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 Do we tolerate the outright trashing of scripts?
Zero tolerance (14 votes)
36.84%
Case-by-case (11 votes)
28.95%
Sometimes maybe if the author is a dick (9 votes)
23.68%
Screw 'em, no holds barred (3 votes)
7.89%
Don't even care, not a problem (1 votes)
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Posted: February 11th, 2012, 2:35pm Report to Moderator
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So, time for another lazy Saturday afternoon Moderator Question, requesting your thoughtful consideration and input.

First off, nobody will question that Don puts up some crappy scripts from time to time.

We all know it -- but it is Don's choice -- and we put up with it as part of the boards.

Let us emphasize that for a moment -- Don's choice.  It is how he wants to run things around here.

Now, sometimes one of these horrible scripts will take off with comment after comment about how horrible the script is -- every new poster trying to one-up the poster before him with clever adjectives for outright horribleness that may or may not incorporate diarrhea, or dog poop, or calling into question the author's age, grade level, or and/or sexual preferences.

*  Sure, sometimes it is fun and interesting to read those threads.
*  Many times the author never even shows up -- no harm, no foul.
*  Sometimes the author does show up -- angry or accepting or thankful or hurt or some combination of these.
*  And maybe, sometimes, the author sees it, but never comments and never returns.

Now, sometimes the scripts ARE an utter waste of time and space -- whether that needs to be verbalized or not -- but I emphasize once more:

Point one:  It is Don's choice to post them.
And another point:  I am starting to think that sometimes reviews of this sort reflect negatively on our house here -- and I will sometimes see conversations to this effect on other forums.

So the question put forth is this:  Is it time to stop tolerating the outright trashing of scripts?  How much is too much?


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Hmmm, I wonder "who" this is regarding...

In that person's defense, let's be clear that many have and continue to do this, in 1 way or another.  Yes, sometimes, diarrhea, dog poop, age and sexual preference comes into play, but hopefully it's done in a comedic way, or at least meant to be comedic.

Then again, as Best points out, many of these scripts that get "trashed" completely and honestly deserve the thrashing they receive.  Is it a problem to say that a script is extremely poorly written and thought out?  Is it a problem to say I personally hated this script?

You know, all joking aside, the funny thing is that none of his is ever a problem until someone decides to make an issue of it, by jumping in and calling names and causing a ruckus.  Is that any better or more tolerable than the potential issue being raised here?
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Bert,

I agree wholeheartedly with you bringing this up as a topic for discussion.  I've refrained from commenting on the thread which (obviously) prompted this one.  But since the issue has been raised...

In creating and maintaining Simplyscripts, Don has done the writing community an absolutely wonderful service.  He's created a forum where writers can meet others of like minds - share work, discuss tips and solicit (hopefully) constructive criticism.  This is of immeasurable benefit, a great thing.

The key word here is *constructive*.  Now, I'm not saying that there isn't room for considerable disagreement.  And there should be.  People should feel free to disagree on SS - that's part of what makes this place special.  You get so many different opinions and views.  We don't have to like each other, or think highly of each other's work, if it's not warranted.  

BUT.  In my opinion - these opinions SHOULD be respectfully worded.  They can be straightforward and honest.  But no personal attacks, no comparing scripts to dog poop, no insults or criticisms that are meant simply to hurt and not to help.  

**Excuse me, folks - but we're all writers here.   If a person really thinks a script is abysmal, it's quite simple to say so in a NICE way.  If you can't come up with words that don't hurt unnecessarily to express your thoughts...then, well, you're not much of a writer, are you?***

When malicious posts are allowed to continue, the negative effects are threefold.

1) It says a HELL of a alot about the person posting them.

2) It scares off newbie writers that probably just need a bit of encouragement, and tips from those of us who are more experienced.

3) It DRAGS DOWN THE REPUTATION OF SIMPLYSCRIPTS - makes this board look like an unprofessional mess, both to potential new members, AND TO INDUSTRY PROFESSIONALS WHO MAY BE VIEWING THE BOARDS.

I personally believe that malicious posts should not be tolerated on Simplyscripts.  And if a member cannot conduct themselves in a respectful manner to other writers, they should be permanently banned for the good of the rest of the community (as opposed to just firespotting, and deleting posts on a case-by-case basis.  That takes up too much of a moderator's time, if the infringer has continually proven themselves incapable of professional behavior.)

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Bert,

Good question.

It is clearly difficult if a script is posted which is  poor, ok really poor, ok really c**p. Should we be annoyed? after all we weren't asked to read it and it's not our site. Most of the time the log line, or even title page gives you the clue.

If I read a poor script I feel indifferent, rather than angry. If I feel an emotion beyond this I need to ask why "I" feel that way, as it is about me, rather than the script.

Personally, I think the responses can be too harsh and as you have pointed out "can" lead to a frenzy of "let's beat" the author. Not something I like and lets think for a second, does this make SS a better place? Not so, IMO.

As part of a solution, I think reviewers should try and discrimate between newbies (given more slack, more guidance, suggestions etc, whatever) and those who have been around before(less slack). Then we should try and spot the "I've posted many times but never reviewed" posters(perhaps less slack). I am comfortable at reacting differently to the different types and if we need feedback from moderators to know the difference, maybe this could be supplied.

So, I will vote in the middle and hope SS can keep a level head, otherwise it is will be off putting to those who are keen, but need to learn and maybe made a mistake first time around. I know I did and I am glad I didn't run away, but it was a close run thing.

I'm guessing you have been down this road before.

cheers

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First off, nobody will question that Don puts up some crappy scripts from time to time.


Thanks, Don! I appreciate it!

I don't think a rule is in order. It would be difficult to know where to draw that line. Sometimes the best way of encouraging or discouraging behavior is through group reaction. If enough people vocalize their disapproval of the tone of a review, it tends to moderate things over time. Not perfectly. And a writer has to harden himself to a degree when posting work.

I was not trying to question a person's age. My point was that we don't know where a writer is their development, so why crush him? Why discourage someone who is trying? I have not read the script, so I will amend my comment in that thread.
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Yeah, there's a handful of people you make it a point to trash peoples scripts, just for the sake of doing it.  And you know who you are...?

I'm always for people being 100% honest, sometimes brutally so, but no one and I mean no one should be in the business of crushing people's dreams and aspirations.  This should not be tolerated.  Feedback is best if the reviewer point out flaws and weaknesses and offer ideas and inspiration for improvement too.  Well it should work this way.   After all we are all here to learn, improve, and help each other out.  I believe this is one of the very foundations of SimplyScripts.  I'm sure the last thing anyone here wants to do is scare new writers off.  Not too mention, most of the time you have no idea who's on the otherside of that keyboard.

Just my thoughts... going back to ghosting...

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Having submitted my first script on here a short while ago and reading the feedback posts, I thought I'd give you my thoughts on the issue from a newbie's perspective.

I knew that the script I submitted was relatively poor in comparison to some that are on here. This was my first so wasn't expecting fireworks. I wanted to gauge what I was doing right/wrong and what were possible strengths and weaknesses in the way I wrote.  Yes, there were major flaws/errors in what I did, but I took the feedback on the chin. There were a lot of extremely valid points made which I will be taking on board. I didn't go out and celebrate like I'd won the lottery as some were a bit harsh. I must just say that is in no way having a pop at anyone who commented!

For new submitters, these things can be a bit daunting, and I can well imagine people with a skin less thick than mine would pack up and not bother coming back. Having said that, I think people should be able to comment freely on what they read, but maybe offer constructive points to the writer to at least get some basics right.
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I don't think there's ever an instance to be a total dickface in a review unless the author was being a dickface first.  And if the author shows up after a few insulting reviews, then I think that author has a right to be a dickface in return.  

That said, while I don't agree with "totally trashing scripts", there's a lot of worse things people can do/say in the real world about your work that doesn't include comparing it to dog crap.  I think it's a waste of fucking time when one right after the other chimes in on a bad script where the author isn't even around so they can pitch in their 2 cents - that, I think, is more annoying than someone comparing the script to dog crap.  Once one person starts sounding off then it starts a chain reaction of trolling and superdickery.  That shouldn't be tolerated.  

But I guess to do that you need to go to the source, in which case perhaps cutting down on "totally trashing scripts" could be a good thing.  It's unnecessary and I think more people may just see you as a prick rather than trying to help, in which case you're just wasting everyone's time.

"This script sucks worse than dog shit and the writer is obviously a dumbass.  But I hope this helps."  I mean come on.  That's just trolling.


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Crikey! Didn't see the thread that has prompted this.

Maybe all the bickering - that is largely the product of testosterone with no place to go (hint: get out and away from your computer more) - is best off ringfenced here in this one thread.

In all seriousness, though, I can't stand reading some arsehole blurting on with their 'this is sh*t' nonsense. If you don't like a script, you don't need  to voice your displeasure with words that ultimately work as validation of your own perceived superiority.

Surely the rule of thumb is simply: if we were in the real world at a Simply Scripts bar and you read a script with that person in front of you, would you use the words you do from your keyboard? No. Didn't think so.

The most amusing thing is that I've called these nonsense peddlers out before and seen them come back with their dummy spat out, warbling at the audacity to decry their genius reading of a work.

For me, it's also worth observing that the better writers tend to veer clear of the script bashing. When I look at the consistently most helpful, thoughtful and knowledgeable readers, I can never recall them acting like a child calling a script [enter the silly term here].

My singular contribution added, I'm now off to see The Grey.

P.S. Spot on, Ghostie.


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Case by case,

If a script is awful, I don't think we need to say it in a nice way. I think we should refrain from insults and especially personal attacks. "Diarrhea" and "dog poop" aren't ideal vocabulary, for example. But if a script sucks, the writer needs to know it sucks and more importantly, they need to know why it sucks and whenever possible, we should offer possible solutions to the problem. If we stay honest, objective and detailed in our responses, I don't think we need concern ourselves with how the writer might take it because whether they like it or not, we are being constructive.

Frankly, a writer needs to learn to take criticism, especially harsh criticism. Otherwise, they should quit. No one says you have to agree with every review. If someone makes a personal attack or rather a personal remark that's not merited, I think the writer has the right to respond accordingly. Otherwise... quit. Seriously.

At the same time, the board has a problem with gravitating toward bad scripts, especially stuff like The Cabin, Cannibal, Damn You, Bruce and 3 Nazis in a Foxhole. I think we should encourage personal responsibility when it comes to this stuff. Members need to consider if they want new writers to come in and see The Cabin as the hottest thread on the boards. Personally, I don't. But I don't think any new rules should be instituted.

On the other hand, there's cases where the writer might have a narcissistic complex and feed off negative feedback, going so far as posting a ton of bro douchebag YouTube videos that have nothing to do with scripts on the site. Obviously, you guys know what I'm talking about. This is when I think things get especially counterproductive and a mod might consider stepping in.

And for fuck's sake, don't post if you're on a bender! I see this less and less nowadays but it's definitely been a factor in past flame wars.

Nevertheless... Case by case with just a tip in the direction of Screw 'em. No holds barred.


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In answer to Berts question.  Yes!
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Well half the time it's really quite tricky to tell if someone is new or not - if they post on the boards then it becomes clear.

If it's so important to be gentle to newbies, then have a 'New to Script-writing' section where people can post in the knowledge that feedback will be tailored.

People learn loads from other people's feedback - and people take a lot of time out to read scripts and feedback.

I'm not too sure I've so much sympathy for those who post simply as a copyright/ repository/ chance to get aired, and give nothing back.
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In answer to Berts question.  Yes!


