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Congrats, Julio. Nice to see a little recognition for one of our resident horror writers who has been toiling in the craft for some time. You are improving, with both the pace and the economy of your writing. I liked your use of short sentences here. And I enjoyed the tale.
You do need to do something about the disconnect between your logline and your script, but I think it is an easy fix, remedied with the addition of a few more simple props.
If they are doing witchy stuff, you should add a few more witchy props. The mortar and pestle alone are not enough -- and they are quite small, without much visual impact. Perhaps add a book with ancient runes, or have David sitting in a pentagram drawn on the floor, with candles at the points. Things like that.
You do not need to be an expert in witchcraft to add a few ominous details that suggest the occult. You are a horror writer, for pete's sake. You know the drill.
The other question I had was why they were undertaking this ritual in the first place. Was it supposed to heal David? Make him better?
Even if that was not your intent, I would suggest going that route, which you could accomplish with just a few lines of dialogue. Carrie can say something like, "It was supposed to cure him, but instead..." It would help make things all the more tragic.
For a nitpick, I would suggest that stomach and abdomen are pretty much the same thing, and I would add a different portion of the anatomy when Carrie spreads her goo.
You've got a nice, effective short here, Julio, and I was very pleased to read it.
I enjoyed this story. It was different from the norm, although it did leave me wondering, why? Why did David get shot? I see it has something to do with witchcraft and wish you wrote more on David to flesh out his character.
Aside from that it was very visual which I enjoyed the most.