his territory with I Can't Get No Satisfaction
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Just want to say, good going, Kham. You and I wrote one for the female contingent! Good on us.

I don't know about guesses.
Will try in a few minutes after looking through again...


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What does Aussie style mean? Do we have to call each other “mate” all the time?
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What does Aussie style mean? Do we have to call each other “mate” all the time?

Yep. And you have to order pineapple on your pizza too. Okay, matey?



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Yep. And you have to order pineapple on your pizza too. Okay, matey?



I ate humus pizza once. Pineapple is ok.

Mate!
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Quoted from Warren
Sweet...

I really have no clue this time, but here goes:

Rene Claveau (ReneC) - Discovery  
David C. Lambertson (eldave1) - Fatal Distraction
John Staats (JEStaats) - I Can't Get No Satisfaction
Zack Akers (Zack) - Off The Record
Steven Clark (SteveClark) - Last Call
Khamanna Iskandarova (Khamanna) - Telling Someone "I Love You"
L. Chambers (LC) - Poor Bastard


Matthew generally nails these.


Claudio’s the expert here.


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Haha, my brain is scrambled on this one.

I have 3 guesses, but I wanna give it some more thought.


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Yes, where's Claudio when we need him?

Warren maybe for Goodbye.
I don't know. This lot is hard.

Maybe Ant for Sin Sation?
Ant probably wrote two - there's a guess I might get right.  

Btw, you can't confirm or deny.



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Quoted from Claudio
Haha, my brain is scrambled on this one. I have 3 guesses, but I wanna give it some more thought.

Ah-ha! Okay, you let us know when you know.  


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Quoted from Warren

Matthew generally nails these.


I think I had a couple of OWC where I got a few good guesses, Claudio seems to have some kind of sixth sense about spotting writers styles.

With a few entries and not much action/description to go on, here are my almost random guesses.

Zack - Goodbye
Anthony - What's your emergency
Gum - SinSation
Claudio - Kittens
Mark Renshaw - The Specimen
J.E Staats - Duty Calls
Dave - Last Call
L.C - Fatal Distraction

These are some sketchy guesses at best

I can tell you with almost 100% certainty that whoever wrote "Thought Police" also wrote "A Fool's Errand"

EDIT: Changed my mind again


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Matt, I don't think you're right on quite a few of those.
Just saying...

I'd like to know who wrote: What's your Emergency?
Just saying there too.



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Quoted from LC
Matt, I don't think you're right on quite a few of those.
Just saying...

I'd like to know who wrote: What's your Emergency?
Just saying there too.



I feel like this is a riddle I don;t understand.

But I assume most of my guesses are wrong, they are basically shots in the dark lol


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Quoted from Matthew Taylor


I think I had a couple of OWC where I got a few good guesses, Claudio seems to have some kind of sixth sense about spotting writers styles."


Personally, I think Claudio does it by the writers commenting on their own scripts.


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I've got Dave down for Fatal Distraction simply because he is that good and that script is going to win.

As for the rest, dunno. I reckon Anthony did a sci-fi one coz he loves his sci-fi like me and it won't have any visual elements in it but I'm stumped.


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I'm gonna add to my guesses and say Jayrex got in the two entries "Thought Police" and "A Fool's Errand"


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Usually I can spot one of Paul's scripts fairly easily, but I think he's disguised himself pretty well this go round.  

I feel fairly certain Mark Moore (Irish Eyes) is "A Period Piece."
Maybe Matthew for "What's Your Emergency?"
Zack for "Off the Record"
Steven for "Kittens"

I need to think about other guesses.


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Quoted from Warren
Sweet...

I really have no clue this time, but here goes:

Rene Claveau (ReneC) - Discovery  
David C. Lambertson (eldave1) - Fatal Distraction
John Staats (JEStaats) - I Can't Get No Satisfaction
Zack Akers (Zack) - Off The Record
Steven Clark (SteveClark) - Last Call
Khamanna Iskandarova (Khamanna) - Telling Someone "I Love You"
L. Chambers (LC) - Poor Bastard


Matthew generally nails these.


and Matthew said Last Call belongs to Dave. What about PK? That's got to be his script
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Only one I'm certain of is Dave for Fatal Distraction. That's a no-brainer.

