I have a few hours later today so will get Mo's done. I should be cool for another one tomorrow too. Then it will most likely be Monday... but I'll try and get something done this weekend. Who knows, it might be raining.

Likewise juggling time. Will finish mo today and then move on so hopefully have another done in the next few days

I've been a little busy myself, so I've only been able to review Last Blue Blood Vampire and the first 10 of Blood Harvest. I hope I have enough free time to get back to business.

Back from Amsterdam.

Going to spend the morning drinking coffee and recovering, but I am going to start on Treasure Chest this afternoon. Should post my notes up sometime tomorrow.

How's everyone's rewrites coming?

I've taken a sledgehammer to act 2. Changing far more than I had initially planned, but everything is already flowing far better. I honestly predict at least 50% of act 2 will be comletely new by the end of this next rewrite, if not more.

I know that I still have two scripts to read from this, and I will get to them as soon as I can. I've been swamped at work this week, and then I'm off again (this time to Lisbon, Portugal) from Thursday to Monday, so it's looking increasingly unlikely that I will get either two read before I go away.

But you never know.

Regardless, I will give them both a read as soon as I return.

I'm writing something else entirely. I can't write one script and perfect it all in one go. I need to take a rest for a while and write something else, maybe even write several other things. The rewrite for this will most likely be in a couple of months time...

Been very busy catching up with some stuff, but I'll be back reading again over the next couple of days.

i was some what demotivated in the rewrite and then along comes the new opening scene and before you know I'm back in the mood.

i just needed the motivation and that came from feeling excited about it again

some really good changes, new scenes, different order , even mixed up two separate scenes to increase the energy and tension

quite pleased so far