Finally, a voice of reason!  Well put, brother LedHead.

James, I'm with you as well, but I do have a soft spot in my heart for The Cabin and of course, the granddaddy's granddady, "Chris Halverson's Cannibal".

Many of you others seriuosly need to relax and not take everything so damn seriously.

BEGIN RANT:

If any of you honestly think that I go out of my way to purposely trash scripts and writers on a normal basis, without trying or wanting to help, you're simply delusional.  I know for a fact that many SS'ers will stand up for me and make it clear that I have helped them on numerous occasions and gone way above and beyond, on my own personal time, for no other reason than to help.

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Quoted from James McClung
...I think the writer has the right to respond


Yeah - if they are around.


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At the same time, the board has a problem with gravitating toward bad scripts


This is the more pertinent issue. Don't know how you solve it though.
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Can someone explain to me the difference between the "case by case" category and the "Sometimes maybe if the author is a dick" category?

James


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Can someone explain to me the difference between the "case by case" category and the "Sometimes maybe if the author is a dick" category?

James


Case by Case means sometimes maybe if the reviewer is a dick.
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Case by Case means sometimes maybe if the reviewer is a dick.


I disagree. The writer can be a sweetheart but if their script's garbage, it needs to be pointed out to them. It's not enough just to say it needs work. This has been the case before.


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Schadenfreude i/ˈʃɑːdənfrɔɪdə/ (German: [ˈʃaːdənˌfʁɔʏdə]) is pleasure derived from the misfortunes of others.[1]

I'll admit, when I read a shitty script, it makes me feel better about my own. I try not to jump on the band wagon anymore once the author has taken some licks. I like to be first to the party for a good bashing.

When I read a freshly posted script and get ready to torpedo it, only to find someone else beat me to the point... "Sunnava!"

Yes... Schadenfreude...

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I will vouch for Jeff helping people out extensively, including new members. I know of many examples.

I don't condone attacking a script just for the sake of it. Being honest about its flaws, yes. Where is the line? Who can say. Best not to bother moderators with having to police this kind of thing.
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Positive:
it helps the person develop thick skin against criticism.
they're being honest.
the review often gives you several ideas on what to improve on.
if they like something, they'll let you know.

Negative:
crushes people's spirits.
certain scripts get more attention.

That's what I came up with. It's people's form of expression. Granted it could be tamed, but why? People are giving their time to read something of yours for free. they should have the right to review it anyway they like.

Jeff and Phil give good feedback as they trash your script. Jeff gives longer feedback which I am amazed he can do. lol. And lucky for me, I was already trashed so I developed a thick skin. .

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When I read a freshly posted script and get ready to torpedo it, only to find someone else beat me to the point... "Sunnava!"

Yes... Schadenfreude...James




Now, that my friend, is some funny shit.  Hopefully enough has been said.  If anyone's feeling are still hurting, go read "Chris Halverson's Cannibal".  There's no way you won't feel better.

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I'm not too sure I've so much sympathy for those who post simply as a copyright/ repository/ chance to get aired, and give nothing back.

I believe Don started this website because he loves scripts and wanted it to be a site for screenplays. Produced and non produced.  I doubt the forum was the main idea behind it.

Anyway. I remember a kid named UsaKing. His scripts got trashed a lot. I thought that was sad because as messed up as they were, I actually saw some talent there. He will never be main stream, but neither will John Waters.  


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I don't condone attacking a script just for the sake of it. Being honest about its flaws, yes. Where is the line? Who can say. Best not to bother moderators with having to police this kind of thing.


This is a good point. How are we supposed to go about enforcing "zero tolerance?" At what point does a harsh review become trashing? Can one sarcastic remark too many put it over the edge?

Zero tolerance is zero tolerance. If there's any measures to be taken against this sorta thing, I don't zero tolerance is the way. How often do scripts get ruthlessly trashed anyway and more importantly, how many people are actually in on it when they are trashed? Quite few, I'd say. Even Damn You, Bruce! started to get good reviews after a certain point.


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A few last thoughts.

1) it's not just Jeff, although i better deal with this now. I almost left SS because of a dreamscale once over. I asked Don to remove my script from the OWC, apologised for getting involved and suggested I withdraw from SS. He refused, bless him, and I'm still here. I simply felt inadequate.

I was fresh to it all, still am, but the brutal onslaught to a newbie was overpowering, when you don't really know what it is all about.

But lets be honest others have done the same. Who is the writer, what do they know, what could they offer? Are rarely asked.

Actually, not so long ago, i was  going to start a thread called, "Who's lost it this week?", as it happens to a lot of readers. Every now and then someone out of the blue, maybe not a usual suspect,  has a go at a script. Which leads me to a few suggestions;

Rule 1 : if someone has beaten up a script, don't follow suit. All you have to say is I agree, maybe then look for more positive suggestions.

Rule 2: try not to repeat the same thing. Ok a bit like (1) but we can all have seen those who choose to repeat the same arguments. Let try and avoid that.

Rule 3 : try and see who the writer is, if you really want to let fly.

Rule 4. : think of another rule as I'm running out of them!!!

I love this site and before anyone thinks different, the best feedback and most detailed advice I have ever received was from Jeff, after the following OWC. Life is not always black and white but maybe we can separate honest, from cruel.

We all know the difference and it up to us to apply this.

I'm going to bed and will let you lot fight all night long whilst I snore.

Ps saw Crouching dragon hidden tiger tonight.. Haven't see it for a while. Gosh i Love that film. Isn't that the kind of thing we should discuss??


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Quoted from James McClung
...stuff like The Cabin, Cannibal, Damn You, Bruce and 3 Nazis in a Foxhole.


This is where the "case-by-case" comes from.

"The Cabin" might have been the first, but it is a periodic problem -- and today's skirmish, which is actually quite minor by comparison to some in the past -- just got me to wondering about the consensus thinking on the boards.


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It DRAGS DOWN THE REPUTATION OF SIMPLYSCRIPTS - makes this board look like an unprofessional mess, both to potential new members, AND TO INDUSTRY PROFESSIONALS WHO MAY BE VIEWING THE BOARDS.


I also think this is more of an issue today than it has been in the past.  Hardly a week goes by these days that we don't hear about something good happening for somebody.

So maybe a small paradigm shift is in order.  Just a tweak.


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Can someone explain to me the difference between the "case by case" category and the "Sometimes maybe if the author is a dick" category?


A subtle distinction.  I was primarily talking about you  


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Where is the line? Who can say.


Some may not believe it, but I do take deleting posts kind of seriously, and often feel kind of uncomfortable acting as a censor.

That is why I ask general stuff from time to time.  It helps to know how people on the boards feel about a topic like this.



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Can it not be said that one mans criticism is another mans attack?

I've seen scathing reviews be met with appreciation and honest sincerity and I have seen people who dig ever so slightly at a writer’s fragile ego and he/she explodes.

What exactly is trashing defined as?

Case in point-

I reviewed a script and was short and not so sweet. In fact, I was a bit of a$$hole. I don’t think I was over the top but Don disagreed and pulled my post and called me on it via a PM.

I, at first thought he was dead wrong and I still think he was being a little hard on me, but bottom line is...

It's his site and the definition of harsh falls under his definitions, not mine.

I reposted a comprehensive in depth detailed critique of his script and posted it instead.

The result,

The writer never showed up for either review.

BUT it did teach me that I should be mindful of how harsh I should be and that the eye in the sky IS watching.

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I think there’s a difference between harsh reviews and ones that are just cruel. You can be harsh without being mean. Honesty is often used as a shield when the true goal is cruelty. People who claim their cruel (not harsh, cruel) criticisms are just being honest are in many ways the least honest people of all. They’re just being mean. Honesty is just their excuse for it.

Secondly, there’s no reason to get upset if a writer doesn’t come around. Readers need to get over any sense of entitlement. What members get out of this community is entirely up to them.

Yes, you need to be able to take criticism. But it’s generally not true that you’ll be ripped to shreds in this industry. If your writing isn’t good enough, you’ll just be ignored.

Contrary to what some would have you think, the feedback you get in the industry (if you’re lucky enough to get some) is actually quite positive. The people in Hollywood that I’ve met have been for the most part really nice. Very busy but polite. They don’t just trash you the way a lot of inexperienced people might think. My experiences have been surprisingly positive.

And people in Hollywood generally appreciate a good attitude. They really do. Attitude is important. It’s one of the most important assets you can possess.

Most of these arrogant know-it-alls have written very little. Most have never worked on a production and have no idea how movies are really made. Their ideology is more pet peeve based than from any practical experience. They have poor attitudes and negative views of the industry in general. They hurl insults in the guise of help and hide behind the banner of honesty when they’re called out. If that’s the help you’re looking for, it’s all yours.

So, yeah, a horse may be lead to water, but if the cowboy is planning to drown him, he’s not really doing the horse any favors.


Breanne


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Maybe it's about time for another sabbatical?


Maybe it's time for you to grow up!



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I will return to my constructive ways and leave out all references to diarrhea, dog poop (by any name imaginable), and other bodily excrement.


You are about as constructive in your reviews as Hitler was in solving Germany's problems back in the forties.  You are nothing but a frustrated writer who lives with his parents and has nothing to show for in his life.  Rather than try to make everyone as miserable as you, do something to make your life better.

Jeff, you told a new guy that his script smelled worse than a dog rolling in shit.  How the living fuck is this even close to be constructive?  I can almost guarantee that Kamil will not show his face around here again because of you and your misery-sharing attitude.

You talk about about I crapped on other people's scripts?  Fine, pull out the comments from my last ten posts and I'll do the same for you.  That's not enough?  How about the last twenty?  The last fifty?  The truth is that shitting on people's scripts are all you do.  I can pull more crap out of the last ten or twenty reviews of yours than you can in the last five hundred of mine.  Why?  Because I want to help writers; you just want to put them down to make yourself feel better.

I'm putting the killfile back on your name.  I recommend that others do the same.  If anyone has any questions in how to do this, feel free to pm me.

This site is so much better when I can't read your immature hate-filled nonsense.


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Hi Breanne - you've made some good points here, but some of them I don't figure.


Quoted from Breanne Mattson
Readers need to get over any sense of entitlement. What members get out of this community is entirely up to them.

My input is someone else's output - and vice versa.


Quoted from Breanne Mattson
Yes, you need to be able to take criticism. But it’s generally not true that you’ll be ripped to shreds in this industry.

Because if you're meeting people, then they often like your stuff.


Quoted from Breanne Mattson
The people in Hollywood that I’ve met have been for the most part really nice. Very busy but polite. They don’t just trash you the way a lot of inexperienced people might think. My experiences have been surprisingly positive.

I've met production people, and actors - the actors in particular always think you're ace. Dodgy scripts aren't going to get you there though.


Quoted from Breanne Mattson
Most of these arrogant know-it-alls have written very little. Most have never worked on a production and have no idea how movies are really made. Their ideology is more pet peeve based than from any practical experience. They have poor attitudes and negative views of the industry in general. They hurl insults in the guise of help and hide behind the banner of honesty when they’re called out.

Do you mean Dreamscale, here? I just think you're wandering somewhat.


Quoted from Breanne Mattson
So, yeah, a horse may be lead to water, but if the cowboy is planning to drown him, he’s not really doing the horse any favors.

No. No, he's not. Erm. Thanks for that.
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Quoted from Forgive
My input is someone else's output - and vice versa.


