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I agree. I'm going to stick to commenting on whether a story works for me. Btw, 'pisstake' is the correct term, i.e., 'taking the piss' (not to be confused with, taking the piss out of) - just ask Stevie but of course like a lot of things it morphed into straight micturition. Bet you're happy I commented on that. I'd like to suggest also, if you 'can't get past the first line/page/paragraph - 'I'm out' that comment is so boring to read. Not commenting at all imh is the better option. It gets annoying and boring and is in no way constructive to the writer.
Yes, this, so much this! It gets me when someone posts “ORPHANS ON THE FIRST BLOCK! TERRIBLE SLUGLINES, PAGE 1 AND I’M OUT!” If you are out and have nothing to contribute, just don’t comment. These are vomit drafts and things like format and typos can be fixed with a polish, if the plot and characters just are not working the writer needs feedback as to why and maybe even a few suggestions to fix the story.
Hey all, Greenhorn Rookie here, both on the SS board and in the script writing world. I came across this site and challenge randomly yesterday and thought this would be a solid way to practice the script writing skills and pick the brains of the rest of you on here. I submitted my own rough first go at this. I wasn't quite sure as to how to approach the "Classic Monsters" as classic to me is the Freddy, Jason, Leatherface time era that I grew up watching, but I threw in a hodge podge of different Classic Monsters. Hope it works, but I look forward to anyone's constructive and helpful critiques and certainly look forward to reading everyone else's work.
Hey Zac, welcome to the magically weird and whacky world of Simply Scripts. Get ready for some honest, brutal but (hopefully) constructive feedback. And just remember the ‘rules’ of the challenge, it has to be low budget and only have one good make-up effect. If you mix a load of classic monsters together you may blow those rules out of the water. Best of luck and I hope you enjoy the experience! -Mark
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