I can't believe this script actually saw the light of day haha.  I remember when you posted this one.

I do not recall the doctor being a woman, but it makes perfect sense, and actually works better -- good job formulating that switch.  Excellent work on the credits, too.  Very creative.

Well done, Rick.

I thought it was a job well done. Directed well. Funny sometimes, especially the little coughs from the doctor. Like Bert, I thought the ending credits were good. The acting was good. I don’t really get the story. It seemed like it was gross just to be gross. Definitely not an expected ending, though -- haha.

Good job.


Breanne

Thanks for all the feedback. I'm glad it's gone down well, even if the subject matter isn't to everyone's tastes.

For those of you who saw it last night, were the credits working properly? They seem to stick now. I think atom have cut them. BOO. BOO.

Yes, your name did stick for about thirty seconds last night.  But I thought you wanted people to remember your name.

Bugger. There's a whole load of other credits.

They musn't allow them on their site.  Oh well. Hopefully it didn't spoil it too much.

Ha! Pia you dirty dirty girl! Congrats on getting it done. And done well!

Quoted from Shelton I think Rick is still working on getting the sound up to Phil's specifications.

You, sir, can suck my balls.


Phil

Eww...

Now I shall go read the script. Good job, people.

Quoted from dogglebe You, sir, can suck my balls.

Okay.  I really don't think it will cure your horrible sense of hearing, but I'm willing to give it a try in the name of science.

Science has nothing to do with it.  You just want to.

Everyone, please click on the above link and enjoy.....um....Unprotected Sex.



Phil

Daaa-aaamn. You two should get a room.

Anyway, Rick, this was top-dollar nice. Well, it wasn't really - it was fucking gross, like the script...but in a good way so to speak. I thought the production here was really good, just like the other one of Pia's scripts you did (I can't remember the name). The acting was good as were the...sounds (eew).

But do OBGYNs really cover the patients lower part with a towel...?

Good stuff - to bad about the credits freezing.

Cheers
Rob

Quoted from sniper But do OBGYNs really cover the patients lower part with a towel...?

Some do. Some don’t. My experience has been that most do usually cover you with something. It can feel very humiliating to have your feet in the stirrups and someone checking you out that way. Giving you some extra coverage is the least they can do for you.

Mike, so that’s why you grew the beard.


Breanne

Congrats both of you. This was a good, gross, funny short film.

Thought the acting from the nurse was really good and loved the credits, although they did freeze on my laptop too.

Anyways, good job!

Yeah I remember the script causing a bit of huffiing and frowning when it debut on SS.

Oh and shame on you Rick for not giving a screen credit to your maggots. I hope they're members of SAG and sue your ass off.

Slack mate, very slack.