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Don
Posted: April 24th, 2016, 10:06am
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The Symbol by Snatch McHappy - Short, Comedy - When a crime occurs, there's only one man who can sniff that shit out... And induce justice of orgasmic proportions. 6 pages - pdf, format
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Equinox
Posted: April 24th, 2016, 2:21pm
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Funny idea, but too over the top for me. If this was my script, I wouldn't want to be in the room when females watch the film. I think the whole idea about HIM is really good, but I guess it gets a little too visual here to be funny any more, at least for me.
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grademan
Posted: April 24th, 2016, 5:04pm
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stevie
Posted: April 24th, 2016, 5:18pm
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Lol loved the turn this took. Pretty well done with some great lines. A bit of tweaking to add more funny stuff and this is close to gold. 7 laughs out of 10
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Nomad
Posted: April 24th, 2016, 5:28pm
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Snatch, This has the most humor of the scripts I've read so far. It would have been funny if Prince mentioned "aloha" when talking about, "ciao" Also when Michael Keaton called, if Prince was singing, "tonight we're gonna party like it's 1997. No that's not it. 1998? No...RING." I was almost out when the girl started rubbing her groin, but I stayed for the whole thing. Congratulations. Jordan
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oJOHNNYoNUTSo
Posted: April 24th, 2016, 5:34pm
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Shouldn't she be getting soft and wet? This is hilarious, I love the purple rose! Good job! WILHELM SCREAM.
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Wes
Posted: April 24th, 2016, 6:24pm
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Yes, raunchy as hell. And my favorite so far.
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irish eyes
Posted: April 24th, 2016, 6:42pm
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Great writing and fun from start to finish. The use of Prince ...very clever Dirty, disgusting but in humorous fashion. One of the better scripts for sure. great job on entering.
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MarkItZero
Posted: April 24th, 2016, 8:43pm
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Best one so far. Absurd, raunchy, over the top... but definitely funny.
That rug really tied the room together.
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khamanna
Posted: April 25th, 2016, 4:33am
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Whilhelm - I thought it's a name and it's an adjective. So this is a pisser and not a good one cause the story doesn't add up. Although the puddle of water and it is no rain water is a fun detail. I remember Sussanna- she had orange hair. Good of you to celebrate Prince, I love him as well.
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Cameron
Posted: April 25th, 2016, 4:50am
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That was good, really good, really full blown raunchy, but really really good. At least one proper laugh per page, well done
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MarkRenshaw
Posted: April 25th, 2016, 6:00am
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A nice pisser homage to Prince. Some funny moments, it goes way OTT in parts but inventive. -Mark
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DustinBowcot
Posted: April 25th, 2016, 7:31am
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Good, nice work... this could work on film. I'm wavering between a consider and a rec. Either way, nice job.
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eldave1
Posted: April 25th, 2016, 1:39pm
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Cool premise. Not sure the lines with the 2s and the U's in them work when spoken - but they're funny as written. Loved the purple flower in the ending.
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SAC
Posted: April 25th, 2016, 4:47pm
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Writer, Well done! Raunchy but didn't rely on it. Funny dialogue delivered well. And good writing too. An easy read that gave me some laughs. One of my favs so far! Good job. Steve
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