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I'll give you a hint on mine. I actually originally had written Part One, but then when I saved it into one of its many evolutions, I lost the part with "Part".
I actually wrote Part Two First, which was supposed to be Part One, but then I was struck by... By a craving for a big bowl of...
I'll give you a hint on mine. I actually originally had written Part One, but then when I saved it into one of its many evolutions, I lost the part with "Part".
I actually wrote Part Two First, which was supposed to be Part One, but then I was struck by... By a craving for a big bowl of...
...of salad.
Sandra
That's almost as good a hint as having your name on the script.
I think that these ones are the most professional and polished:
The Family Name
Love Letters
The Ballad of Uncle Sam
Delivery: I think this one, though it needs to morph into a script is a good story and I like the writer's personality:
I thought both Mercy and Stolen Santa have a lot of potential to be feature lengths.
I think The Broken Locker, though written by a young inexperienced writer has a lot of young energy and the creative idea can be felt within despite the typical mistakes in all young writing.
I loved the creative idea within Return Service Requested.
Postal could be an excellent psychological thriller if developed.
I still have several others to read, but this certainly hasn't been a boring challenge. There have been some common stereotypes running through with the apparently mundane life of a postman; but maybe we'll all be stimulated by this and encouraged to write about a postman who lives a fulfilled life.
PS I've heard of people talking to themselves but I might be the first who has posted to himself. My friends have always said I'm not quite right. Gonna be tough to defend myself after this pathetic display.
Just a word of thanks to everyone supporting this edition of the OWC...Read all the scripts and, for the most part, they were all pretty enjoyable...Hope some of the newer writers will take the critiques to heart, and just know that honesty builds better writers and that's how you learn...Suggest printing out all your critiques, and pin them up on the wall. This is valuable input and will help you in the future...Do work on a rewrite. Got to put that knowledge to work for wnext time...
Favorites? Liked different ones for different reasons, although am rather disappointed that NO ONE managed to insert zombies into the story line...(Where was the severed zombie head that was delivered to the wrong address? The guys at the post office...)
Common error was the missing of proper character introductions...
Got a couple guesses...Sandra might have done Yuley, New Guy did Red Eye (but he has left other reviews)...on board with Pia doing Love Letters (remind me to get slightly tipsy next time I want to write something)...Cornetto seems a good match with the Family Name...Guessing Tim Betts might have done Uncle Sam (good action with super villians...) Stebrown-All eyes, maybe ...Zombie Sean- Postal...Cindy may have done registered delivery. Mercy? Not the foggiest idea...
Favorites? Liked Love Letters, Family Name and Postal...
Good show, ya'll.
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Favorites? Liked different ones for different reasons, although am rather disappointed that NO ONE managed to insert zombies into the story line...Stebrown-All eyes, maybe ...
My original did feature a werewolf if that counts. As for your guess...I've said too much already.
My original did feature a werewolf if that counts.
HELL YEAH, that counts! Werewolves, zombies and vampires...all good regardless of the genre, if you do it right...Example?
ELIZABETH Oh, Charles...My Dear...My furry love...Oh, my heart would still burn for you forever! Hot with the passion of a thousand exploding suns...regardless of the frequent maimings and seemingly random evicerations...Oh, Kiss Me Charles! Kiss me now, kiss me...forever. Kiss Me...Deadly!
CHARLES AWROOOOO!!!
See?
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