Oh, and put me down for Gary on Rigatoni. Though, if you told me Last Call, I wouldn't be surprised.


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I will be using powers of deduction based on other people's guesses.

Multiple people said Dave for Fatal Distraction but it doesn't feel like his style at all. Warren would know Dave's writing, yet he was the first to guess it.

Therefore, Warren must've written Fatal Distraction and he's covering his tracks.

BUT - Warren and PK are friends, and he also guessed Dave. The only logical conclusion is that Warren and PK both wrote Fatal Distraction as the sole writer team-up.

Also, Professor Plum killed Mr. Boddy in the library with a candlestick.


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I’m guessing Joe (SPQR) wrote It was a Dark and Stormy since that was the only one he didn’t just comment on!


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I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner
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I feel like that conspiracy guy connecting string to pictures and magazine clippings or something, but there has to be a clue in how some people started with "OVER BLACK" and some didn't.

I'm also thinking eldave for Fatal Distraction.
I'm guessing Ant wrote What's Your Emergency and one more, Specimen?
Gum for Rigatoni Rigamarole?

But, I've never seen all the names like this before, so I think I can piece it together using my trusty spreadsheet...




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Quoted from Claudio

I'm also thinking eldave for Fatal Distraction.


That means you wrote Fatal Distraction too. And I guess Mark Renshaw. You're all in on it somehow!


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I get it now - this one s the thread to find out who’s behind Fatal Distraction!
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I will be using powers of deduction based on other people's guesses.

Multiple people said Dave for Fatal Distraction but it doesn't feel like his style at all. Warren would know Dave's writing, yet he was the first to guess it.

Therefore, Warren must've written Fatal Distraction and he's covering his tracks.

BUT - Warren and PK are friends, and he also guessed Dave. The only logical conclusion is that Warren and PK both wrote Fatal Distraction as the sole writer team-up.

Also, Professor Plum killed Mr. Boddy in the library with a candlestick.


Well you've clearly figured it out  


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Mark my words — Dave wrote Rigatoni Rigmarole. That will be my only guess.


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Mark my words — Dave wrote Rigatoni Rigmarole. That will be my only guess.


According to Mark (who's actually James) you wrote Rigatoni Rigmarole.

Ok, that's sorted.

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According to Mark (who's actually James) you wrote Rigatoni Rigmarole.

Ok, that's sorted.



After checking Rigatoni, the wise Steven Clarke is clearly right. Dave wrote it. I was starting to doubt my theories but now I know to keep listening to the voices.


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Quoted from khamanna
What does Aussie style mean? Do we have to call each other “mate” all the time?


Khamanna,

"Australian Rules" in this context just means that I keep forgetting that Australia is 12 + or - 2 hours ahead of Eastern Daylight Time, so when I say, we can do something on the 21st and I open it up on the 20th, it's because in Australia it is the 21st and I've neglected to be specific on time zones which every board member from Australia (and New Zealand and my brother-in-law) likes to remind me of.  

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After checking Rigatoni, the wise Steven Clarke is clearly right. Dave wrote it. I was starting to doubt my theories but now I know to keep listening to the voices.


I've finished all the scripts and I am amending my guess...

I now believe it is Dave who has the two entries. Rigatoni Rigmarole and Vacuum.


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I'm still betting on Ant having the two entries.

Can't for the life of me work out what the second one is though, and I often have him sussed.

Oh, and thanks, Don! We down-under appreciate it.
I bet your brother-in-law got converted to pineapple on pizza. Still, Kiwis have their own rules.

Hummus on pizza, Kham? Bit exotic for my taste.


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Quoted from Matthew Taylor



I can tell you with almost 100% certainty that whoever wrote "Thought Police" also wrote "A Fool's Errand"



Just had a look at both and yeah that's definitely correct.



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I'm still betting on Ant having the two entries.



