I prefer the ending that is there now... at least in terms of he being a let down. I don't particularly like the dragon part and believe that needs to be reworked... but for 7 days, it's a decent enough place holder.

Ok,

Since some are outing themselves and I'm not sure if I'll be around this week when the writers are released, I'll go ahead and own up to SuperMick as my doing. Seemed like it was obvious to some

The six page limit was tough, but I was quite pleased with how it turned out. Especially compared to my other OWC entries. I know a few didn't like the dragon, I wasn't mad about it either, but I needed something big to happen to wrap it up quick. I am considering taking this one further, so I'll work that one out.

Once again, thanks to everyone that read this one and gave their thoughts. Really is quite amazing. And, I'm glad some seemed to enjoy it, I'll let you guys know if SuperMick Returns

Not blowing smoke up your proverbial Glenn, Super Mick was easily the funniest thing I've read on this site. Definitely my no.1 pick.  

I wouldn't mind a read of an extended version if one gets written, maybe more backstory on everyone hating him

Well... Thank you, my man! This was my first time writing comedy, so if anyone thought it was remotely funny that was a win for me. Glad it got you laughing, Cam!

Also, in your comment on the script, you mentioned Waterford Whispers. I see you're based in Melbourne. You Irish in any way?

LOL, ya sneaky Irish bastard, you denied it til the very end.  I was really wondering if some non-Irish writer had the nuts to call their character Supermick.

Anyway, you got one of my votes.  Plus I thought SM was the best character in the owc.  

Hey Glenn,

If that's a first attempt at comedy I'd definitely give it another shot. Must be an Irish thing just getting it like that.

Lol, actually scottish/aussie, the Missus is from Belfast though so if the kids are any good at football then they've got options for nationalities. Some of Irish lads over here I used to play football with got me onto Whispers, it's a bit close to the bone some of it but Super Mick just seemed to fit in with their more outlandish efforts.

Anyway, I'd definitely take it forward, maybe Shooting The Shorts? I'm new here so not sure how that works, but saw someone talking about it

Nice job on this, Glenn. Was my 2 pick. Some dry humor, and it hit the right notes. Well done in the time provided. Like Dustin, I also look at these OWC scripts as if they are going to be produced so that's why I wasn't necessarily enthralled with the dragon, but the rest was gold and very produceable. Good luck.

Steve

Hey, great job, Glenn. My numb 1 as well. Closely followed by Johnny, but this one was the funniest. And, generally, I hate fart jokes, I seriously do.

Had me fooled. Really liked this one. Nice work, mate.

Ah Jaysus, thanks everybody for the kind words.

Quoted from Ryan1 LOL, ya sneaky Irish bastard, you denied it til the very end.  I was really wondering if some non-Irish writer had the nuts to call their character Supermick. Anyway, you got one of my votes.  Plus I thought SM was the best character in the owc.

I was afraid it'd be obvious that I wrote it if I based it in Ireland, so I nearly didn't but then it didn't really work. Being in the back-arse of Mayo was important for this one to feel right. But when people suspected it was me, I had to deny it.

Glad to hear you liked SuperMick (not Mick).

Hey Glenn,

Quoted from Cammygray1983 If that's a first attempt at comedy I'd definitely give it another shot. Must be an Irish thing just getting it like that. Lol, actually scottish/aussie, the Missus is from Belfast though so if the kids are any good at football then they've got options for nationalities. Some of Irish lads over here I used to play football with got me onto Whispers, it's a bit close to the bone some of it but Super Mick just seemed to fit in with their more outlandish efforts. Anyway, I'd definitely take it forward, maybe Shooting The Shorts? I'm new here so not sure how that works, but saw someone talking about it

Well, in fairness, I have always considered myself a funny bastard. Na, kidding, but really did enjoy writing this.

Ah, I lived in Perth (Australia, not Scotland) for two years. Loved it. I'm a big fan of Whispers, myself. Mostly satirical stuff though. But, I'll see what I do with this and see if there's any takers then.

Not too sure how STS works either, but I think as this is written now (with a big fuckin' dragon), it'd pretty much be non-filmable. I'd like to make the necessary changes though.

Cheers, again

Quoted from StevenClark Nice job on this, Glenn. Was my 2 pick. Some dry humor, and it hit the right notes. Well done in the time provided. Like Dustin, I also look at these OWC scripts as if they are going to be produced so that's why I wasn't necessarily enthralled with the dragon, but the rest was gold and very produceable. Good luck. Steve

Thanks Steve. I'm glad you (mostly) enjoyed it. The dragon was a little rushed, but in the end I didn't get the hate I thought I would for it. So, that's cool! Going forward though, the beast shall be banished.

Cheers.

Quoted from khamanna Hey, great job, Glenn. My numb 1 as well. Closely followed by Johnny, but this one was the funniest. And, generally, I hate fart jokes, I seriously do.

Thank you!! Not into fart jokes, myself. But, I had to think of something that made him an Irish superhero. Guinness farts that make you fly! Now, that's Irish.

Glad you saw past that though, and it didn't get in the way of your enjoyment. Cheers!

Quoted from Dustin Had me fooled. Really liked this one. Nice work, mate.

Cheers, Dustin. Glad I was able to fool you. Happy to hear you enjoyed it too. Thanks for the read!

Credit where it's due. This story, to me, had all the hallmarks of a seasoned writer. Not sure that I've ever felt that way about your work before... but then, that's the thing with us writers, we're like a fine wine... we get better with age. Hopefully you can keep up with this level, because i'll definitely be interested in reading more of your work.

Great job Glenn... you had my vote.

I kinda figured it was you considering you used County Mayo as your location

Dustin,

Seriously, thank you. That's a high compliment coming from you. While I haven't been actively writing as much recently, I've been learning so much and reading more than I ever have. Happy to hear it's beginning to show a little. Still regard myself a newcomer to this game but want to keep improving. Cheers, mate.

Mark,

I feel Mayonians would hate me if this ever saw the light of day. The town I picked is real too. I'm already making enemies for myself. Glad to hear you enjoyed it. Cheers.

Quoted from IamGlenn I've been learning so much and reading more than I ever have.

A writer is the sum of their education and experience. Improving both will certainly show in your work.

Hey Glenn,
    Great job.  I knew the story had to come from across the pond.  I was right

I thought it was a funny read.  I rated it pretty highly.  It would have gotten a consider if I had been allowed to.  

Humor, especially humor from various parts of the world, is very different.  I watch some BBCTV and some of the humor I get, some I don't get.  Sometimes, words mean different things from one country to the next.  Heck, sometimes, words mean different things from one city to the next, especially slang.

Funny story, I was telling these 2 girls how this guy and me got into a romp.  In my area, romp meant fight.  Just 2 cities over, romp meant make out.  Was kinda funny...

And I know that sometimes, humor is very hard because of the different types.  Lowbrow vs highbrow, slapstick etc.  Some people love Monte Python.  Some hate him.  Some loved Benny Hill.  Some hated him (mostly women, for some reason.... )

I loved the Quest for the Holy Grail from Monte Python.  One of the funniest movies I've ever seen.  I chuckle each time I think of the vorpal bunny scene.  

"This is how legends are made."  He walks up to the bunny.  Flying bunny decapitates him.  Funny funny stuff.  

I hope you do revisit this without the 6 page limit.  I hated it too.  Superhero and comedy really don't go together per se.  Then add in the 6 page limit and that made this a really hard OWC.

Great job Glenn.  Looking forward to reading any revisions you do.

Dan