That doesn’t make any sense. You can learn from reviewing whether the writer responds or not. Some writers may post a script just to hook up with filmmakers. You can review it if you want but getting upset when the writer doesn’t respond makes no sense. If it bothers you that much, you can just quit reviewing the scripts of people you don’t know or those you don’t think contribute. It’s that simple.


Quoted from Forgive
Because if you're meeting people, then they often like your stuff.


Even those who pass on your material are generally nice about it.


Quoted from Forgive
I've met production people, and actors - the actors in particular always think you're ace. Dodgy scripts aren't going to get you there though.


I’m talking about people you meet during the pitch and sell process. Those others come later.


Quoted from Forgive
Do you mean Dreamscale, here? I just think you're wandering somewhat.


I mean arrogant know-it-alls in general. I’m not wandering at all. The thread is about trashing scripts. I made a point about the people most guilty of that.


Breanne


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Quoted from Breanne Mattson
I’m talking about people you meet during the pitch and sell process. Those others come later.


You may want to reword this in terms that Jeff can relate to.  He's not (and never will be) at the pitch and sell process.


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You know, I support most every writer here including you Phil,

If all you are going to do is focus on Jeff and continue making demeaning remarks, you may as well remove your previous threads accusing him of making demeaning remarks.

The whole "I hate Jeff" thing is well understood and doesn’t need to be ground any further into the ground.

Or are you simply calling him out in hope of getting him banned?

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There's a popular bandwagon on this site that's been an issue for some time, and it has to do with finding new and quicker ways of cutting someone's work to shreds.  

This is nothing more than a reflection of the writer's own insecurities and need to display their so called "superiority" over the other members.  It's the same three or four jokers that have been lurking and trolling around this site for years.

There's a way of letting a writer know the areas of their script that needs work, and then there's the point where you're only amusing yourself and desperately trying to amuse your peers.  It's a joke, and a tired joke at that.  

Some have the nerve to suggest that this is simply "constructive criticism" and then when you're called on your questionable behavior you try to argue about it with more or less the same ugly sarcasm.

If this post upsets you, then you know you're guilty.  STOP IT!  

  
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Quoted from Ledbetter

The whole "I hate Jeff" thing is well understood and doesn’t need to be ground any further into the ground.


You're absolutely right Shawn,  Jeff is the victim here.  He's never done anything to deserve that kind of treatment.  Has he?  
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Doesn't work anymore Michael.

Troll elsewhere if you please...

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Okay - I'm going to accept most of what you've written back to me, as you've got some valid points. Accepted.

But I'm not entirely taken with some of the below stuff.



Quoted from Breanne Mattson
That doesn’t make any sense.

It does make sense. If I say x,y,z on your script, that's what you take from it. You can ditch it if you want, but it's still output that you are receiving. Else, you need to be more clear on this point.


Quoted from Breanne Mattson
You can learn from reviewing whether the writer responds or not.

I completely agree - in fact I think you can learn more from reviewing than from being reviewed - but surely this is the point for absent people? If the writer does not review, then he does not learn, and then there is an imbalance, as only one party is reviewing. If both parties review, then there is learning on both sides, and a fair balance.



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Some writers may post a script just to hook up with filmmakers.

I don't really care for this - there are loads of websites that you can post on just to link up with people - anyone posting here should know that feedback is emphasized - if not, then they should take time out to figure the site first. Otherwise - what's wrong with circalit or the like?


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You can review it if you want but getting upset when the writer doesn’t respond makes no sense. If it bothers you that much, you can just quit reviewing the scripts of people you don’t know or those you don’t think contribute.

It doesn't upset me. Not in the least. To be honest (if you'd allow) I just think you're using emotive language here. Far from being upset, I simply think that people should make a contribution. There are other web-sites. Nobdy makes people post here, but it's a great site for immediate feedback.

This isn't the only site I'm on - like most people here - one of the main benefits - immediate feedback - whether people like it or not. They can post elsewhere if they don't need the immediacy, or if they just want the script to be available.

Thanks for your thoughts on this.

Simon
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Quoted from Breanne Mattson
I think there’s a difference between harsh reviews and ones that are just cruel. You can be harsh without being mean. Honesty is often used as a shield when the true goal is cruelty. People who claim their cruel (not harsh, cruel) criticisms are just being honest are in many ways the least honest people of all. They’re just being mean. Honesty is just their excuse for it.

Secondly, there’s no reason to get upset if a writer doesn’t come around. Readers need to get over any sense of entitlement. What members get out of this community is entirely up to them.

Yes, you need to be able to take criticism. But it’s generally not true that you’ll be ripped to shreds in this industry. If your writing isn’t good enough, you’ll just be ignored.

Contrary to what some would have you think, the feedback you get in the industry (if you’re lucky enough to get some) is actually quite positive. The people in Hollywood that I’ve met have been for the most part really nice. Very busy but polite. They don’t just trash you the way a lot of inexperienced people might think. My experiences have been surprisingly positive.

And people in Hollywood generally appreciate a good attitude. They really do. Attitude is important. It’s one of the most important assets you can possess.

Most of these arrogant know-it-alls have written very little. Most have never worked on a production and have no idea how movies are really made. Their ideology is more pet peeve based than from any practical experience. They have poor attitudes and negative views of the industry in general. They hurl insults in the guise of help and hide behind the banner of honesty when they’re called out. If that’s the help you’re looking for, it’s all yours.

So, yeah, a horse may be lead to water, but if the cowboy is planning to drown him, he’s not really doing the horse any favors.


Breanne


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You may want to reword this in terms that Jeff can relate to.  He's not (and never will be) at the pitch and sell process.


Phil



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I’m voting case by case,

I honestly like the honest feedback some people give but can understand why some newbie’s like me would find it difficult to take or find it offensive. You never like to hear your work sucks especially if you worked long and hard on it but sometimes you need that brutality to help you develop.

I think all the different opinions and attitudes on SS is what makes it different, if we were all robots saying and sounding exactly the same, it would be very boring and unproductive IMO

I’m not one for personal attacks but I don’t mind a bit of banter if it is light hearted and not mean spirited. I’m certainly not one for calling an author names for no good reason and as for people who leave scripts and don’t comment. I just try not to comment on their scripts now which suits me fine but I think it’s a shame because some of the scripts aren’t bad but why waste the time if they can’t even be bothered to even thank the person leaving feedback. It’s just politeness IMO, all it takes is a simple “thank you” for looking at my script. Just my thoughts anyway.

What has always amazed me as a newbie is how many replies the crappier scripts (not to be harsh) get over the better ones, and I’m even guilty of that myself. Guess it’s easier to be negative sometimes.          

Steve

P.S  R.I.P Whitney Houston, just found out she has died while writing this, she was only 48, damn shame!
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It's Saturday night. Lets all go have a few beers!!!  


Sunday morning here so having a few coffee's recovering from last night's beers
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Not sure what the question is, but there's never a need for outright trashing a pre-pro's script.

I think you've got to adapt to whom you're talking to...if it's an experienced writer, or someone you know well theres's more leeway, but if they're relatively new you should encourage them or stay quiet.
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Quoted from CoopBazinga
I just try not to comment on their scripts now which suits me fine but I think it’s a shame because some of the scripts aren’t bad but why waste the time if they can’t even be bothered to even thank the person leaving feedback. It’s just politeness IMO, all it takes is a simple “thank you” for looking at my script. Just my thoughts anyway.


Many people may not realise there is a forum where people discuss their scripts or if they do they might not be familiar with responding on forums.   They aren't submitting them to the forum, they are submitting them to the web site.   There can be many reasons they don't respond that have nothing to do with politeness.

I, honestly, do not have any issue with harsh reviews.  However, I don't and will not ever tolerate insulting remarks about the author.  You don't know who these authors are and you don't have any "right" to make assumptions about their character.  You can tear their script apart as much as you like, hopefully constructively, but leave the author out of it.  

That includes remarks like this...


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Please, work on your grammar and sentence structure.  If you're still in 2nd Grade, ask your teacher for some help after school.  There's just no excuse for this, IMO.


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If all you are going to do is focus on Jeff and continue making demeaning remarks, you may as well remove your previous threads accusing him of making demeaning remarks.


Apples and oranges, here.  Through my constructive criticism, I'm trying to get Jeff to stop posting hate-filled comments on everyone, especially the new guys, like Kamil.  Saying comments like I'd rather eat a homeless man's shit than finish reading your script. doesn't help anyone.

And I know he never used these words, exactly; it is his style of constructive criticism, though.


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Zero tolerance.

If the author's a dick then they don't deserve feedback, and the constructive approach is to ignore them and focus on scripts that are worthy of attention.

If you comment on a script, your primary intent should be to aid the script's writer in bettering their work.  Reviews which are clearly written with the intent of being "entertaining" do not accomplish this.  Reviews with excessive profanity or creative criticisms rarely accomplish this.

As Breanne rightly states above, reviews on Simply are offered in the spirit of generosity and selflessness.  I think it's generally pretty clear if a reviewer is keeping that in mind or not.
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Quoted from Scar Tissue Films
I think you've got to adapt to whom you're talking to...if it's an experienced writer, or someone you know well theres's more leeway, but if they're relatively new you should encourage them or stay quiet.


I disagree. I've read a lot of noob scripts and I feel like many of them start out with certain habits and mentalities that need to be done away with right away. The sooner, the better.

And while I think that they're entitled to some leniency when it comes to format, some of them botch it so bad that it's as clear they barely did any research. More a symptom of carelessness than inexperience IMO.

Better to be selective what you let slide than allow writers to repeat their same mistakes in four or five future scripts just because they're finding their footing. Honestly, I'm finding more and more beginner writers feel the same way and are open to tougher feedback.


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The idea is for everyone to stop posting these kinds of smart a** comments and to stop amusing yourself with one liners under the guise of being "constructive".  And that's been a problem on simplyscripts for years and drives a lot of people away.

It's not like Jeff dropped by and all of the freakin' sudden it's a problem.  This is an ongoing thing on the forums and its not fun, funny or constructive.  There's a crew of members here that rally around each other and encourage this script bashing crap, and if you have the nerve to disagree with these people you're told you're out of line and way off base.  How dare you question a veteran member.  Please.

It's ridiculous.  One of the previous posters said it right.  It's a lot easier to be negative than constructive.  Constructive means reading a script in its entirety and taking careful notes.  You can hate a script by page three, and that's okay, but don't spend an entire "review" cracking bad jokes like Rodney Dangerfield.

News flash.  This is discouraging to the writer!  But I think many of you know that it's discouraging and are just waiting for the backlash so you can argue and crack more f**kin jokes.

Weak.  I've been gone awhile but I see some things never change around here
  
  

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Sorry guys, gals, and Phil...I was enjoying a lovely filet mignon dinner with my parents.  Yesterday was their 50th anniversary.  Very nice to be able to enjoy it with them.

Phil, I know you're trying to bait me into saying things that will most likely get me banned, so I'm sorry, but I can't play your childish games.  You and I both know you are a flat out lair and cheater and others on here know as well.

To think that you're seriously trying to say you haven't posted completely condescending and ill-will intended feedback, for no other reason than to egg someone on to a fight or just to put them down with something you alone thought was funny, is the actual funny part.

If you think you do or ever could provide half the constructive feedback that I do on a daily basis is also ludicrous.  One of the big reasons you don't like me is because I've correctly trashed some of your scripts and you just aren't used to seeing that, and were never able to get over it.