Based on the evidence I find this to be extremely unlikely.


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Quoted from Don

to be specific on time zones which every board member from Australia (and New Zealand and my brother-in-law) likes to remind me of.  



ugh. Australians
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I've come to conclusion that Dave has written all the scripts, including mine, using his multiple personalities.


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I've come to conclusion that Dave has written all the scripts, including mine, using his multiple personalities.


Well, he did say he couldn’t take part in quite a few of OWC’s...
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If Dave wrote mine I would be very disappointed in him.


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Not very good at the guessing game, but I'll take a shot.

Dave - Last Call
Paul - Fatal Distraction
John Staats - I Can't Get No Satisfaction
Rene - Desperate Times
Warren - Kittens
Libby - Soulchat
Anthony - Goodbye

That's all I got. This was a really fun challenge.
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Quoted from MarkRenshaw
I've come to conclusion that Dave has written all the scripts, including mine, using his multiple personalities.


i'd like to see him write mine. That way I could see what it could be if it reached its full potential.

In fact, that should be the next challenge. Everyone chooses one script for Dave to rewrite.

His best finishing script gets writer's choice and the original writer gets a mug.

Who's in?


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i'd like to see him write mine. That way I could see what it could be if it reached its full potential.

In fact, that should be the next challenge. Everyone chooses one script for Dave to rewrite.

His best finishing script gets writer's choice and the original writer gets a mug.

Who's in?


I've got a better shot of getting a mug like that, so I'm in!!!  
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Warren - Kittens


I had thought for sure Warren wrote Kittens but his review of his own script changed my mind. I'm basing everything on vague things people said cuz that's what Sherlock Holmes would do.

Other ones:

Matthew Taylor - A Protocol (because he said his script was misunderstood).
Libby - Home Call (she said her script could work as a Calls episode).
Zack - Goodbye (was quiet, means he wrote a great script).
Craig Macken - Whichever script violated a rule (cuz his script violated a rule).
Khamanna - Telling someone "I love you" (cuz she once ate hummus pizza).


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Khamanna - Telling someone "I love you" (cuz she once ate hummus pizza).


Can't fault the logic here.
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Dave - Poor Bastard
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Matthew - A Protocol  (for being very misunderstood)
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Dave - Poor Bastard

I totally agree with that
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Mark Renshaw - Off The Record


That's my guess too.


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I've got Dave down for Fatal Distraction simply because he is that good and that script is going to win.

As for the rest, dunno. I reckon Anthony did a sci-fi one coz he loves his sci-fi like me and it won't have any visual elements in it but I'm stumped.


First - thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What a nice compliment

Second - no, sadly. I did not write that or anyone that is going to win, show or place.


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I will be using powers of deduction based on other people's guesses.

Multiple people said Dave for Fatal Distraction but it doesn't feel like his style at all. Warren would know Dave's writing, yet he was the first to guess it.

Therefore, Warren must've written Fatal Distraction and he's covering his tracks.

BUT - Warren and PK are friends, and he also guessed Dave. The only logical conclusion is that Warren and PK both wrote Fatal Distraction as the sole writer team-up.

Also, Professor Plum killed Mr. Boddy in the library with a candlestick.


Brilliant analysis! - Other than this must mean that

YOU WROTE FATAL DISTRACTION!  ---- (INSERT EVIL LAUGHTER HERE)


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Brilliant analysis! - Other than this must mean that

YOU WROTE FATAL DISTRACTION!  ---- (INSERT EVIL LAUGHTER HERE)


OMG. It all makes sense now. The call is coming from INSIDE the house!


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I will not guess who wrote what as I am simply not that good at guessing.


If at first you don't succeed........bribe someone.
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I will not guess who wrote what as I am simply not that good at guessing.


Is that code for "I wrote fatal distraction"?


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Is that code for "I wrote fatal distraction"?


That's a reveal too far  


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I did not write that


It's all coming together my dear Watson. Simple deductions. One might say... elementary.


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I deleted that cause I sounded like a killjoy.
Just go easy on the All-caps.


