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I started to post this last night. We all write shorts, even if its just for a contest. Personally I love watching them.... If they're good. So if you've got any faves, dump them into this thread. I only think it could help writers of shorts to see some decent ones.
I'll kick us off with a horror that is absolutely low budget, but effective IMO.
I just watched it and what's cool for me is that my daughter's in China and so we discuss the language and she texts words sometimes in Mandarin. Watching them scratch onto pads was cool. You'd have to be pretty fast. You should see how sloppy my hand gets when I'm writing "brainwaves" for scripts and it's in simple English without the pictographic complexity. The "scritch scratch" sound in that video was impressive.
I have always loved this one. Experimental, B&W, but something about it that really grabs you. It wears its Lovecraft influences on its sleeve, but I actually like that.
Wow, Thanks for both of those. Two black and whites with no dialogue. Both, very effective.
Bert, that one seemed Lynch-esque to me. Amazing shots. Especially him riding the bike. Would love to know how they got some of those. It made me uncomfortable which is a score. Gotta admit, I was reminded a bit about "The Farm"...
Matias, holy hell did they spend some money on that one. Loved it. They didn't even list a writer, because its just a scene. Write the story yourself. In your own mind. Trying to shoot my own stuff, but that makes me want to call it quits. I hope this guy is making a decent living at what he does...
I like that one Bert!! Very Lynch'ish which I LOVE!!
The one Z posted is visually interesting, but that's all. IMHO. As I was saying to Sandra recently on Skype, computer generated effects are sort of ruining films for me. Nothing feels real anymore and the cgi takes you out of the story. All it does is dazzle your eyes. I even don't like photos anymore if they look like they've been tampered with. Some people post landscape pics and such that are incredibly gorgeous, but I lose interest, because I know that's not how the original pic looked.
Anyway. I've always liked this short. Simple, but great!