I always found it odd how you'd PM me in the past and try to get me to go after Screenrider or whoever else was bugging you on that day, and if you want to say that's BS, don't be too surprised if I pull out those PM's and show the forum the real you.

But, don't worry, I'm not that kind of person, whether you realize that or not.  But, you keep up your BS shit-talking about me and I will, just for clarity's sake.

Phil, go back and re-read my post about the throwing of stones while living in a glass piece of shit apartment, and ask yourself if you're really being true to yourself and what you're preaching here.  It's not about your last 10 or 20 posts, Phil, it's about reality, and you need to somehow find a way to get into it. Maybe Janet can help?  I don't know, but Screenrider and I are praying for you.
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My 2 bobs worth:

I admit my old buddy Jeff was outta line for some comments (which he has apologized for). If he had not included the 'dogshit' and 'fucking pathetic' lines, then this thread wouldn't exist.

I thought we were gonna do something about people posting scripts but never replying to reviews? This is what causes half the problem!

I think if a new script is posted, and the writer doesn't acknowledge this by say, 2 days, then it's fair to say they aren't hanging around. Then the regs aren't wasting their reading time.

Or else, make it so an account is needed to post.

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I'm sorry, but I'm quite upset with a number of people's comments that seem to be aimed at me, whether or not they mention my name, exactly.

'Jack", you appear to be aiming your comments at me, and I'm very surprised, since I was the only one that I can see who gave you very detailed, great feedback on your script, "Kirkwood", back in 2008.

I spent many hours with my detailed notes and feedback, and I highly doubt anything I said isn't something you agree with and most likely changed in later drafts.

This is just 1 example of so many in which I've gone above and beyond what any other SS'er offered, and all for the ridiculous price of 100% free.

I'd like to hear back from you on your thoughts on this, Jack...and if I took your words wrong here, my bad, but I doubt that's the case.
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The two sides of this argument - first, Breanne is completely right in everything she says. No one in Hollywood has the time to trash anyone, and on top of that it would be bad business for them do to so. So no need to thicken up anyone's skin as long as they can take a few hundred "no's" for an answer.

The other side of the coin is that because of the hundreds of thousands whose chief impetus for writing a script was merely having an idea creep into his or her head, Hollywood now has very high walls and strong gates to keep most of us out.

Enjoying following this one from a distance, please continue...


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Dreamscale,

No I wasn't talking about you or aiming at you.  But I'm just saying is all.  If we ever got into it, I don't recall the situation.  

In general...

But there are some folks that love none other than bashing other people's work as if it were a sport.  You have to admit that this is a problem on simplyscripts.

I've called people out on it before but was told to keep quiet because I haven't been around long enough.  BS.

Sorry if you felt you were targeted.  But you know what I'm talking about and so does everybody else, whether we can admit to it or not.  
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Jack, I can and do freely admit that I have done this on many occasions, but, IMO,, nothing I said was incorrect or unwarranted.  Sure, some things I've said were meant to come off humorously, but again, we see this from time to time and for the most part, it's quite funny.

If that's such a bad thing, I'm guilty and I plead no contest.  But, it's so obvious that many of the actual offenders now seem to forget that they too have done the exact thing, time and time again.

But, more importantly, this whole thing is obviously aimed at me, whether your intention was aimed at me or not.  In life, you have to take the good with the fucking ugly, and I'll stand tall and proud, knowing that I've gone above and beyond, time and time again for many, many writers and their scripts in here.  To attack me or try and discredit me is beyond uncool.

The funny thing is that, many have talked about the "pack influence" here, or anywhere for that matter, and now, it seems that it's uncool to stick up for me, based on a few "influential" SS'ers, who we all know damn well.

If you guys don't like what I have to say, so be it. If you think I don't know what I'm talking about and provide feedback, again, so be it.  You want to call me out on critique, bring it.  I'm prepared and ready, and Jack, if this doesn't apply to you, that's cool, as I didn't think you and I had a problem or beef.
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As I said before, I wasn't talking about you.  

I'm adding my own experiences with certain people here and you are excluded.   It just so happens that you are a part of this discussion on the forum.

I just went back and re-read your Kirkwood review and your notes were awesome!  It was hard to take, but I didn't make a federal case out of it.  

And if you read my earlier posts on this forum I mentioned that we ALL need to be careful what we say to each other and lay off the one-liners that are meant to be hurtful, hateful and sometimes fueled by jealousy or the need to lash out to anyone who dares to call you out on your BS.
  
This has been a terrible problem here since I joined six years ago and it's usually the ones who've been here the longest that throw their weight around.

And Kirkwood is a piece of sh*t.  I re-read it a few days ago.    
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Jack, as I PM'd to you, I apologize for assuming you were referring to me.  We're totally cool, as far as I'm concerned

I appreciate that you cleared this up, and BTW, as I said in my feedback to Kirkwood, it was far from "shit".  You're a good writer and Kirkwood showed so many positive writing qualities...and a Hell of alot of time and effort in terms of attention to detail and research.

Thanks, man.
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Awesome! I'm still the only one to vote on the "Don't even care, not a problem"... I expectected better categories from you, Bert...

Aren't you like a mad scientist or something???

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Case by case.

I think, sometimes, people can get carried away. A funny negative review can make it a must read, which in turn just feeds the frenzy. But enough is enough, you don't need twenty reviews of people trying to one up each other and just solidify how bad this script is. That is out of line. You said your piece, move on.

When I first joined here, I think it might have been in it's infancy, but there was a script called Axe Massacre which was destroyed by Balt and a few others. What was funny about that, was the writer was so adamant he was right and everyone else was wrong. He's probably gone on to be successful but at the time, what made that whole thing amusing was his refusal to see where he went wrong.

That kind of reaction, I think, warrants the ridicule he ended up with. People were trying to help him and he wanted none of it. . I gotta admit. I  find that type of script trashing amusing because he got some good solid advise and in turn, responded like a spoilt kid that never got what he wanted for Xmas.

On the other hand, bashing people's scripts for the sake of it is just... sad. But if we go along the lines of "I don't like it, I wont even comment on it"  - that brings this place to a standstill.

I do think this place needs to become a little more "accessible". It's name is being tarnished and I think we need to become a little more responsible for what we post.
It's all well and good having a community but a community unwilling to help others is just pointless.









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The voices in my head told me to vote zero tolerance, but I will admit to taking a perverse pleasure in seeing a script and author get decimated. It's like dead baby jokes; completely wrong, but amusing.


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Wow where did this thread come from?

It seems everyone has had their say and there have been some knives in backs too.  I get the feeling this thread has an alternative motive. Rather than being about script bashing it's more about the people who script bash?

Personally I feel sometimes the bashing can go too far. I have been on the end of some harsh critique but I have to admit that it has always been with good advice too.
If a review offers advice to improve it at least gives the writer something positive and they can't see it as positive then they should take off the blinkers. When we write a script we surely know not everyone will like it and so must accept we are going to receive some negative feedback.

I don't however like the bandwagon that people like to jump on.  Scoob mentioned it  and he's right.  Too many people read a bad review and then feel the need to simply write 'This sucks arse' and so on. I don't think is helpful in the slightest.  Some people here are getting a bad press but I think they do offer some good advice too.

If a script does suck and the writer doesn't even appear on the boards then why not just leave the script alone and leave no feedback?

I think this thread might run and run.....


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Quoted from alffy
If a script does suck and the writer doesn't even appear on the boards then why not just leave the script alone and leave no feedback?


My money is on the writer has been scared off due to the harsh reviews his script has received.  This is the opposite of what this board is about.

Now that the votes are in (so to speak), will there be a policy change on the boards?


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My opinion is if someone likes my story, Great! If they dont, well thats cool to. Art is very subjective.

I really dont get into grammar "correcting" since the definition of "right grammar" isnt something that even the most educated grammarian's can agree on now, or for the past two thousand years. Just try and spell things right! (something I need to work on.)

Also I found it funny how things are changing as far as the Structure of a Screenplay goes. Things that where thought of as serious violations just a few years ago are now becoming more common. Its weird.

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Quoted from alffy
It seems everyone has had their say and there have been some knives in backs too.  I get the feeling this thread has an alternative motive. Rather than being about script bashing it's more about the people who script bash?


I`m gonna jump on your bandwagon and say you`re totally right. Everyone seems more concerned about bashing each other and clearing each other`s names, rather than the topic itself.

My own opinion is that newbies need guidance, alot of their scripts include format issues, grammar, CAPS, underlining and spelling mistakes let alone the actual story itself. They need pointed in the right direction and I don`t care if they don`t return feedback, I just avoid the ones who tell me I have to read their scripts and don`t participate at all.

If it`s an experienced writer and their script is total garbage, ill let them know, but an experienced writer shouldn`t have the issues a newbie has and so the review is more spent on the story.

Just avoid really nasty comments please, I know a lot of it is in jest, but some people don`t have strong backs or a sense of humor.  

Mark

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Quoted from alffy
I get the feeling this thread has an alternative motive.


If you are looking in my direction with that comment, I assure you that was not my intent, and I find it unfortunate that detour was taken.

In fairness, I can also see how you might think that -- but there are legions "guilty" of this at various times and we all know it.


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Now that the votes are in (so to speak), will there be a policy change on the boards?


I kind of think that time may have arrived, and the tally is pretty clear -- provided that people really meant what they voted. I hope so.

The main thing I take away from the conversation is this:  Every new script from a new unknown author should be treated as a potential new member.  Please do not take a total dump on them.

Helio always springs to mind during these conversations.  Generally acknowledged as a fine storyteller, though his English is a bit wonky.  How would he be received on the boards today?

I think I will be taking these forward -- in an attempt to make the board more professional and just a little more welcoming in general:

*  For unknown authors, if you cannot say something instructive or encouraging, say nothing.  It will have to be case-by-case, but I (and the other mods) will be judging a little more critically going forward, and if the post comes up missing you'll probably know why.
*  For unknown authors, one totally negative review is enough.  Until the author shows up, do not pile on -- or at the very least, your post should bring something new to the table.
*  These rules do not apply to known members who post a turd; gloves remain off, as we assume they can take it and would want to know.
*  If it is an author who posts numerous scripts and never shows his face on the boards, again, one post alerting others to this fact is enough.

Always remember that Shorts with no activity sink off the boards pretty fast; ask yourself "Are my comments really important enough to bump this awful script to the very top of the heap -- or is it better if it just gets slowly flushed away?"

Any additional thoughts or some disagreement with this?


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Quoted from bert
Any additional thoughts or some disagreement with this?


Sounds reasonable. I'm not a member of Movie Poet, but people act as though it's so much more civilized there. Is that true? If so, why do you think that is?

I'd guess it's because most of the scripts are written by participating board members. You have to sign up to post a script or a review... I think. Here, alot of scripts just get dumped anonymously. Something to think about for Don, although, I'm sure he won't change his policies...

Everyone seems a bit more constructive when they know who they're talking to...

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James, I have never posted on MP, except a few reviews. I hung out there for a few weeks reading, though. Boring. The arguments can be a drag here, but they also are a sign of life. That's what's best about SS. There is life here. It's also much more useful when it comes to feedback. I'm not knocking MP, just saying it's more interesting here.
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Quoted from jwent6688


Sounds reasonable. I'm not a member of Movie Poet, but people act as though it's so much more civilized there. Is that true? If so, why do you think that is?

it is more civilized. Chris would never let any "trashing" of a script or person go on there. It is also a lot smaller than SS and revolves mostly around the monthly contests.