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I did not write that or anyone that is going to win, show or place.


Why would you say that? Poor Bastard is one of the best.
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I sounded like a killjoy.

Yeah, such a killjoy, mate
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Libby, killjoy???

I now wonder what it is I missed!


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Haha! Thanks, Ant.
I was just being pedantic about rules and shouting.
Nothing to see here.

My mate, Kham put me in my place.  


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Why would you say that? Poor Bastard is one of the best.


I said I didn't write anyone that is going to Win, Show or Place and Poor Bastard is going to.

Kham - I have never written a Sci-Fi so I know this is not me - or..... is it and I broke out of my box??????

No - not me.  If you want to guess my script think of something in the C+ grade category


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Writer's Choice isn't being announced until tomorrow? Ugh. I hate waiting.  
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I said I didn't write anyone that is going to Win, Show or Place and Poor Bastard is going to.

Kham - I have never written a Sci-Fi so I know this is not me - or..... is it and I broke out of my box??????

No - not me.  If you want to guess my script think of something in the C+ grade category


Yours is either Desperate times or Kittens. Or maybe both. Both are Excellent scripts in my opinion although I don’t remember what I gave Kittens, whether it’s a vg or E
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Yours is either Desperate times or Kittens. Or maybe both. Both are Excellent scripts in my opinion although I don’t remember what I gave Kittens, whether it’s a vg or E


Nope - I liked both of those - Kittens one of my favs.

I did not especially like what I wrote - think mediocre.


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aren't all the votes in now?  I assume if someone outs themself it's not a big deal?


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Quoted from Gary in Houston
aren't all the votes in now?


Are they?
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They were due yesterday, so thought they ought to be in by now.  

So I wrote ---

[tackled by Libby before sentence can be finished]


Some of my scripts:

Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly
I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner
The Gambler (short) - OWC winner
Skip (short) - filmed
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Writer's Choice isn't being announced until tomorrow? Ugh. I hate waiting.  


But I still need time to build that memory eraser thing from Men in Black for when all my wild guesses turn out to be horribly wrong.


That rug really tied the room together.
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Quoted from Gary in Houston
They were due yesterday, so thought they ought to be in by now.  

So I wrote ---

[tackled by Libby before sentence can be finished]


Rigatonni. We know. I already said that.


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On a side note... it sure is nice to see script comments in the 20s for almost every script.

Good job all!


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Quoted from PKCardinal
On a side note... it sure is nice to see script comments in the 20s for almost every script.

Good job all!


Agreed! Group participation was excellent this time out. Think it has anything to do with the low page count?
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Agreed! Group participation was excellent this time out. Think it has anything to do with the low page count?


Yes. And for the most part it was mostly dialog. I think dialog is easier to read and comprehend
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As to a challenge in the future, I think it might be interesting to have a 24 hour 1-2 page challenge.  24 hours to get your entry in, 24 hours to review and then the reveal 24 hours later.  


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I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner
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Don put a disclaimer about reviewing at least 10, I think that's the first time he's done that? Might've helped with review numbers. Also, the fact that it was mostly regulars.


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Quoted from MarkItZero
Don put a disclaimer about reviewing at least 10, I think that's the first time he's done that? Might've helped with review numbers. Also, the fact that it was mostly regulars.


Who are you calling regular?


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Who are you calling regular?


I dunno, anyone who's name I recognize I guess. But we got some new blood too and they definitely participated. Which is great. 20 reviews on most scripts so pretty much everyone participated this time.


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Mark, I may be wrong, and if so I accept I'm gonna look an idiot... but I think Rene was being funny... regular as in bowel movements


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Ohhh. Lol. I've been out of it today. Got my second shot and it's made me tired as hell.


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Mark, I may be wrong, and if so I accept I'm gonna look an idiot... but I think Rene was being funny... regular as in bowel movements


I thought he meant �regular� as in trivial and bland. It�s hard to read Rene. Maybe he wrote that Protocol


Hey points for calling James Mark (winking face)
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I thought he meant �regular� as in trivial and bland. It�s hard to read Rene. Maybe he wrote that Protocol


Hey points for calling James Mark (winking face)


I was referring to my lack of trivial and bland bowel movements.


