Quoted from rendevous But Blondie, every published writer knows you gotta ask someone else to read it who you respect. Find out what they like. There's no other way of knowing. Not me, I'm reading Yeaster's and I owe six billion people reads. You know the craic. Keep on keeping on.

I know that, but I need more room than the 10 pages. Not to ruin anything, but without the extra pages, I can't properly explain what's going on and I guarantee someone would think what's happening involves zombies. Granted, I love my "zambehs", but it's not them.

I know that, but I need more room than the 10 pages.

No, you don't. Edit. You can do it. Go on, do it. You can. I know it and so do you.

Get it done. Read it. Submit it. You can. Believe it.

R xo

Quoted from Mr. Blonde I know that, but I need more room than the 10 pages. Not to ruin anything, but without the extra pages, I can't properly explain what's going on and I guarantee someone would think what's happening involves zombies. Granted, I love my "zambehs", but it's not them.

I've about at least three, maybe four possible stories with this scenario.
I understand some stories are really just scenes, while others are vignettes and then there are the 2hr+ epics and trilogies just dying to be birthed.
You gotta pick another story to fit within the given confines.

Quoted from RayW Does he scream? The GingerBread Man? Bleed? Does he summon gingerbread hordes to pour from the oven of Hades then surround and eat the flesh from the bones of the GBM biter?

Yes.
Yes.
No. He is the only seen human-sized Gingerbread Man out of the massive brick oven; the witch snaps off a piece of him and takes a nibble.

All the OWC's I've been in for the last 2 years had a 12 page max.

Not making a criticism or anything just an observation.

Quoted from stevie All the gay bars I've been in the last 2 years had a 12 inch max, which wasn't an issue for me. Not making a criticism or anything just an observation.

Stevie, stick to the subject, damnit!  We don't want to hear about your personal life.

Quoted from Mr. Blonde I know that, but I need more room than the 10 pages. Not to ruin anything, but without the extra pages, I can't properly explain what's going on and I guarantee someone would think what's happening involves zombies. Granted, I love my "zambehs", but it's not them.

Sometimes in horror, leaving a few things unexplained is a lot better. Over-explaining can be a bigger problem. If you feel you need to have one, hit it and move on.

Quoted from mcornetto I can see it now. There's these three zombies, see, and they're in this abandoned house.  One of them is holding a beer and the other says...

"I like a frosty can of Bra-a-a-ains Traditional Welsh Ale."

Sorry I'm late with this one.


Phil

Quoted from Dreamscale Stevie, stick to the subject, damnit!  We don't want to hear about your personal life.

I'll pay that one buddy, even though you again contravened the International Fuck With Quotes rules!  

Sorry, couldn't help myself...had to cheat a bit.

Murphy,

Thanks for sending yours over to me. Just read it.

I won't give anything away but WOW......

Off the charts my friend. Really.....Well Done!!!!

That's right up my alley, style wise.

Shawn......><

P.S I now see what you mean about the RAT. My apoligies.

I'll have something to submit. I like bits of it, and overall I think it'll be okay, but I'm going to take the cheap route of thinking that even finishing a script is a victory in itself.

Regardless of how shit it is.

I'm eager to have someone give mine a read.  I'm not sure I can wait until Sunday.

Quoted from JonnyBoy I'll have something to submit. I like bits of it, and overall I think it'll be okay, but I'm going to take the cheap route of thinking that even finishing a script is a victory in itself. Regardless of how shit it is.

Not cheap at all, a finished script is a victory! Even if it is shit, which I doubt it really is. As Mr C. said, we are all winners here. Getting a script finished in a week is an achievement.

Quoted from mcornetto I'm eager to have someone give mine a read.  I'm not sure I can wait until Sunday.

you can email me yours if you want Mr C.