Long ago I would have said that it might be more unruly here because we have so many "kids" here, but we don't anymore. Which to me is sad. I love seeing young people grow up and mature and do amazing things like making their own films.


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Long ago I would have said that it might be more unruly here because we have so many "kids" here, but we don't anymore. Which to me is sad. I love seeing young people grow up and mature and do amazing things like making their own films.


Do you think that, maybe, some of these kids were scared off?

If Little Tommy Newguy posts his first script, here, and the first reviews of it add up to, "I've rather eat a steaming turd than read this script again.  Stop wasting our time!" how long do you think Tommy will stay here?


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Do you think that, maybe, some of these kids were scared off?


Yes, Phil.  I personally know for a fact that you have scared off numerous people, kids and adults alike over the years.

It'll be good to see your softer, more sensitive side going forward.

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My money is on the writer has been scared off due to the harsh reviews his script has received.  This is the opposite of what this board is about.


I only meant that maybe we should not bother bashing/reviewing scripts by writers that submit lots of scripts but show up on the boards.


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If you are looking in my direction with that comment, I assure you that was not my intent, and I find it unfortunate that detour was taken.


I wasn't looking in any direction. I hope I haven't caused offence?

I do wish everyone would try to get on as Simplyscripts is a great site and has helped many a struggling writer.


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*  These rules do not apply to known members who post a turd; gloves remain off, as we assume they can take it and would want to know.


Who is considered a known member? Is it by the amount of posts by that person?

Just wondered as I am new and don't want people taking off the gloves and bashing me...though I probably need it

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How about we just don't bash the scripts?  I'm not talking negative reviews; I'm talking about comments that insult the writer.


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I hope I haven't caused offence?


Nope, not at all.


Quoted from coop
Who is considered a known member?


By definition, someone you know.  Someone earlier likened SS to a pub -- and surely the way you speak (or post) to a stranger should be different, and in theory, more respectful.


Quoted from kev
I have never posted on MP, except a few reviews. Boring. The arguments can be a drag here, but they also are a sign of life. That's what's best about SS. There is life here.


I also want to be sensitive to this.  While it may be a bit harsh to write off MP as "boring", it is a different atmosphere, for sure.

You would have to be blind to maintain that occasional bashing is not amusing, but lets reserve that treatment for our "friends".  That is kind of what I'm saying.  


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One thing I have notice here: whenever we go too long without an OWC, these arguments blow up. It's almost like the tension is relieved by the OWC. I'm not pining for one, I know they are a ton of work. It's just an observation. Again, most of this is all the sign of a healthy website. It's like a family: what would Thanksgiving be without an argument or two!
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My idea to solve the problem would be quite simple. The first person to review a script from what appears to be a newbie/unknown simply writes something along the lines of...

'I didn't like this, if you want to know why respond and I shall tell you.'

Then we wait for the reply. Nobody else needs to add anything unless the author gets involved. We all save time not reading a script where our reviews will fall on deaf ears, you don't waste your own time writing a review and you don't waste the time of those of us who will inevitably read your reviews. Everybody wins, don't they?

The only way this could work is if everyone chose to stick to it though. To me it doesn't seem like it would be a hard rule to follow, but what do I know?!

Anyway, just my thoughts. I'm off to smoke a doob.

Peace out and that.

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Anyway, just my thoughts. I'm off to smoke a doob.


I'll be right over.  

But, seriously, in regards to your post, no one knows if reviews fall on deaf ears or not.  It's very possible, and even likely that writers who don't respond to feedback, do actually read it.  Maybe they're too shy, too scared of Phil, or just not comfortable getting into a discussion on a subject they're relatively clueless on.

I've seen Simon actually taking your idea on recently, by stating that he has comments if the writer wants to engage.  I see nothing wrong with this, but I also don't see it doing much.  When a script receives either positive or negative feedback, it draws interest.  It's simply human nature to be drawn to either positive stuff, or negative stuff.  No way around it.

I for one will have no problem cutting back on the bashing, for amusement's sake.  I can and will offer critique and the writers can take it on board or decide it's not helpful to them.  Other SS'ers can do the same as they read my feedback.

But everyone needs to understand, it's a public forum, dealing with material that is heavily based on opinions and individual tastes.  There are obviously many technical issues on display as well, and it's here where hard facts and realities are what they are.

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I agree with you that it does draw the interest. When I read the bashing posts I often open up the script just to see how bad it is, so I can see what not to do myself. It's a learning experience for me and I will often think (hope) 'at least my work is not that bad'.

I guess it wouldn't have to be just one reviewer posting and the rest waiting to see if the author responds. Others could also add the same sort of line, just cut out all the swearing and non technical points. Basically we try to encourage the newbies out from their shells to get involved. If they don't chip in, then they lose out. It can be an intimidating atmosphere around here at times, but most people, myself included, believe you need a thick skin for this industry. Criticism sucks, but if it's constructive then it's worth it, I'm sure everyone here will agree on that.

I like that you will cut back on the bashing because sometimes it's hard to tell whether it is a joke or if you are just a big meany. I'm sure if it was face to face it would be clear but to read it's hard to judge the tone some of the time.

Essentially I just want us all to get along. I know this probably isn't possible, but we all live in hope.

Arty.

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Listen... If the Irish and English learn to put aside 800 years of hatred, im talking pilaging,raping ,murder, stealing land and murder and thats just from the english...(did I say murder twice) and get along through SS(Im looking at you ARTY and COOP)

Then surely the rest of you can put your silly little bickering aside and join together hand to hand to become one against the mortal enemy..... The french!

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Can we become one against the Germans instead? The French do good food at least. Plus ze Germans always beat us (the English) in the world cup. Stupid penalties.

I would also like to add, just for the record, I have never pillaged, raped, murdered, stole land or murdered. I speak for myself here, Steve now lives in Oz so who knows what he gets up to...
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As far as I understand the Canadians are purportedly fair game, as they are less intelligent than normal Americans.

Just what I heard, that's all.
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Plus ze Germans always beat us (the English) in the world cup. Stupid penalties.


That`s why I like them

I also figured there would be less French people on this site.

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One thing I have notice here: whenever we go too long without an OWC, these arguments blow up. It's almost like the tension is relieved by the OWC. I'm not pining for one, I know they are a ton of work. It's just an observation. Again, most of this is all the sign of a healthy website. It's like a family: what would Thanksgiving be without an argument or two!


You haven't been around long enough to see some of the doozy OWC arguments.  There's been some really heavy ones.  
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I think I will be taking these forward -- in an attempt to make the board more professional and just a little more welcoming in general:

*  For unknown authors, if you cannot say something instructive or encouraging, say nothing.  It will have to be case-by-case, but I (and the other mods) will be judging a little more critically going forward, and if the post comes up missing you'll probably know why.
*  For unknown authors, one totally negative review is enough.  Until the author shows up, do not pile on -- or at the very least, your post should bring something new to the table.
*  These rules do not apply to known members who post a turd; gloves remain off, as we assume they can take it and would want to know.
*  If it is an author who posts numerous scripts and never shows his face on the boards, again, one post alerting others to this fact is enough.


I'm more or less happy with the ruling but I'm still slightly uncomfortable with the idea of tailoring reviews to suit newer members in general as well as having rules enforcing such. I trust the mods' judgement but it remains to be seen how trashing will be differentiated from strictly negative reviews. As this poll plainly shows, the boards have never been good at reaching consensus and as someone suggested earlier, one man's review might be another's attack.

This coming from someone who doesn't think he trashes scripts.

Anyway, I totally welcome the latter three stipulations. I think they should at least help to smooth over some of the indignation over nonmember scripts, for one thing. And I suppose I welcome change in general. I stand by what I've said earlier in this thread but perhaps there's been a noticeable lack of civility around these parts for some time now.


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For me...

If I see anything remotely resembling this... especially on a new members script...


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Please, work on your grammar and sentence structure.  If you're still in 2nd Grade, ask your teacher for some help after school.  There's just no excuse for this, IMO.


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As far as I understand the Canadians are purportedly fair game, as they are less intelligent than normal Americans.

Just what I heard, that's all.



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Hear, hear! Fucken Canadians...

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We're sorry...


lol Way to stick up for yourselves! You guys like beer, you're ok with me!
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Okay, so I'm gonna take *someone's* approach and just not bother reading all the replies here. (You know I love you...)

But I'm kinda torn on this one. On one hand, we shouldn't tolerate outright trashing. I mean, seriously, what's the point? To show how clever and cruel we can be? Shouldn't that kind of energy be going into our scripts?? Plus, how will we ever learn from our mistakes (which, I believe, is the whole idea of this forum) if instead of constructive feedback, we get bashed into our corners before we've had a chance to fix the problem?

Still, that said, if we're serious about doing this, then we've got to have a tough skin and the bashing can help to develop that.

How about a nice medium? Your script is utter crap and you're a moron...but this is what you can do to fix it

And on a side note, thanks huge for the "read" of my feature, Jeff. No, really, you rock!! :p
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If you are looking in my direction with that comment, I assure you that was not my intent, and I find it unfortunate that detour was taken.

In fairness, I can also see how you might think that -- but there are legions "guilty" of this at various times and we all know it.



I kind of think that time may have arrived, and the tally is pretty clear -- provided that people really meant what they voted. I hope so.

The main thing I take away from the conversation is this:  Every new script from a new unknown author should be treated as a potential new member.  Please do not take a total dump on them.

Helio always springs to mind during these conversations.  Generally acknowledged as a fine storyteller, though his English is a bit wonky.  How would he be received on the boards today?

I think I will be taking these forward -- in an attempt to make the board more professional and just a little more welcoming in general:

*  For unknown authors, if you cannot say something instructive or encouraging, say nothing.  It will have to be case-by-case, but I (and the other mods) will be judging a little more critically going forward, and if the post comes up missing you'll probably know why.
*  For unknown authors, one totally negative review is enough.  Until the author shows up, do not pile on -- or at the very least, your post should bring something new to the table.
*  These rules do not apply to known members who post a turd; gloves remain off, as we assume they can take it and would want to know.
*  If it is an author who posts numerous scripts and never shows his face on the boards, again, one post alerting others to this fact is enough.

Always remember that Shorts with no activity sink off the boards pretty fast; ask yourself "Are my comments really important enough to bump this awful script to the very top of the heap -- or is it better if it just gets slowly flushed away?"

Any additional thoughts or some disagreement with this?


I agree 100% with this.  

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I vote zero tolerance. We could have a really bright but also very green twelve year old on here. Do we want to dash his dreams because we're having a bad day?

Unfortunately as humans, we can be sometimes prone to slips in judgement. Boards are dangerous that way because we don't exercise the same kind of cautions we would out there in the physical reality.

Also, I like to try and find good in every script and usually I can. Totally trashing scripts is unnecessary, serves no purpose and is classless.

I do add a little here though...

We could for fun, (those of us who don't mind) submit our scripts into a Bash and Trash Thread and ask for people to have a blast.   That's different.

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Listen... If the Irish and English learn to put aside 800 years of hatred, im talking pilaging,raping ,murder, stealing land and murder and thats just from the english...(did I say murder twice) and get along through SS(Im looking at you ARTY and COOP)


Hey, what did I do? Oh yeah, all of the above...oops
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I don't see how trashing someone is productive...unless the writer is a dick.  


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This entire thread and discussion is rather baffling to me, still...and based on a few posts, I don't see much difference in what's being said or how it's being said.  I mean, seriously, one post started out saying something to the effect, "Damn, I want to bash this because it's terrible, but I can't anymore."  If I had posted that, not only would it be deleted, but I'd probably be banned.

