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I can't compete with what she brings to... the table.
And, indeed they do. They have no idea. Shh! Don't tell 'em!


Your secret's safe with me. Thankfully the lasses are alright. You wouldn't catch them worrying about Rooney or where the oil goes in the car. Or even if it's diesel or petrol. Does it really matter? Please turn the immersion and boiler off, darling. How much? How many shoes do you need?

Er, I'm going now RW, before I get lynched again.

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rendevous, I noticed you mentioned somewhere in this thread that you hate writing straight-forward scripts. Well that definitely comes across here. Not really sure what's going on in this piece, will have to give it another read. The title initially pulled me in, I thought giving it a sequel name without it really being a sequel was awesome, till I noticed you put up the link to the first Tomorrow. I'll check that out as well, curious to see how this started.


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I read this after reading tomorrow and was assuming this would be something similar with terrorist attacks.

The dialogue was very well written with good interaction between all the characters. I liked the olde irish charm thrown in. However I couldn't really see where you were going with this. It felt like a clipping from a bigger piece, but I didn't know where from or where it was going.

Still enjoyable and well written and if there's a tomorrow 3 then I'll definetley read, maybe fill in some of the gaps.

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DB,

How's Rodders and Grandad? Or Uncle. During the war...

I had some characters and thought it'd fit in to an OWC. Thank you for the comments.

I'll take the "clipping from a bigger piece" as a compliment. I like that idea.

Hugh will return in Tomorrow III. He'll be going bak home with Matilda. They may waltz.

Thanks, will return.

I've got about forty odd to read. I'm never gonna get to read The Guardian today.

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rendevous, I noticed you mentioned somewhere in this thread that you hate writing straight-forward scripts. Well that definitely comes across here.

Not really sure what's going on in this piece, will have to give it another read. The title initially pulled me in,



Sorry, missed this comment earlier. Many thanks. In me humble there are way too many straight forward films and tv shows made. Seeing as The Sopranos, The Wire, Mad Men and Inception are amongst the most propular and innovative visual entertainment about I try to lean towards them.


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I thought giving it a sequel name without it really being a sequel was awesome, till I noticed you put up the link to the first Tomorrow. I'll check that out as well, curious to see how this started.


A band once did that with their first album. A neat trick. Mind you, the album bombed. Never mind.

TI's a lot different. TIII will make things a little clearer. Or perhaps not. Thanks for the read, CS.

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