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They were due yesterday, so thought they ought to be in by now.  

So I wrote ---

[tackled by Libby before sentence can be finished]

Did you hear that thud?
That was indeed Gary going down.  

Btw, nice glamour Spring/Summer shot, Kham.

P.S. You've all waited this long.
Maybe stay Mum/Mom? Makes it more fun imho to see the whole list revealed.

If you want results revealed early you'll have to yell at Don... nicely of course.

After all in Australia it's already the morning of the 25th.


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After all in Australia it's already the morning of the 25th.


We sure are, and it is Australian rules.

Lest we forget.



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It would be fun to hear some hints and see if we can guess better
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Quoted from khamanna
It would be fun to hear some hints and see if we can guess better


Mine had the sound of something hitting something in response to something else or something like that.  Is that too much of a giveaway?


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25th in Blighty now too... patience isn't one of my virtues


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Quoted from Warren


We sure are, and it is Australian rules.

Lest we forget.



Lest we forget, indeed.

A Jet just did a flypast roaring overhead a few minutes ago. Wow.



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Quoted from Gary in Houston


Mine had the sound of something hitting something in response to something else or something like that.  Is that too much of a giveaway?


Yes. it also didn't have any visuals and was all about the dialog.
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It would be fun to hear some hints and see if we can guess better


There is no blood visible in my script. Only hint I've got.
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I only submitted one entry this time, Don made me and then let someone else get 2 in... all bets are off for next challenge


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I seriously think that Don decided to have a life
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Quoted from khamanna
I seriously think that Don decided to have a life


Meaning, you wrote What's Your Emergency, with Libby.    
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Who are you calling regular?


And Rene wrote A Period Piece.

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There is no blood visible in my script. Only hint I've got.

That must be a first.  




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Quoted from Craig Macken


And Rene wrote A Period Piece.


I saw what you initially wrote there (grin)
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Quoted from Craig Macken


And Rene wrote A Period Piece.


On second thought, it was Zack.
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What if Don won't tell us who wrote what before we crack it ourselves
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What if Don won't tell us who wrote what before we crack it ourselves

You'd better start stomping your feet.
Don's probably watching the tele, just ignoring us.

I personally think this one's hard to crack but it's one of the more entertaining 'Guess Who Wrote What' threads I've read, that's for sure.  



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They called off Telling Someone I Love You. Either that or the writer didn’t contribute to reading maybe
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Quoted from khamanna
They called off Telling Someone I Love You. Either that or the writer didn’t contribute to reading maybe


Good catch. Guessing the writer didn't read the required amount.
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It would be fun to hear some hints and see if we can guess better


Mine had some visuals in and was a homage to something.


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My clue is that my entry sucked but someone has already guessed that a really good writer wrote it, so I'm happy with that lol


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Mine had some visuals in and was a homage to something.


Matt says you wrote the Specimen. Warren says Matt knows these things. Libby says it’s Claudio who knows but Claudio is silent. So we listen to Matthew!
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My clue is that my entry sucked but someone has already guessed that a really good writer wrote it, so I'm happy with that lol


Yours is harder bc you said what Mark wrote but you didn’t say what you wrote. Off The Record maybe?
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Matt says you wrote the Specimen. Warren says Matt knows these things. Libby says it’s Claudio who knows but Claudio is silent. So we listen to Matthew!


Matt might be losing his writer guessing reputation when this is over


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Warren - Desperate Times

I can't believe it's not gonna win btw (oh, not win, cos it's not a competition. come first or whatever I mean)
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Lol Zack, and did you write A Fool's Errand?

Also, Matt says Libby wrote Fata Distraction. Steven says Claudio looks at the comments. Hey I looked at the comments - Libby didn't comment on that one! Coinsidence.

Come on people. Don wants us to crack it ourselves. Either that or he wants us to pick up a fight here. I don't believe he's just enjoying a TV an having a life
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I think Dave wrote himself into existence and is living his own screenplay.