The other odd thing here is the fact that "only if the author is a dick" choice has received 8 votes, only 2 behind the top choices.  Is this supposed to be serious, or another joke?

But then again, the whole philosophy of treating a potential new member differently than a current or old member, is also pretty strange.  basically, the idea is to have multiple takes on a script, based on who wrote it.

But then again, I guess that's not that strange after all, and really is how things work here and in the world.  There are those who can do no wrong and there are others who can do no right.  Attach Blake Snyder's name to something and the room will grow silent in awe.   Throw out a quote on Eli Roth, and people will run for the hills.

And please note how I decided to use Pro writers as opposed to SS writers, as I didn't want to open up the flood gates again.
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This entire thread and discussion is rather baffling to me, still...and based on a few posts, I don't see much difference in what's being said or how it's being said.  I mean, seriously, one post started out saying something to the effect, "Damn, I want to bash this because it's terrible, but I can't anymore."


Yeah, I saw that.  Then he left genuinely useful feedback -- and he was soundly chastised by a few other members.  I wasn't sure what to do, so I just left it all.

This is all a work in progress and we just do the best we can, you know?

Do you think we should do absolutely nothing in response to a perceived problem?

That is also a solution, sure, but probably not the best solution.


Quoted from Dreamscale
The other odd thing here is the fact that "only if the author is a dick" choice has received 8 votes, only 2 behind the top choices.  Is this supposed to be serious, or another joke?


Yeah, that was a joke.  A joke that ended up getting several votes -- so there you go.


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...the whole philosophy of treating a potential new member differently than a current or old member, is also pretty strange.


But those are the scripts that tend to get ripped the worst, so we are just going to watch those a little closer.

It is probably not perfect, but I do contend that the conversation was useful.

For me, anyway.


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Bert, I do feel your pain...I honestly do.

There are no easy answers in life or in this situation...and there most likely never will be.

The thing(s) that really bug me, though, is the inconsistencies and flat out lying that is flying around.

There was a time when I would purposely be as nice as possible to writers I hadn't seen before.  When I'd spend 30 minutes going over the very basics of writing, again and again, and again, usually never hearing a word back.

Believe it or not, I still engage new writers and members as much as I can, while preaching the Quid Pro Quo mentality SS requires and lives by.

Every once in a while I lose it and say things I obviously shouldn't, in a way that sends some A-Holes through the roof.  And I apologize for that, and I actually mean it.

The way this is playing out, it's making me leery of posting any feedback to anyone, in fear my words will be attacked or misconstrued to the ;point of it being another "trashing" of a poor script.

The whole thing just really has me pissed off and left wondering what the fuck is going on and why.
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The only thing that sends me through the roof angry is when someone forces in their two cents and then they get upset when you dare to disagree on certain points.  Instead of having a discussion, you're forced into agreeing with this person or you're a blind idiot who doesn't know his craft.

Then these members rally their little team together to gang up on you and tell you how wrong you are because you dared to disagree with a veteran member of SS.  

"Well so and so's been here awhile and you should listen to them".  

Oh really?  What if I think they're wrong?  And what if I think their work sucks?  

I don't outright dismiss criticism and I've always rewritten projects here based on the suggestions of reviewers, but I have the right to disagree with some of those criticisms.  

Comments like "I can't get past page 2" aren't gonna fly with me, nor should they be acceptable to anyone else.  The script might be crap, but you don't tell someone their script is crap.  You tell them about a useful book on format, give them some pointers on proper structure, or how to set margins.

If your intention is to be helpful, then read the entire script and take careful notes, or at least point them in the right direction by suggesting books on the subject.  Offer suggestions for change, as many folks here have done for me and it's been invaluable.  But when the feedback is entirely angry and dismissive, I typically tell that person to go screw.  There's no need for that.  

If you act pompous and dismissive of someone's work they're not gonna return with a "Gee, golly, you're so right about everything you said.  This script is a real piece of sh*t.  I'm so glad you stopped by to share your expertise".  The writer will most likely tell you to go screw yourself.  And I won't blame them.    

It's become a contest to see who can have the last word.  Everyone should quit trying to be so clever.      
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I used to mention format, but I don't anymore because it seems you're allowed to write anyway you want these days. So I skip that unless it's totally wrong, like wrong font, margins and such.

Blackout was my first picked up feature and I had for the first time ever used BOLD slugs...being a little superstitious, you can bet I will always use that now!  

As far as harsh critique goes, I have learned not to comment at all on a script I didn't like unless I was asked to read it. No one seemed to appreciate when I didn't have much but praise to give.  


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There's a big difference between 'trashing a script' and 'trashing the author'. If a script has no merit whatsoever, as in, EVERYTHING sucks, yes, the writer needs to know that, BUT the writer needs to know WHY. If the writer is new, as in no posts and a script that hints at a first effort, then comments should be addressed accordingly.

Nobody, likes negative feedback. Writers need to seperate themselves from their script. For a newbie, that's also something that needs to be learned. Now, if the comments are directed at the writer, well, that's a different story. I don't think there is any call for that.
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Quoted from Eoin
Writers need to separate themselves from their script. For a newbie, that's also something that needs to be learned. Now, if the comments are directed at the writer, well, that's a different story. I don't think there is any call for that.


I understand you and I agree; however, so many writers put their lifeblood into scripts that (even with the common logic their brain tells them) still, they are often too sensitive because they truly can't detach from the words or perhaps it's the intent behind the words that's the killer.

On this note I want to share part of an interview with Jack Lemmon where he discusses his inability to detach himself from the role he played.



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I think you guys are missing the point her again.

The scripts in question - the ones that were "trashed" most likely were written, conceived, and posted within hours.  It's obvious little thought and most likely no editing or proofreading took place.

And this is the big issue - for me, at least.  It's a waste of everyone's time, especially when the majority of these writers never once post any replies to their feedback and don't post feedback for anyone else either.

I thin these are the only circumstances I'm aware of when I've trashed a script without following that up with advice and help.
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The scripts in question - the ones that were "trashed" most likely were written, conceived, and posted within hours.  It's obvious little thought and most likely no editing or proofreading took place.


You have absolutely, positively no way of knowing any of this.

Your assumptions might be entirely wrong -- which makes them even more cruel, in a way.  That is the point you are missing.

And it is generally just the "faceless" new guys that get such disrespectful treatment.

Nobody tells Phil his script is like a dog rolling in diarrhea -- even if it is!  None of us would dream of speaking (or posting) to another regular member like that.


And it is not just about you, Jeff.  Nearly everyone is guilty of this at one time or another, and we are making an attempt to change it.


Hey, it's my tiny, little IMDb!

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And it is not just about you, Jeff.  Nearly everyone is guilty of this at one time or another, and we are making an attempt to change it.


I hope that's true, Bert, as I feel like I've been singled out here repeatedly, even right now with you quoting one of my "trashing" comments.

I'll do my best to adhere to these implementations, most likely by avoiding feedback in general, but I will say this again and leave it at that.

If a script sucks, and I mean downright sucks, it should be fair game to what it deserves...and it doesn't deserve much respect, IMO.

Same goes for anything, be it a movie, a book, a product, a restaurant, an outfit, you name it.

Kid gloves are fine in many situations, but definitely not all.

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I hope the things settle down and everyone tries to get along and stick to the rules, if they come to fruit.

I think we should always think, would I say this to the authors face or am I just hiding behind my computer?  I can speak from personal experience and say that having your script bashed is quite hurtful. we all want feedback or we wouldn't post but there's ways to say things and 'this is terrible' and 'you need schooling' isn't the way to do it in my opinion.  Sometimes I think people can't get past format and grammar to see the story  that the author might have put a lot of thought into.

By the way, I'm not aiming this at anyone as I always sit on the fence and try not to take sides lol.  Life's too short to bitch people over the internet.


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Quoted from Dreamscale


I hope that's true, Bert, as I feel like I've been singled out here repeatedly, even right now with you quoting one of my "trashing" comments.

I'll do my best to adhere to these implementations, most likely by avoiding feedback in general, but I will say this again and leave it at that.

If a script sucks, and I mean downright sucks, it should be fair game to what it deserves...and it doesn't deserve much respect, IMO.

Same goes for anything, be it a movie, a book, a product, a restaurant, an outfit, you name it.

Kid gloves are fine in many situations, but definitely not all.



Jeff

SHUT THE FUCK UP!

You feel singled out because you behave badly. It's that simple.   Live with it.
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I think there is a very fine line between criticism and insulting someone's work. It's why you should always choose your words carefully when reviewing something that someone has put effort and thought into. Instead of simply saying "This is trash", saying "This needs work", and stating some reasons why, makes a huge difference. I think you should always try to encourage those who give it there all, even if you detest their work. After all, everybody's gotta start somewhere.
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There's no difference between trashing a script and trashing an author.  

You don't do EITHER!  Nothing deserves to be trashed based simply on your own opinion.  You offer constructive criticism.

As someone stated above, if a script is obviously too bad for words, you refrain from making comment unless you are willing to help the author.  If the script is openly offensive, racist, sexist, gross and the obvious work of a childish writer, then have enough sense to keep your distance from that person and not stir the pot.  This person will obviously  not care to hear your thoughts.

And...  

If a script is a piece of sh*t, it doesn't deserve to be called a piece of sh*t to the author's face.  It deserves thought out suggestions for a serious overhaul and rewrite.  It's all in the approach.    

As much as I hate Michael Bay, I wouldn't walk up to him and say "I hated Transformers 4.  It was a real piece of sh*t.  I really really hated it.  Just my two cents.  Food for thought.  Take my suggestions with the grain of salt and good luck with your next movie."

Bay would tell you to go screw.  Then you would walk off and tell your friends what a rude and unreasonable jerk he was, go to Imdb and spend the rest of the night trashing him with other site members.

Think about it.  


  
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Jack, I want disagree on one thing, and this is just from my personal perspective. When someone stops reading my script, and they tell me what page they stopped, this is about the MOST useful feedback there is. Even if they say absolutely nothing else. In fact, I recently sent out a script to some people privately for a read. And my only request was that they tell me the points where the wanted to stop reading.

Let's say someone stops at page 2, as you mentioned. That suggests the problem is writing or format skill. If the writing is pretty good, even if the story has not grabbed the reader by page 2, he'll usually give you the benefit of the doubt for a while and keep reading. So if he stopped on 2, that tells you where you are and what you may need to learn to get past that.

There just isn't enough time to read every script, especially people you don't know, who don't participate here. Sometimes I've read the first 10 pages, given the writer some useful feedback, and stopped just because I didn't have time to read a feature. But I hoped that I gave him something useful for the what I did read.
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Nearly everyone is guilty of this at one time or another, and we are making an attempt to change it.


Given enough time on the boards, everyone will slam someone's script.  In Jeff's case, however, he seems to do it the majority of the time.  Whether it's his dog rolling in diahrea comment or his I stopped reading after half a page comment, these aren't at all constructive.  Balt wasn't this vindictive in his reviews.

I remember Jeff once pm'ing me, asking why I never finished reading any of his features (I probably stopped after fifteen or twenty pages).  He acted like I did something wrong... and now he's stopping after half a page?  

And bitching about it?

Seriously?

The One Missing Finger was a badly written script.  I'm going to guess that it was Kamil's first script.  And while there were problems with it, there was a decent story in it.  Unfortunately, some people didn't see that.

Maybe they chose not to see it.

