Ste, Mike, Sandra,

Thanks for taking time time to watch and comment. Happy that you got a laugh out of it.

Cheers.

Okay, this was an entertaining viewing, congrats bro. It was very enjoyable, which is the main thing.

Now, a few things I had a problem with... I didn't like the transitions during the montage. They screaned amateur and just didn't fit. The music worked pretty well (I loved the music during the montage, the first IM scene, and the credits), but the music was overused in certain other parts. Also, I thought that the first scene lasted way too long... Okay, it set up the story well, but it could have been done quicker.

But yeah, I enjoyed the story, and I take my hat off to you for actually getting off your a-s-s and making a film... I've been planning to film one of my shorts for the past year... But what can I say? I'm a lazy guy.

Definitely make more shorts. You've definitely got talent, talent which will definitely increase with more experience and practise.

- Toby.

Thanks for watching and commenting Toby.

The wipes are from my television background, they have a meaning, so I personally don't have a problem with using them -- especially in light pieces like this.

Happy that you enjoyed the story and thanks for saying I got talent - made my day.

Cheers.
  

Good short. I liked how the dream was made and how the robot/alien looks like. The robot's/alien's vision was psychedelic. lol. Good job Michael.

Hey Gabe,

Thanks for watching and commenting.  Glad you enjoyed it.