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eldave1
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Do you need a source for 2+2 = 4?



It's not common sense to me. Common sense to me is that the passage of time is often implied and easily deduced from how a writer crafts the scene - i.e., what you are saying to me is 2+2= 3.

So, yeah I need a source.


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Dreamscale
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Quoted from eldave1


It's not common sense to me. Common sense to me is that the passage of time is often implied and easily deduced from how a writer crafts the scene - i.e., what you are saying to me is 2+2= 3.

So, yeah I need a source.


Sad...so sad how peeps need to a "source" to do something.  You all talk about me sporting rules and I never, ever do that.

Break away from the sheep.  DO what's right.  Do what makes sense.

Who fucking cares what some "guru" says.  Does it make sense?  Fuck...don't be sheep!!!  Be a wolf...a FUCKING wolf!!!

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eldave1
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Yes, LATER is a Mini Slug, but it's also a perfectly clear Mini Slug, in that we know we're still in the exact same location, but time has passed...and that's what's key here.

My frustrations with Dave (and Warren, on recent discussions) is that they seem to think if something is OK in a certain situation, then it's OK in every situation, and that's just not true.

Too many wrylies is too many wrylies.

Using Mini Slugs whenever the Hell you feel like it, is not the way to go.

The "intent" of a Mini Slug is to show that no time has passed, or that things in different rooms are happening at the same time.




Dave or Warren has never ever said or implied this:


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If something is OK in a certain situation, then it's OK in every situation,


You've been corrected on this too many times to count and you know it is not true. It's akin to me me saying - Jeff believes that if something is wrong in certain situations, then it is wrong in every situation.

And again - it is merely a misdirection.

I do not believe nor have ever stated that:

Use wrylies whenever you want as many as you want.

Use Mini Slugs whenever the Hell you feel like it.

Again - misdirection.


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The "intent" of a Mini Slug is to show that no time has passed, or that things in different rooms are happening at the same time


Wrong. That is not the intent nor the restriction.


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Dave - you know he likes it?


I do. And --

Sometimes I just need something to do while I have writer's block


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Sad...so sad how peeps need to a "source" to do something.  You all talk about me sporting rules and I never, ever do that.

Break away from the sheep.  DO what's right.  Do what makes sense.

Who fucking cares what some "guru" says.  Does it make sense?  Fuck...don't be sheep!!!  Be a wolf...a FUCKING wolf!!!



Aside from the fact that you are the Joffrey Baratheon of rules (Jeffrey Baratheon?),

This the best guidance you've ever given.


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Dreamscale
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Quoted from eldave1


Aside from the fact that you are the Joffrey Baratheon of rules (Jeffrey Baratheon?),

This the best guidance you've ever given.


Thank you.  And, fuck you.  I'm done.

Do whatever the fuck you want to and please, do not ever listen to antything I have to say.

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Do whatever the fuck you want to and please, do not ever listen to antything I have to say.



Followed by more good advice. On a roll


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Matthew Taylor
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I hardly know anyone here - but I'll throw out a few guesses...

Gondolier - Anthony Cawood
The Libertine - Dustin
Reap what you sow - Warren
Ganglers - Mark Renshaw
It's Coming - PKCardinal

I was also going to say Jeff for The Gathering - maybe the double line wyrlie is to throw us off the scent


*Pat's himself on the back*

I may not be able to write anything you guys like, but I seem to be able to guess the writers lol only 1 of them was wrong



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Quoted from Matthew Taylor


*Pat's himself on the back*

I may not be able to write anything you guys like, but I seem to be able to guess the writers lol only 1 of them was wrong



You had me worried when you posted that. I was like, how the fuck did he guess that? !


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Matthew Taylor
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You had me worried when you posted that. I was like, how the fuck did he guess that? !


Mainly a stab in the dark lol but having read some of your stuff I thought the gangler creatures seemed like a good fit to be your brain child


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Warren
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Quoted from Matthew Taylor


*Pat's himself on the back*

I may not be able to write anything you guys like, but I seem to be able to guess the writers lol only 1 of them was wrong



Yeah you got me as well. Good guessing.


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AnthonyCawood
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Yeah, I have no idea how you did that Matthew... I've been on the site for a while now and I'm still rubbish at guessing who wrote what!


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Matthew Taylor
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Yeah, I have no idea how you did that Matthew... I've been on the site for a while now and I'm still rubbish at guessing who wrote what!


For a while I thought you had written 'I Dream of the Devil' but changed my mind towards the end - I've read a few of your shorts as well so little things tipped me off - solid writing, bold slugs, signing off with The End etc

Dustin's was the easiest to guess but I won't give away his tell so as not to out him for future OWC.


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DustinBowcot
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Well done, Matt. Maybe it's a Brummie thing? Please PM me my tell. I'd really like to know.
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As a poker player I am now concerned

Gonna switch software for the next one, drop The End, use no Bold, or wrylies or Orphans... then everyone will think it's someone else


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