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Like Anthony I came away thinking this was OTT, even for the mighty prince. Wasn't sure exactly what is power was - fly, power, the ability to make a woman's ^&*(€£@ tingle??
Had the opportunity to mix in a few titles, like 'if I was your girlfriend' since this is all about prince
Quite liked the flower, but the sleigh passed me by as to what was funny.
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One of my last few...and received a PM to check this one out, so I'll try and be as detailed as possible. Uh Oh...is that a god thing or a bad thing? We'll see...
Starts out like a good writer is writing a pisser...but not trying to write poorly - as in the "pisser" parts will be the words and style chosen.
The intro of Ashley appears to be written seriously, but IMO, there is a problem that I see so often and just don't understand why writers keep doing this. Ashley is intro'd in a "sentence" that's not a sentence,a s there's no verb and nothing happening. The following sentence should be included to this intro with a simple comma. It reads and looks so much better.
Ha! The thug passage is humorous, even though I'm not sure it's meant to be. If they're wearing ski masks, how could anyone have a clue how old they are? Also, love the line about 1 of the thugs only having his wits. LOL!!
If she's deaf and the thugs have ski masks on, could she really see their mouths move to read their lips? Funny, though!
"oriental shorthair in heat" - HA! Hilarious!
LOL!!!! Pretty frickin' hilarious!!!!
WILHELM SCREAM - LOL!!! Funny shit...
"orgasmic juices" - Damn, bro...this is killing me!!!
"CLOSE ON: Prince's nostrils flaring." Fuck...you're killing me!! Haven't laughed this hard since last weekend when my girlfriend and I downed 2 bottles of Jagie in 1 day.
Almost every line is gold here. Love the use of letters. Love the hilarious dialogue. Love the Susanna Hoffs ref. Damn, man, fucking A!!!
Flashback is funny. Insert is funny. Dialogue is hysterical.
Love the ending, too. Just am not a big fan of some of the action description writing on the last page.
My favorite so far by a country mile. Hell of an effort and a great, funny tribute to Prince.
I thought this was really funny; pretty much every line hit the nail. Not much else to say other than this one tickled my pink (or should that be purple?) lol.
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I didn't find this nearly as funny as some of the others here. A crazy tribute to a great performer, but somehow this story didn't follow through on the promise of the premise. Prince as a purple crime fighting avenging angel is a hilarious idea, I just think it deserved a more imaginative execution.
After seeing all these interviews the past few days with people that knew Prince, turns out the one thing he absolutely never did was curse, so that aspect would need to be revised. Anyway, looks like someone had a lot of fun writing this and a lot of people seem to like it, so that's a good thing.
With so much buildup, especially the emphasis on Ashley's reaction, I thought you could only be setting yourself up to fail with whoever this character might be... until Prince showed up. Indeed I think he's one of the few personas who could spontaneously elicit a puddle of... non-rainwater. After that, it gets pretty ridiculous... and still works solely because it's Prince. The Wilhelm Scream included (could've so easily been a stock gag).
Not my kind of humor, but somehow this won me over. On the one hand, it seems like a very fun, heartfelt tribute to a fallen legend. On the other hand... Prince was fucking nuts... like, not in touch with reality. None of what happens seems over the top in that context. It almost seems like an experiment to take Prince's larger-than-life world and focus it into a coherent through line, without compromising the madness.
Okay, so I'm almost through reading most of the scripts. And for now I'm putting this at number one. I liked this one the most. It seems to meet all the rules and it made me laugh the most.
I didn't get the "Tuesday, no Wednesday"-joke. If it was one.
I like it.
Caleb You tore up her picture. Nathan I'm gonna tear up the fucking dance floor, dude. Check it out.
Ha! Very good. The whole puddle thing makes me think it could only work as animation, so that’s how I imagined it and it came out very well. The only thing I don’t get is what Prince has against Jack Nicholson. Change that out for something that makes sense and this thing’s airtight, OTT fun.