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Posted: October 19th, 2010, 9:04pm Report to Moderator
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This is becoming obsessive compulsive...
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Don
Posted: October 19th, 2010, 9:10pm Report to Moderator
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All the scripts have yet to be posted.  Please be patient.  If you submitted one and only one script, you script will be posted.  

Apologies for not setting expectations better.  

Don


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Guys, they'll be in the last batch, particularly if you submitted them late (not after the deadline late, just late in the week late. Not late late, just late. Late). Mine's in there too.

Advance warning: mine isn't very good. I nearly didn't submit, before deciding to adopt a "better to have an entry than nothing" position. That's not to say that it isn't an enjoyable six pages, just that I already know the comments it'll get.

So yeah, I'm patiently waiting for my beating!

EDIT: What Don said, basically. Minus the endearing self-deprecation.


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mcornetto
Posted: October 19th, 2010, 9:14pm Report to Moderator
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I'll save time and give Jonny his comments now.

Story was very usual. Nothing new.  Characters were sterotypical.  At six pages you have no excuse for not expanding things.  Good job but it needs work.
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Quoted from mcornetto
I'll save time and give Jonny his comments now.

Story was very usual. Nothing new.  Characters were sterotypical.  At six pages you have no excuse for not expanding things.  Good job but it needs work.


You do realise I'm going to be disappointed if you don't just copy-paste that into the script thread when it appears?


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free2write
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Yeah, I finished my script an hour before deadline (I'm a procrastinator) so it'll be interesting to see how this turns out.

Oh and I didn't have time to write a decent logline. Sorry!

Well I did have time, but like I said - I'm a procrastinator.

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Next, but not the last, batch

Scars by Shawn Anderson (sanderson) - Short, Horror - A boy in a wheelchair offers a man money to carry him to the attic of a supposedly haunted abandoned house, but they are both more than they seem. - pdf, format

Donor by Jon Barton (johnnyboy) - Short, Horror - A boy's best friend is his mother. - pdf, format

Wheelchair Indemnity by Alanna Carlson - Short, Horror - no logline - pdf, format

Black Aggie by Ryan Lee (ryan1) - Short, Horror - A team of investigators ventures into an abandoned convent, supposedly haunted by a former resident known as Black Aggie. - pdf, format


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Lettuce just say you and me get to the same place by different means.



It's entirely possible that either you work slower than I do or that I work faster than you do.
Most people can take a two hour job and string it out to eight hours.
I'll take a two hour job and burn it down to under an hour and screw off for the remaining seven plus hours.
Cheers, Phil!  



Okey doke.
Just trying to cut down on my offensive (as I roll my eyes) number of posts.
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Maybe... twenty minutes?
Scroll, copy and paste.
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Oooooo! I'm so tired. I need a grande latte and a government sanctioned thirty minute break.
Where's my acupuncturist?
I can't handle all of these copy and pastings!
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You're killin' me.

No.
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I didn't forget.
- No children. Re: Are they children or can we make them adults?  Baltis-

It was a very good catch.
Yes, it did shed light on others, as did most of these.


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George Willson
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Quoted from seamus19382
As my old Native Amrican friend Ryan Patrick McHugh used to say "The emptiest drum makes the most noise."


These boards are very noisy sometimes...


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The Final Batch:

A Tale That Wasn't Right by Jeff Bush (dreamscale) - Short, Horror - Old Man Pomeroy's ghost's been hauntin' the area ever' year on Hallowee...well, you know what I mean.  Josh and Jael race against an unseen clock in a race against time to end the evil. - pdf, format

Condemned by Ray W - Short, Horror - A vampire does what he can to take care of his eternal family. - pdf, format

A Bad Night by Joe Garza - Short, Horror - Brother and sister meet on an isolated island to go over some old history and get more than they bargained for. - pdf, format

Victim by Gary (abe from la) - Short, Horror -  A detective discovers a grisly secret while interrogating a suspect in an abandoned house. - pdf, format

No Trespassing by Ariel (free2write) - Short, Horror - no logline - pdf, format


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Just a question - if I had've submitted my pisstake under a fake name, would it have been posted along with my serious one? No biggie, just wondered...



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mcornetto
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If you were clever enough to get away with it then you could but you'd have to be pretty clever to get it past Don.

BTW.  Anyone else getting horror burnout?
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Quoted from mcornetto
BTW.  Anyone else getting horror burnout?


Affirmative.

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Quoted from mcornetto


BTW.  Anyone else getting horror burnout?


No. And if folks are, too d*** bad!



"I know you want to work for Mo Fuzz. And Mo Fuzz wants you to. But first, I'm going to need to you do something for me... on spec." - Mo Fuzz, Tapeheads, 1988
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Dreamscale
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The only burnout I have is 3 actors, 1 in a wheelchair, all in and around an abandoned house.
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