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khamanna
Posted: November 13th, 2021, 10:53am Report to Moderator
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Attention: Libby raised a fair point.

Supporting characters can know the secret. But only after character B has figured it out.


So, we don't get to know that a supporting character is in the know?

Because you say "supporting characters can know"
"but only after B figures it out" - meaning the supporting character will learn about it after B learns it. Or meaning we will know that the supporting is in the know after we see B figured it out?
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So, we don't get to know that a supporting character is in the know?

Because you say "supporting characters can know"
"but only after B figures it out" - meaning the supporting character will learn about it after B learns it. Or meaning we will know that the supporting is in the know after we see B figured it out?


Supporting characters are UNAWARE of the secret.

The only way is if character B wishes to let them on the secret too, after figuring it out first. Until then, they are don't know anything.  


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Yuvraj —

You mentioned the reveal has deadly consequences. Are you saying someone HAS to die or not?


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Yuvraj —

You mentioned the reveal has deadly consequences. Are you saying someone HAS to die or not?


Not necessarily to kill someone.

Show it in your own way.


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Yuvraj —You mentioned the reveal has deadly consequences. Are you saying someone HAS to die or not?

I asked for clarification on this point too, so I think it's important (for when people start reviewing later) that the deadly element be made crystal clear:

Deadly: causing or able to cause death.
If a character gets bitten by a venomous spider that's a potentially deadly situation but they might survive.

In Fatal Attraction the movie, the secret affair once confessed leads to an ultimate and deadly showdown and the actual death of a main character.

Yuvraj, you're leaving it to the writer's discretion as to whether a character dies or not, right?  
But a character (at least) must be put in a dire and dangerous situation that (a) could lead to death, but they might survive, or: (b) they do actually die, correct?

Just so everyone's on the same page.






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I asked for clarification on this point too, so I think it's important (for when people start reviewing later) that the deadly element be made crystal clear:

Deadly: causing or able to cause death.
If a character gets bitten by a venomous spider that's a potentially deadly situation but they might survive.

In Fatal Attraction the movie, the secret affair once confessed leads to an ultimate and deadly showdown and the actual death of a main character.

Yuvraj, you're leaving it to the writer's discretion as to whether a character dies or not, right?  
But a character (at least) must be put in a dire and dangerous situation that (a) could lead to death, but they might survive, or: (b) they do actually die, correct?

Just so everyone's on the same page.






Exactly. Like, if character A cuts a poisonous fart, and… umm… er. Sigh.

Back to the drawing board.


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Exactly. Like, if character A cuts a poisonous fart, and… umm… er. Sigh. Back to the drawing board.

Yep, deadly situation that. Especially if with a significant other.  


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If you need to show a character's death then show it. If you don't want to then don't do it.

Consequences can be physical, emotional, or psychological. Or all of these.

If you have a new of showing it, go for it.

Interpret it in your own way.



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A couple of dumb questions:
Submissions begin Monday, 11/22/2021,  correct ???
On the title page, will Ac2021 work.  I have no idea how to put a tent over an Upper Case A and a lower case c in a circle.
A title on the Title Page is okay, just no "written by" Name.  Correct?
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NEVERMIND.
Saw the 11/19/21 noon deadline.
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NEVERMIND. Saw the 11/19/21 noon deadline.


Jake re copyright symbol:

(c) 2021
For the written by, you can elect to leave it blank or use a pseudonym or witty name, example:

Albert Einstein, Lara Croft, Joe Blogs, or anything you choose.

However, write your real name on the submission form to Don.

There are no dumb questions.  



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Quoted from JakeJon
A couple of dumb questions:
Submissions begin Monday, 11/22/2021,  correct ???
On the title page, will Ac2021 work.  I have no idea how to put a tent over an Upper Case A and a lower case c in a circle.
A title on the Title Page is okay, just no "written by" Name.  Correct?


No, submission can begin anytime using simplyscripts.com/owc

Use, "©2021" or "copyright 2021"  

please include title and copyright 2021  and if you wish to use a pseudonym you can or just leave it blank.  It is up to you.

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On the title page, will Ac2021 work.  I have no idea how to put a tent over an Upper Case A and a lower case c in a circle.


If you have a mac, then press: 'option' and then 'G'.

If you have Microsoft, then press: 'Alt' and then '0169'.

Both of these will yield the copyright symbol.  



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If you have a mac, then press: 'option' and then 'G'.

If you have Microsoft, then press: 'Alt' and then '0169'.

Both of these will yield the copyright symbol.  



So that’s how you do it!!


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So that’s how you do it!!


Standard ASCII codes. Come in handy.


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