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Quoted from khamanna
Come on people. Don wants us to crack it ourselves. Either that or he wants us to pick up a fight here. I don't believe he's just enjoying a TV an having a life


What’d you have, like, three double espressos this morning?


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Three highest scores should have a write off. If you wanna make it interesting. You know, for fun and games/bragging rights.


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Quoted from khamanna
Lol Zack, and did you write A Fool's Errand?



It's a possibility... But I doubt it.  
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Quoted from Matthew Taylor


I think I had a couple of OWC where I got a few good guesses, Claudio seems to have some kind of sixth sense about spotting writers styles.

With a few entries and not much action/description to go on, here are my almost random guesses.

Zack - Goodbye
Anthony - What's your emergency
Gum - SinSation
Claudio - Kittens
Mark Renshaw - The Specimen
J.E Staats - Duty Calls
Dave - Last Call
L.C - Fatal Distraction

These are some sketchy guesses at best

I can tell you with almost 100% certainty that whoever wrote "Thought Police" also wrote "A Fool's Errand"

EDIT: Changed my mind again





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I'm gonna add to my guesses and say Jayrex got in the two entries "Thought Police" and "A Fool's Errand"


7 correct, 3 wrong... Not too bad


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Oh wow, Matt. If We are both around next time we should guess against each other. I’ll remember to challenge you. And I don’t understand why they praise Claudio. He didn’t even make one guess
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Quoted from Matthew Taylor







7 correct, 3 wrong... Not too bad


I don't know how you do it, Matt! Is it my trademark typos or something?


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Quoted from Matthew Taylor







7 correct, 3 wrong... Not too bad


No clue how you managed to spot me this time. You're a wizard, Harry... or are ya' a hairy wizard?
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Quoted from MarkRenshaw


I don't know how you do it, Matt! Is it my trademark typos or something?


Most writers have tells in their writing (format, style choices, sentence structure, word choices), and some I guess based on the story alone. Yours is one of the ones I guess based on story and I was quietly confident you put out a good sci-fi.


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No clue how you managed to spot me this time. You're a wizard, Harry... or are ya' a hairy wizard?


Yours is the first I guess as you have a tell... not gonna say what it is incase you change it lol


There should be a prize for most correct guesses. Nothing as prestigious as a mug... a Simply Scripts napkin or something  


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I nearly forgot to not comment on so many in a strategic move so I didn't give the game away.

Next time I'm paying more attention.  I can't bear to comment on my own script. I just don't do it well.

Do I have a 'tell', Matt, that you've sussed?
Just curious.


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I don't look to see who has/hasn't commented on a script to work out the writer... feels a boring way to guess and time-consuming.

You do have a tell but the tell isn't enough as other writers have the same one, so guessing yours is a combination of if the "tell" is present and the story itself.

Anthony's is strange, I can't put my finger on what it is but as soon as I read it I'm like "Yup, Anthony wrote this"

Warren and Dave are annoyingly hard to guess sometimes.

Some other regulars I haven't sussed what the tell is yet, but I will lol


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Every time I do a challenge, I feel like mine's obvious and should be an easy guess.

I usually have good luck guessing Zack's and Paul's entries. Zack's entry this round seemed out of his normal comfort zone but, after the reveal, has many tells.
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I have several tells. Though, I try and write around them.

Also, I notice certain phrases that I'm obviously comfortable with. I've even caught myself repeating jokes, only adjusted for character/story.


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I don't really vary my writing style particularly, but have found (like with this one), that if I move to a genre I rarely write in then it helps disguise it.

I have tried altering fonts, format and even switched to Trelby once... but that doesn't seem to stop Matthew and usually Libby too from spotting mine.

I'm doing it in Word next time.


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Quoted from AnthonyCawood

I'm doing it in Word next time.


I guess we know which one will be Anthony's!


Some of my scripts:

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Mine will be in bold Wingdings.


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Quoted from MarkRenshaw
Mine will be in bold Wingdings.


Mmmm. Sounds delicious. Love me a good Wingding.


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