The only reason why I even saw Jeff's comments was because of a recent FB conversation that started with "Jeff is at it again."  That made me remove the killfile I place on him.  I've since put it back up as he has nothing I feel is worth reading.


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Jeff

SHUT THE FUCK UP!

You feel singled out because you behave badly. It's that simple.   Live with it.


That's very mature of you Cornhole...not cool at all.

Right back at ya!

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http://scriptshadow.blogspot.com/

"Phil is a small blue puppet with shaggy yellow hair and a tired disposition.”

Ok, off topic, sorry. I just read this on scriptshadow, and laughed for two minutes. Hope no one minds my posting here. Remove post as needed.

That description was apparently in a recently optioned script. Come on, that gives anyone hope!
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That's very mature of you Cornhole...not cool at all.

Right back at ya!



Well Jeff I'm sick and tired of hearing you whine about how you should be allowed to put other people down on the board.  What a fucking perverted way of dealing with the world.      
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And there's Phil again...how nice.

Phil, I remember alot of PM's from you and as I mentioned the other night, I don't think you'd want those made public, would you?

To call the majority of my feedback useless or thrashing is ludicrous, simply put.

You want to keep pointing the finger and acting so innocent, you go ahead if it makes you feel better, but rest assured I'll continue to reply and if you do want to make some things we both know to be true, public, I'm all for it, Phil.  You just say the word...
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And there's Phil again...how nice.

Phil, I remember alot of PM's from you and as I mentioned the other night, I don't think you'd want those made public, would you?

To call the majority of my feedback useless or thrashing is ludicrous, simply put.

You want to keep pointing the finger and acting so innocent, you go ahead if it makes you feel better, but rest assured I'll continue to reply and if you do want to make some things we both know to be true, public, I'm all for it, Phil.  You just say the word...


We know other people do this Jeff.   However, they aren't the ones saying they should be able to do it.  And they aren't saying they should be able to do it because other people do it either.  What a lame argument.

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Well Jeff I'm sick and tired of hearing you whine about how you should be allowed to put other people down on the board.  What a fucking perverted way of dealing with the world.      


Well, Michael, there you go again...singling me out and putting words in my mouth and now even telling me my feelings?  Really?

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Well, Michael, there you go again...singling me out and putting words in my mouth and now even telling me my feelings?  Really?



Believe me Jeff, I don't have to put words in your mouth.  You have plenty there and there's room for a couple of feet too.
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Lame argument?  What argument is that?

I'm refering to Mr. Innocent Phil bringing up shit about me, when he knows damn well he's probably the worst offender in SS's history.  nd I'm talking about trashing scripts, trashing writers, and purposely trying to start fights and get people kicked off SS.

So many small, narrow minds here.  Sad...really sad.
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So many small, narrow minds here.  Sad...really sad.


Yes, Jeff. Very sad.
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Jeff, none of my business, but PMs should always be kept private, even if a friendship turns sour. Confidence is still confidence, and something sent privately should remain private. I'm not taking sides, just saying PMs should be off limits. Agreed?
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AHEM!

Not a fan of what you guys are doing to my little thread, here.

Just saying...


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Totally agreed, Kev.  You hopefully saw that Phil was the one who brought up something about a private PM I sent him years ago.

Why didn't you post this to Phil?

It's exactly what I'm talking about and it's getting out of hand.
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looks like this discussion is getting a little out of hand. it's an interesting topic nevertheless.

as someone who isn't completely new nor a veteran of the boards, i appreciate the balance that each member brings to SS. while some are harsh, that's okay. they act as though they're a hollywood producer and that's something that all screenwriters are going to have to deal with. i wouldnt call them a d ick because they're bringing an essential viewpoint to the boards. grammar, spelling, format, etc are all things that need to be perfect if you're hoping to write professionally. luckily, not all of the mods/veterans act this way. you have other "seniors" are much more gentler, kind, and provide an entirely new viewpoint of a script. often times, i receive more critiques about my story from these people (rather than format), and that's just as helpful.

so the key here is balance. but you should also be honest. if you want to tell michael bay that his films smell worse than a contraceptive sponge in roseanne barr's snatch...go for it. but understand that you should say the same thing to his face, as you would behind a computer. i try to do the same in my reviews. if i wouldnt say it in person, that i won't write it.

granted, i've been guilty of trashing a few scripts and it's probably something we should all try to work on. often times it's difficult to determine if someone's just plain stupid or ignorant (until their first post). yet it's easy to tell when someone has put little thought into their script and posted it on the boards, fifteen minutes after writing. if you don't proof read your scripts and it's riddled with basic spelling mistakes, then you deserve to be ragged on a bit.


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As much as I hate Michael Bay, I wouldn't walk up to him and say "I hated Transformers 4.  It was a real piece of sh*t.  I really really hated it.  Just my two cents.  Food for thought.  Take my suggestions with the grain of salt and good luck with your next movie."

Bay would tell you to go screw.  Then you would walk off and tell your friends what a rude and unreasonable jerk he was, go to Imdb and spend the rest of the night trashing him with other site members.


Changing the subject a bit...

A couple of years back, I went to a special tasting of all the Sam Adams' beer.  Everyone that the Boston Brewing Company produced was there.  After drinking dangerous amounts of the Utopias (story for another day), I sampled the Sam Adams Scotch Ale.  I didn't like it.

Jim Koch, the president of the Boston Brewing Company was there.  And I told him that his scotch ale was not a good one.  I spent a few minutes explaining (in great detail) why it wasn't a good example of a scotch ale.  Did he change his recipe after our discussion?  Of course not; don't be stupid.  But he did listen to me and he asked me questions and this humble little homebrewer had the full attention of one of the biggest names on the American craftbrewing scene.

If I just said his scotch ale sucked, that would've been the end of the discussion.  And he'd never listen to me again if I ever caught his ear.

Irish diplomacy is the ability to tell someone to go to hell in such a way that he looks forward to the trip.  Some people need to learn this.


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AHEM!

Not a fan of what you guys are doing to my little thread, here.

Just saying...


Sorry bert.  

But I put a lot of time and energy into trying to get new people to come to the boards only to have them driven away by massively bad treatment.   If you're wondering why I stopped doing it - that's the reason.  

I happen to care about the Simply Script boards and the people here - especially the ones that are too meek to defend themselves.  I don't want to see people bullied - and if I have to bully a bully to stop that - then I will.

This is the scenario I'd like for you to consider - it may seem a bit extreme but it could easily happen and has happened to other sites.  Say a young, emotionally unstable, screenwriter posts to this site - and say his script is terrible.   Say that he gets piled on and some people say very insulting things.  Say that he decides to kill himself over the comments.   Say he leaves a note saying that it was this feedback that spurred him on and the site ends up in the center of a controversy about cyber-bullying.   How would you feel then if you were involved in the pile-up?  
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You've pointed out one of the points I'm trying to make.

When you tackle a read and do an exchange with another writer, you're aggreeing to read their entire script and do a helpful review.  You might not wanna read more than 15 pages, or think it's crap, but you do it anyway.  You suck it up, forget your pride for an hour or so and you do it.  If you're not willing to do that, or you aren't sure you can do that, then don't agree to do it.

No matter where your heart is, or if you have the best of intentions, nobody wants to hear that you stopped reading their script by page 15.  You stick it out and offer some positive feedback on what did work.  I bet every script on this site has at least a few good things worth mentioning.  Dialogue, character, set-up, etc.

You don't just mention what didn't work and leave the author hanging.  When you do this, the writer's first instinct is to lash back or simply get frustrated and give up with their project.    

It's not my business what's going on between Phil and Jeff, but I've been on the receiving end of this situation a few times myself.  As some of us have.

I do think that a refusal to finish someone's script and focusing on the negative and forgetting the positive (not mentioning anything at all positive) will leave that person feeling angry and frustrated.  Nothing good will come of it and you will end up in an endless argument.    

I've been guilty of tackling too many exchanges at once and forgetting to review some scripts and burning the other authors.  A couple have lashed out at me over the years, but it was my own fault.  If I agreed to do an exchange, I should've made it a priority to read their scripts in their entirety.  Whether I wanted to or not.

And if I hated the script after page 2 or 3, I would read it anyways because that's what I agreed to do.  For the most part, I haven't been crazy about a lot of scripts, but they all had something that made me smile, laugh or made me think.  

Then you can mention the problem areas that kept you from being more involved in the script.  When you're done with the script, I know you will find at least ONE THING positive to say.  When you attempt to be positive, the author won't take personal offense and be more receptive to tackling the problem areas in their script.

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I actually don't think it's wrong to stop reading a script halfway through. If it were a producer reading the script, he/she would do the same.

I'm not going to labor through the script, pointing out every error, if the reader isn't going to return to the boards. unfortunately that happens...a lot. maybe there should be a new guideline where the poster has to be a registered member before posting his/her script? just an idea.

a healthy medium is to to write a little bit and tell the author that if he/she returns, then the reader will go into a much more in depth review. i see it happen often and i think that's the way to go.


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The scripts in question - the ones that were "trashed" most likely were written, conceived, and posted within hours.  It's obvious little thought and most likely no editing or proofreading took place.

And this is the big issue - for me, at least.  It's a waste of everyone's time, especially when the majority of these writers never once post any replies to their feedback and don't post feedback for anyone else either.


Exactly.  It is a waste of everyone's time.  The easiest way to avoid that script wasting even more people's time is not to comment on it.  A negative review bumps a thread the same way a positive one does.

If the script is a waste of one's time to read, why in the heck would one waste more time by writing a review of it?
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looks like this discussion is getting a little out of hand. it's an interesting topic nevertheless.

as someone who isn't completely new nor a veteran of the boards, i appreciate the balance that each member brings to SS. while some are harsh, that's okay. they act as though they're a hollywood producer and that's something that all screenwriters are going to have to deal with. i wouldnt call them a d ick because they're bringing an essential viewpoint to the boards. grammar, spelling, format, etc are all things that need to be perfect if you're hoping to write professionally. luckily, not all of the mods/veterans act this way. you have other "seniors" are much more gentler, kind, and provide an entirely new viewpoint of a script. often times, i receive more critiques about my story from these people (rather than format), and that's just as helpful.

so the key here is balance. but you should also be honest. if you want to tell michael bay that his films smell worse than a contraceptive sponge in roseanne barr's snatch...go for it. but understand that you should say the same thing to his face, as you would behind a computer. i try to do the same in my reviews. if i wouldnt say it in person, that i won't write it.

granted, i've been guilty of trashing a few scripts and it's probably something we should all try to work on. often times it's difficult to determine if someone's just plain stupid or ignorant (until their first post). yet it's easy to tell when someone has put little thought into their script and posted it on the boards, fifteen minutes after writing. if you don't proof read your scripts and it's riddled with basic spelling mistakes, then you deserve to be ragged on a bit.


Come on.  You're still missing my point.  NOBODY deserves to get ragged on, regardless of the quality.  You don't rag on anybody, or cut hateful one-liners at their expense because you hate their script.  You have to watch what you say to people or you're inviting them to lash out at you.  And when they lash out at you, you have no right to get angry about it.  You invited trouble.  It's that simple.
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No matter where your heart is, or if you have the best of intentions, nobody wants to hear that you stopped reading their script by page 15.  You stick it out and offer some positive feedback on what did work.  I bet every script on this site has at least a few good things worth mentioning.  Dialogue, character, set-up, etc.


