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Not Today, Gucci - OWC (currently 2451 views)
Don
Posted: April 24th, 2016, 10:07am
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Not Today, Gucci by 0 - Short, Comedy - Super heroes, Aussies, Walmarts and eyeless crocodiles -- this is the story of the Doctor. 6 pages - pdf, format
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Equinox
Posted: April 24th, 2016, 10:48am
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Yikes, I guess the author has probably quite some problems. And me too, as I couldn't stop laughing. Extremely weird but funny!
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Dreamscale
Posted: April 24th, 2016, 11:50am
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Wow...obviously a complete pisser...and quite a whacky one, too. Too whacky for this old whack, and I'm out on Page 2, as this is completely senseless.
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Trojan
Posted: April 24th, 2016, 12:11pm
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If a schizophrenic screenwriter took acid and was given 30 minutes to write a stream-of-consciousness story with absolutely no f*cks given, I expect this would be the result.
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DanC
Posted: April 24th, 2016, 12:35pm
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I'm sorry, but, I'm out on page 3. I said I'd never bail, but, I can't follow it. I know I'm legally high and all, but, I don't think anyone can follow this trip. Sorry, I truly am. Dan
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Equinox
Posted: April 24th, 2016, 1:12pm
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Well, it doesn't make sense, but the scenes alone are so weird, it made me laugh, and that's what comedy is about after all, isn't it? Never thought I'd ever like a script which doesn't make sense.
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khamanna
Posted: April 24th, 2016, 4:48pm
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The first two scares are very good but then you jumped and introduced crocodiles... yeah... I have no idea why. In the end I don't know what I just read and why you would write that. Not funny
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grademan
Posted: April 24th, 2016, 5:32pm
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stevie
Posted: April 24th, 2016, 5:42pm
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Started out promising but lost the plot even by my crazy standards lol 1 laugh out of 10 for the Aussie reference lol
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Wes
Posted: April 24th, 2016, 6:52pm
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What the hell? I got through page three and couldn't take any more. Just not my thing. So, yeah, it'll probably be some kind of cult classic. I wouldn't be surprised at all.
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irish eyes
Posted: April 24th, 2016, 7:02pm
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Ahhh what????? I could read this over and over and still have no clue what's going on? Are there 3 different stories? My head hurts trying to make sense of it. All I can say is good job on entering.
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DustinBowcot
Posted: April 25th, 2016, 3:14am
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I said that I'm not going to hate on any one of these entries, so, nice work for having a go.
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MarkRenshaw
Posted: April 25th, 2016, 3:23am
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Reads like a pisser, but for once I’m sure pissers are allowed and encouraged. Far too crazy and incoherent for my tastes but I appreciate the mad as a box of frogs effort that’s gone into this and I know some will love you for it. -Mark
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SAC
Posted: April 25th, 2016, 2:29pm
Of The Ancients
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Writer, I try not to bail on scripts but I can't help it here. Out by page 4 and there's no let up to what I'm reading. Agree with Jeff -- senseless. WTF were you on when you wrote this! Steve
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AnthonyCawood
Posted: April 25th, 2016, 6:01pm
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