Quoted from James McClung I realized all this at the worst possible time: after submitting but before the scripts were posted. By the time mine went up, I had no enthusiasm for it whatsoever, and I cringed every time I saw it bumped it the portal. It got the reviews I expected and the ones it deserved. I appreciate that some people were able to see potential in the idea, even those who didn't like it, but honestly, given how fucked up this version is, I'm at a loss as to how anyone was able to reach that conclusion..

LOL, well it ain't THAT bad James.  I think the concept of a superhero who likes to burn has potential.  And the image of him breaking into a pizzeria because he's so hungry/high is funny.  But yeah it was clear there some missing elements here.  The reaction of the cops in particular was confusing.  I'd like to see this restored to its original version before you got your last minute advice.

Quoted from Ryan1 LOL, well it ain't THAT bad James.

Heh. I think the other reviews would suggest otherwise. Some of the worst reactions I've ever received. Again, though, I think that's on me.

I appreciate the kind words though. I remember reading your review before everyone else's and thinking for a second that I might've just gotten cold feet. You seem to have gotten the basic idea as well. It's not a complicated story, but there was definitely a lot lost in the process.

I see you wrote Flying High Again. Nice one, man. By far my favorite of the bunch.