Lol, I hear you! The funniest one was Tugg Speedman, Action Hero:


"... and no one saw it coming 5 more times, here we go again... again"

Well this was a fun script, had some laughs and played out as a good comedy. There's a few typos but nothing glaring as to take you out of the story.

I thought the pliers were going to make another appearance as you had set them up, but they didn't make another appearance.

Overall this was good script, I would've liked to see Melvin be the hero in the story and actually get to press the button, as he was just a punching bag for his brother and everyone underestimated him. It would've brought a good resolution to his character arc and made the story more fulfilling.

Instead he gets hauled away by the ambulance and misses his moment of glory. Maybe he could've fought off the paramedics and pulled the lever himself? Just a thought.

Best of luck.