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Blakkwolfe
Posted: August 5th, 2008, 6:02pm Report to Moderator
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Quoted from Souter Fell
Did ya really rush to see sea turles? That's adorable.



That's entirely true. My mother in law is a "turtle watcher" down here on Anna Maria Island. We were at the beach, chillin out when she got the call that 70 turles were going to be released at 8:30 pm...on Friday. My 9 year old, who LOVES, turtles was so excited he could barely stand it...I was gonna skip out early an try to finish my last revision, grab my camera and tripod and try to run back in time...That wasn't gonna happen...But it was excellent to see 70 of those little buggers crawl along the sand into the waves..

So, unfortunatley the last act of Mercy suffered a bad case of premature ending, but we were all psyched about the turtles...

Thanks to all for all the comments and thoughts. I appreciate it greatly.

Yeah, I will revisit this...I can't let Mercy get away with it this time....



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Yes Joseph! Go see the baby sea turtles-- that's special!
Doing that kind of thing is important too.

What I especially noticed about this one were the strong visuals.
It was only at the end that I felt it really started to suffer.

It's funny how some of us could sense that sense of rushing as you headed
into the stretch.

I think that the script was just getting going and then it was wrapped up.

I can see this one going a long way. This was just a sprint, and Mercy,
I'm sure, will go the distance!

Sandra






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Sandra Elstree.
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I'm bumping this one up because I think Joseph deserves it.

Sandra



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my homage to a most enjoyabel read...i reference it often when writing...thanks for the submission...like the turtles, what's below the surface is usually the most interesting...thanks again...

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I'll start with saying this was fantastic.  Very gripping with excellent scene descriptions and characters fleshed out just enough for a short piece.  You can always tell when you like a piece when you want more after finishing.


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Cool! I'm glad you liked it...I'm currently working on building on this...Of course, she becomes a stripper, gets involved with the wrong bunch of guys and totally screws up her "Uncle Joey's" efforts to get away from the Mob...

Thanks for reading!

t. joe


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