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mcornetto
Posted: October 4th, 2009, 9:29pm Report to Moderator
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Hey thanks for watching guys.

Javier I wrote this specifically for the animation software.  The reason it's about Computer Girl is  because I wanted to use a computerized voice for at least one of the characters.  The character however was inspired by a conglomerate of women I've worked with.

Chris  There's two other episodes written and in the works. I intend to have six for the season.  I don't think the humour will get stale in six very short episodes. If I sense people want more at that time then I'll do a season two but it will be after a break so people will have time to recharge their need for computer metaphors.

Sandra, Pia and I are on the television when Cartlon first enters the living room.

Cheers,

Michael
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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: October 4th, 2009, 11:41pm Report to Moderator
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Funny how I picked up your voice right away. That stood out to me over the visuals in the Ultra Cool Screen...

"I kinda believe that um...."  

Sandra



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Posted: October 17th, 2009, 2:03am Report to Moderator
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mcornetto
Posted: November 23rd, 2009, 3:15am Report to Moderator
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The second episode of Computer Girl has arrived.  Here's the promo.


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I liked it. I think you did a really good job with it.

I was amazed at the negative comments. I voted 5 stars.

That stuff is hard to do. I hate when mean spirited people comment or vote in a negative way from the safety of their online anonymity.


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mcornetto
Posted: November 23rd, 2009, 6:53pm Report to Moderator
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I read the comments and I think that's because it's a bit different from what they are used to seeing - they get a link to it in their subscriptions and then click on it to watch it only to find it wasn't done with Halo.   I'm not overly concerned about that because it's never going to be Halo.  Some people dug it and that's the audience I'm after.

BTW Here's a link to the script for those of you that are interested in such things.
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mcornetto
Posted: January 6th, 2010, 6:45am Report to Moderator
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The newest episode of Computer Girl is up.  Here's the promo.



I don't have a script uploaded yet, but will update when I do.

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mcornetto
Posted: January 6th, 2010, 5:52pm Report to Moderator
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Here's the script for Ep 3.
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mcornetto
Posted: April 10th, 2010, 6:13pm Report to Moderator
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The new episode of Computer Girl is up.

Computer Girl is a web series about an electronic girl dealing with life's biological problems.

In this episode Carlton is compelled by Miss Terry to tell Sally how he feels. CG receives an antivirus treatment from a guru.





The script is here.
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jwent6688
Posted: April 10th, 2010, 11:30pm Report to Moderator
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Needs a little sound editing. Computer girl is much louder then other cast members. As is Pia with the harmonization.

Beth outshines you all as an actor... Sorry, but she's good. Gorgeous too, but thats your doing.

Interesting work. i watched them all and they progressed well. Your grip of machinima is gettin better each time. good work Michael and cast members.

Did you do the music for the opening scene? That sounded professionally produced.

Look forward to The Dark.


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Great work dude!!

Nice editing!

I wish my character's voice a little more clear, but other than that GREAT!

What retards at YouTube!!!!!!!!


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mcornetto
Posted: April 11th, 2010, 2:10am Report to Moderator
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Hey guys,

Thanks for watching. I've been playing around for a while on trying to get the sound levels the same.  It's really difficult because they are from all different sources.  I've found a method I think works now (after I did this episode). I used that method on Simply Radio this week - does that sound better this week?

As far as the Machinima.com audience on YouTube goes...well...they've always had difficulties with Computer Girl.  This is mostly due to the fact that I use Moviestorm to make the movies and not some other game engine.  They don't like the way it looks. This episode they got a bit of a double whammy because it's really hard to understand this episode if you haven't watched the other episodes.   I kind of expected they would be a bit harsh with it.  As long as they watch it, that's really what counts.

Cheers,

Michael  
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jwent6688
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Quoted from mcornetto
As long as they watch it, that's really what counts.


I didn't read the youtube comments til Pia mentioned them. Ha. I thought I was a shit. These turds are brutal. But you're right. They still sat there and watched it. More views, more views.

Probably the same douche logged in under 30 different usernames.

I think it's good. Fuck em'.


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Watched it as I read Gumballs comments. And he right. I agree.

Didn't like the intro music. But I can be a snob when it cums to tunes and the like.

Big cups. Of choc I mean. Very big. Good work cone fella. Keep it cooking. Not burning like I do. That can get messy. Good job I smoke. Anyone know any good interior decorators? Cheap good ones.

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mcornetto
Posted: April 11th, 2010, 7:17pm Report to Moderator
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I also suspect another reason the younsters on Machinima.com are having a hard time with this episode is because of the piece of classical music I force them to listen too.  However, it fits the scenes perfectly and I didn't want to cut it just because some folks might not like it.  

And yes, j, I did all the music.  Though I won't be doing all the music for The Dark. I might look for something Heavy Metal for The Environmentalist, if I can find anything like that Creative Commons.

Anyway, it doesn't really matter why they're watching episode 4. or if they like it, I noticed that people were watching it just to find out why other people didn't like it.  I think that's pretty cool actually.  

And it's catapulting episode 3 to 10,000 views - only 50 plus a few more views to go.

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