I'm going to disagree with you on this Jack.  I'm under no obligation to read a script from start to finish (a big reason why I don't do script exchanges).  If you submit a bad script to a director/producer/agent/whatever, do you think they'll finish it if it's not good?

When I stop after the first twenty pages, I explain why.  Maybe it's poor characterization, or dialog and just a terrible story.  Why read the rest of it?  It's not going to get better.  And since no one, here, gets paid to read the scripts, I did that twenty page read and review as a favor.

The following is a review of someone's script I didn't finish:


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[Author's name], when you asked me to look at this script, I told you I wasn't fond of slasher films; you told me it wasn't one.  And lo and behold, five people are brutally murdered by some lunatic in the first 3.5 pages.  This was a big turn off for me.

I got up to page 35 before I stopped reading.  After the initial massacre, we have another 30+ pages of dragged out, artificial and tiresome dialog by a handful of characters whose names I can't even remember.  What is the point of all that?

You have to trim a lot of fat from this script.  And fix your upper margin; that's just cheating the page count and the reader.


The first script I ever read here was so bad that I nearly left the boards.  I chose not to review it as I didn't know what to say.  Saying, "This script stinks like a dog rolling in shit," would've been extremely misappropriate.


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And yes...

I've been guilty of ragging on this one really bad, bad script.  It was that bad.  But I realized that it was wrong to do that and am sorry I did it.

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Come on.  You're still missing my point.  NOBODY deserves to get ragged on, regardless of the quality.  You don't rag on anybody, or cut hateful one-liners at their expense because you hate their script.  You have to watch what you say to people or you're inviting them to lash out at you.  And when they lash out at you, you have no right to get angry about it.  You invited trouble.  It's that simple.


But I don't get angry when they lash back. Instead, I prove my point.

If you want to tell everyone that their script is amazing, then go for it. But you're not helping them. I've read many scripts on the boards where literally NOTHING works. I'm not encouraging people to trash other people's scripts, but if they suck, you should tell them (in an appropriate way of course)


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I have been reading the points from all you guys, good stuff, but I just want to pop back on here to re-emphasize what is the main issue here, from my point of view, and why I even brought this up in the first place.

The function of this board today is a little different than it was just a few years ago.

More traffic, more people, more scripts getting found.

The main point:  At the heart of all this, I am just trying to raise the "professionalism" of the boards a bit and make it a little more welcoming to newcomers.  Not to stifle people.

I think (hope) these are goals that everyone can (mostly) agree with.


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Phil.  If you don't do script exchanges, why are you reading that person's script?  

You're giving yourself carte blanche to drop in on a script's forum and tell someone how much you hated their script without having the task of reading their entire script.  I find that a bit lazy.  And an excuse to make your opinions known.  I've been guilty of this from time to time, but I catch myself doing it.  

The real helpful reviews come from those who agree to the exchanges.   But to jump from forum to forum, leaving nasty remarks is a cop out and a sign of insecurity and is counter-productive for not only you, but the author of the script you're reviewing.

And as someone mentioned earlier, if you can't find one good thing to say about a script, then it's better to not say anything at all.

But I do stand behind my belief that most scripts here have at least one good thing working for them.







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But I don't get angry when they lash back. Instead, I prove my point.

If you want to tell everyone that their script is amazing, then go for it. But you're not helping them. I've read many scripts on the boards where literally NOTHING works. I'm not encouraging people to trash other people's scripts, but if they suck, you should tell them (in an appropriate way of course)


In an appropriate way.  Exactly.  I agree.  And that's the point I'm trying to make
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Phil.  If you don't do script exchanges, why are you reading that person's script?  

You're giving yourself carte blanche to drop in on a script's forum and tell someone how much you hated their script without having the task of reading their entire script.  I find that a bit lazy.  And an excuse to make your opinions known.  I've been guilty of this from time to time, but I catch myself doing it.  

The real helpful reviews come from those who agree to the exchanges.   But to jump from forum to forum, leaving nasty remarks is a cop out and a sign of insecurity and is counter-productive for not only you, but the author of the script you're reviewing.

And as someone mentioned earlier, if you can't find one good thing to say about a script, then it's better to not say anything at all.

But I do stand behind my belief that most scripts here have at least one good thing working for them.


Jack,

I can completely understand where you are coming from.  However, a long time ago in a thread far far away - as a group - we came to the conclusion that partial reads are ok as long as you are constructive about why you stopped reading.    I know that constructive part probably hasn't been strictly enforced but maybe it will be now.
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I can just imagine the situation where a reader providing feedback is required to read the entire script, every time and provide detailed feedback.  Sure...right...

The vast majority of times I provide feedback after not reading the entire script details exactly why I'm not going to read the entire script.  IT also provides detailed feedback about mistakes on display.  I just can't for the life of me see how that's not helpful feedback that any writer should be very happy to receive for free.

Going into a script exchange, which I have done numerous times, is a real hit and miss situation, usually a big miss for me, as the amount of feedback I provide far outweighs what i get in return, but what can you do?

I'd love t post some "anonymous" quotes here from certain people, but fuck it...why?  What good is it going to do at this point?

I'm out.  Enjoy yourselves...
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Some of the best public feedback I have received is from people who didn't finish my script because they were not thrilled with the story. I don't think Rick ever finishes my scripts, but he takes the time to give very useful critiques. Others go ahead and finish as a favor, even though they'd rather not, and I appreciate both types of reviews.

The helpful thing for me is to know where the reader stopped. Then you know where to focus on rewrite.
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Jack, there was a time when we didn't do exchanges (atleast not these public declarations of "I'll read yours if you read mine").  We just read the scripts.  At the years passed, some people started getting a little mercenary with it.  I went along with it for a while but I got tired of people's comments being "Great script.  Love to see it on the screen."  Many times, they didn't recipricate at all.

Usually, when I read a script now it's because it's a friend's script or the logline grabs me.  I like reading them.  Lastely, I've only had time to read shorts, but I don't expect reads back.  Before you continue thinking that I'm here just to slam the scripts, I recommend that you go through my history and see my reviews on other scripts.  I'm fair and honest in my reviews, whether they be positive or negative.

My opinions on thoise scripts I never finished are just as valid.  If your characters are two-dimensional and lifeless, and they all sound alike in the first twenty pages, they're not going to change after that.  And should I waste my time after that.  If you want me to read past page twenty of your script, give me a reason.  Make me want to read past twenty.

What did you think of that script review I posted a little while ago?  Assuming I wasn't lying in what I wrote, do you think reading/commenting further would've helped that writer?



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The real helpful reviews come from those who agree to the exchanges.   But to jump from forum to forum, leaving nasty remarks is a cop out and a sign of insecurity and is counter-productive for not only you, but the author of the script you're reviewing.


If someone wants to read my scripts, they're more than welcome to.  I've seen people write innacurate reviews so they can get their scripts read.  And then they go ballistic when they get a bad revgiew.  With me, that doesn't happen.  There's a lot less pressure this way


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And as someone mentioned earlier, if you can't find one good thing to say about a script, then it's better to not say anything at all.

But I do stand behind my belief that most scripts here have at least one good thing working for them.


If you go back to the script that started this shitstorm, you'll see that I posted something positive and constructive.  I didn't just write, "Slap your Momma for raising such a shitty writer."


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Irish diplomacy is the ability to tell someone to go to hell in such a way that he looks forward to the trip.  Some people need to learn this.


Everyone go to hell!!! Especially if your french!


Cool it works

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Okay.  Here's the deal boys.  

Jeff, no I'm not targeting you nor have I ever been targeting you.  But you've been out of line with some of your comments.

Phil, you're the worst offender of this on simplyscripts.com and the number one reason I left for so long.  To call out Jeff is like the pot calling the kettle black.


The reason you guys have been arguing is because that lack of encouraging feedback that I've been talking about.  It escalates and blows out of proportion.

  


          
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Can you give me some examples of this Jack?


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Can you give me some examples of this Jack?l


Please don't, Jack.  That is not why I started this conversation.

I think we can all agree that nobody has been perfect about this in the past -- and I even include myself in that.

This thread is about minor tweaks to how we do things going forward.

Nobody is interested in the "been there-done that" argument.  [And if you are, please seek help..]

Thanks all.


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Oh, sorry Bert.  I'm done now.  Just saw your post.  
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I think we can all agree that nobody has been perfect about this in the past -- and I even include myself in that.

I challenge you to find one single "ugly" post from Cindy!     


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I challenge you to find one single "ugly" post from Cindy!     


I notice the challenge was not to find one from YOU haha.

Seriously, guys.  This thread, which I am considering locking up soon, was all about collecting your thoughts to improve the SimplyScripts site for everyone, both the vets and potential new guys.

Not for pointing fingers or giving examples of bad behavior.

Please no more of that.


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And, for the record, the lovely and talented Ms. Keller does have a post that I would delete had she made it today.

Check out "Schizophrenic Lesbians."

When I said nobody, I meant nobody.

But that's it!!  No more examples  


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I say lock it up now. My opinion. I think you have enough info Bert.


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Pass the popcorn!!

Yep, a happy medium going forward so we can all get the feedback we need without the urge to find a dark corner and a box of Kleenex Easy-peasy, guys!
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i always say - don't tell me my script sucks. tell me WHY it sucks.

that is all.  
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Yep, a happy medium going forward so we can all get the feedback we need without the urge to find a dark corner and a box of Kleenex Easy-peasy, guys!




Sorry rdhay, I couldn't help myself.


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Sorry rdhay, I couldn't help myself.


Haha!! Ah, fair enough. I think I walked right into that one...
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and they all lived happily ever after.... the end.

For now

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Bit late to the party but... if you can't say anything constructive, don't say anything.


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Bit late to the party but... if you can't say anything constructive, don't say anything.


Does "constructive" mean only positive or falsely positive feedback?  Is that really where you guys want to go?  Back to the, "this was a good read.  Not bad at all.  I enjoyed it.  thanks."?

Does that help?  Really?  Wow...just wow...
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Jeff,

If you don't understand the point of this discussion and the implications of the policy change by now - then perhaps you never will.  So, I'm not going to explain it again.  Instead I'll say you should study bert's posts.  If you still don't understand perhaps you can find someone who has a better grasp of the English language to explain the harder words.    
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Does "constructive" mean only positive or falsely positive feedback?  Is that really where you guys want to go?  Back to the, "this was a good read.  Not bad at all.  I enjoyed it.  thanks."?

Does that help?  Really?  Wow...just wow...


Sigh...One more time, it is about delivering NEGATIVE feedback to a really poor script in a manner that is NOT EMBARRASSING to the site as a whole.  Particularly to new, unknown authors who might be posting their first script ever.

It is time for that to stop.

There is a good example going on here:

http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?m-1329174324/

By way of contrast, this thread makes it look as if this is a site full of lunatics:

http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-short/m-1328914932/

Moving forward, we are shooting for more of the former, less of the latter.


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Respectful criticism is possible.
It may take longer to write or word a review, but it would benefit the writer a lot more. Unless any reader has plans on becoming a movie critic, their review should concentrate on the script at hand, not making unfunny wise cracks.

I dont think the problem lay with negative feedback, it's just how it is delivered. If you're told your script is cack, the worst way to discover this is by someone making jokes about it.

The blow can be softened with more respectful words, perhaps?




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Yes it can, Scoob.  You're completely correct.
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Alright, people seem to be grooving on Scoob's vibe, so that is probably as good a place to wrap this up as any.

Locking this puppy down for now.

Thanks to all for their input.  A rocky trail, for sure, but I think helpful all told.


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