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Some will love this. Many do, it seems. Just not for me.

Good luck.

Glenn.

It's a genius satire and pure comedy, I am new so I had to look for this Bush dude (dreamscale?) and voila, he was out by page 2 on my OWC entry, and i get the jokes.

Very funny stuff, lots of LoLs. thx for the laf

Quoted from SKN It's a genius satire and pure comedy, I am new so I had to look for this Bush dude (dreamscale?) and voila, he was out by page 2 on my OWC entry, and i get the jokes. Very funny stuff, lots of LoLs. thx for the laf

Ah yes...the bush dude, is indeed Dreamscale.  And I'm 99.9% sure who wrote this one.

Quoted from Dreamscale Ah yes...the bush dude, is indeed Dreamscale.  And I'm 99.9% sure who wrote this one.

Ah shit, man, pls don't take offence of my comment, it's all fun. You are the hero here imo, makes noobs rethink their approach and the seriousness of the craft, while not taking ourselves too seriously. It's all gud dude.

Quoted from SKN Ah shit, man, pls don't take offence of my comment, it's all fun. You are the hero here imo, makes noobs rethink their approach and the seriousness of the craft, while not taking ourselves too seriously. It's all gud dude.

Offense?  Hell no.  Peeps may hate me, but they definitely love to hate me.  

Tried a couple of times now to slog my way through this script and I have to skip each time. It's not delivering. It's smart but should be a lot smarter.

And the denim shorts return...

As mark says, at least you can get away with this in this OWC.

Out by page one man, I suppose it beats Slugman !

I have about 20 guesses who wrote this. Doesn't matter. Still like it, even though some of the humor was pretty hit and miss.  Still quite a bit of fun.

Verdict: Consider

This was better than I expected and reasonably well-written for basically a lark. The two biggest punchlines (OUT BY ONE PAGE MAN and the finale) landed as well. I chuckled... in my head.

Not much to say about this one. A bit of fun, but kinda old hat. I've read more than my share of these scripts over the years... including Simply BBQ... which I forgot about until now... which I just looked up again. Still posted! Thanks for reminding me.

I think this is one for the longer standing members of the site, didn't get all the references myself.  Still was pretty good, been around here long enough to see the "Tarantino" defence used a few times, that was funny.

Only getting a black screen for this one

Too many insider jokes who only relate to this site's users. Presentation is good. Probably a story about amateur screenwriters and gurus in general; industrialization of our craft and the constant exploitation of the naïve; could enlarge the target audience, make a point and even succeed. But I think it wasn't your goal… so, good for what it is.

Doesn’t seem sensible to give much input on a pisser, so I’ll just say I enjoyed it. Knew ‘out by page one’ would have to be a punchline sooner or later.